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Monday, December 26, 2016

Evil Karma by Warren Duncan filmed! - posted by Don

Evil Karma (6 page horror in pdf format by Warren Duncan

An evil man pays for the sins of his past.

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3 Comments so far

1.

A.Cole
December 26th, 2016 at 5:29 pm

Solid idea…..but the short film is about 3 mins too long. Too many unnecessary shots that drag. But this is a solid effort. I don’t want to seem like a “hater” bc I definetly am not.

2.

tyna
December 26th, 2016 at 5:53 pm

I recognized from the script and also agreed with A.Cole it can be edited shorter and last scene went in a flash i think that is one of the most important point in the movie. Overall it interpreted the script well the directing and camera movements works well.

3.

Warren
December 27th, 2016 at 12:27 pm

Thanks for checking it out.

I also felt it was quite a long 7 minutes but overall I am happy with the end result.

The ending is not quite as I wrote it and do feel even the 2 second inclusion of the actual ending would have been a more satisfying conclusion.

But again, it’s another produced film and another IMDb credit so who can complain:)

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