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Tuesday, October 8, 2019

Bury The Truth by Zack Akers – Filmed - post author Don

Bury The Truth (4 pages (Short, Thriller) pdf format) by Zack Akers

Two friends bury a body deep in the woods. But can they bury the truth?

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Alex
October 8th, 2019 at 1:32 pm

The storytelling did work. There are few production issues although, imo, no problem, since the business will clearly identify that those issues are connected to your resources.

I would have loved to see the original ending – say a shot from the side how he spits on the grave. Maybe sometimes the first idea is the most organic and honest, not saying that it didn’t work as is, just a matter of taste thing perhaps.

However, the story gave it the needed value and I wouldn’t say that lightly. I hope you had fun.

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