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STAR WARS : CHAPTER 1 : THREADS OF DESTINY
WRITTEN BY:
Michael Banno
&
Jeff Long
&
Matt Davis
THIRD DRAFT: 2005-08-08
"A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...."
EXT. SPACE
The backdrop of stars gives us our opening scroll.
CHAPTER I
THREADS OF DESTINY
Years after the death of the Emperor and the restoration of the Republic, the
galaxy is once again embroiled in war.
The ancient Skenvi Empire, now free from Imperial control, has become violently
expansionist. Only the New Republic stands between it and the rest of the galaxy,
and the two powers have fought each other to a standstill.
With the war going nowhere, the Skenvi seek to control the the planet Coreign, the
sole provider of a valuable military resource. In response, the Republic has
approached Coreign with an offer of annexation…
PAN DOWN:
1. EXT. SPACE
A space battle between newly restored Jedi Starfighters along with Republic X-
Wings, against Skenvi Bandit Fighters is taking place. There are two specific Jedi
that are flying around. Jedi Knight SORAN DARR is in a blue Starfighter while his
Jedi apprentice, RAVEN DARKHAM is in a red one.
As Raven exchanges fire with an incoming Skenvi Fighter, a second Skenvi Fighter
comes up behind. Soran pilots his Starfighter through the battle, on the tail of
another Bandit and spots Raven about to become spacedust.
SORAN
You've got one coming up behind you, Raven.
Raven destroys the Skenvi Fighter in front of him, but before he can turn his
Starfighter around to deal with the other, it also explodes as Soran flies through
the wreckage and passes overtop
of Raven's Starfighter.
SORAN
Be mindful of all things around you, not just what's in front of
you.
RAVEN
Sorry master.
As Soran flies off to fight his own battles, a Skenvi Fighter drops down in front
of Raven and he fires at it, missing. Another one drops down behind him, boxing him
in. Raven lifts his ship up,
allowing the laser fire from the Fighter behind him to destroy the Fighter in front
of him.
Raven does a flip and comes up behind the Skenvi Fighter that was behind him. He
fires at it and it explodes. Raven spots another Skenvi Fighter and gives chase.
Soran rolls his ship in a circle, laser shots from two Fighters zipping all around
him. Soran open fires and his shots hit both of the ships. He straightens his
Starship and turns away from the explosions, locating another Skenvi Fighter to
attack.
All around space, we see that this battle is pretty much the same. Jedi
Starfighters and Republic X-Wings duking it out with Skenvi Bandit Fighters. One
Skenvi Fighter, We'll call him Expert Skenvi Fighter, flies through the battle and
manages to take out two X-Wings and even a Jedi Starfighter. This Skenvi Fighter is
marked with two burn marks, one on either side of his ship.
Raven spots the Expert Skenvi Fighter and gives chase.
RAVEN
This one's mine.
He keeps with it as it zooms around, twisting and turning around wreckage and other
ships, trying to loose him. The Expert Fighter flips up and lands behind Raven,
firing, but Raven dodges to the side, escaping the blasts, and then also pulls up
behind, once again coming up behind the Fighter. He fires at it, but it dodges his
shots. Two other Skenvi Bandit Fighters arrive and Raven has to break away from his
attack to dodge shots.
An X-Wing flies by and fires, destroying one of the Skenvi Fighters that was on
Raven. It continues flying on, entering a fight with another Skenvi Fighter.
Raven takes out the second Skenvi Fighter and flies around through the battle until
he locates the Expert Skenvi Fighter that he had been chasing earlier and goes
after him again.
RAVEN
You aren't getting away that easily.
Elsewhere in the battle, Soran is avoiding laser blasts from two pursuing Skenvi
Fighters. He flies in a corkscrew manner to dodge the shots. As he straightens
himself up, he maneuvers so he is heading towards the sides of the Skenvi Fighters.
He lets loose dozens of laser shots, destroying two of the three Fighters. The
third avoids the shots and goes to spin up behind Soran. The wreckage from a nearby
exploding ship blasts right into the Skenvi Fighter's path and causes it to explode
as it collides with the wreckage.
Raven continues chasing the Expert Skenvi Fighter through the battle, dodging shots
and floating wreckage. The Fighter goes to fire at an X-Wing in front of it, but
Soran rams the Expert Fighter
from below, sending it straight up. Raven locks on and fires, blowing it up.
RAVEN
Thank you, Master Soran. I was having trouble with that one.
SORAN
I know. I could sense your feelings of frustration.
RAVEN
Sorry, master. I tried not to let them control me.
SORAN
Your feelings will always be a part of you. The true test of a Jedi is learning to
control them.
The surviving X-Wings and Jedi Starfighters take out the last of the Skenvi Bandit
Fighters.
SORAN
Let's go home.
The battle is over. The survivors begin their journey back to Yavin.
2. INT. YAVIN JEDI TEMPLE - HANGER BAY - DAY
The Jedi Starfighters have landed in the Hanger bay. Raven and Soran step out of
their Fighters and walk towards each other. We see that Soran is a man in his early
30's and Raven is a young man in his late teens.
A group of Repair Droids scatter around as they prepare to refuel the ships and fix
any damages. As Raven approaches Soran, he trips over one of the scattering droids
and catches his balance.
RAVEN
Sorry.
The droid beeps and whistles at him angrily and continues on its way. Raven reaches
Soran and the two walk towards the Temple Hallway.
SORAN
I know I lectured you a bit back there, but despite your errors you performed very
well. You've proven that you can handle yourself in a dogfight.
RAVEN
Thank you, Master.
SORAN
If you continue doing so well, it won't be much longer until
you're ready for the Trials.
Raven smiles proudly. They reach the main hallway.
SORAN
It appears as if we have some free time. I suggest you get some rest; you never
know what you'll be needed for next.
Raven nods his head and walks off in the direction of his room.
3. INT. YAVIN JEDI TEMPLE - RAVEN'S ROOM
Raven lays down on his bed to take a small nap. His eyes close and suddenly we
FLASH TO:
4. EXT. GRASSY MEADOW - DAY
Raven is standing in a field, looking around. He is confused by this. He notices a
huge beautiful peaceful city in the distance with a large Palace at one end.
FLASH TO:
5. INT. YAVIN JEDI TEMPLE - RAVEN'S ROOM
Raven opens his eyes and wakes up. He looks around to see that he is in his room.
It must have been a dream. But then he notices what appears to be a young Jedi girl
in her early teens, staring at him from the doorway. Her hair is tied into a
ponytail and she is dressed in Jedi clothes.
GIRL
Your future lies with me.
The mysterious girl suddenly vanishes into thin air as Jedi Knight SETH RE'X walks
in.
SETH
Are you ok? You look a bit dazed.
Raven shakes his head and focuses his eyes on Seth.
RAVEN
I'm fine, Seth.
SETH
Good, because Soran Darr wants you to meet him at the Council
Chamber.
RAVEN
Why?
SETH
No idea. He just sent me to inform you.
RAVEN
Thanks.
Seth nods his head and leaves. Raven stands up, yawns and stretches, then leaves as
well.
6. INT. YAVIN JEDI TEMPLE - COUNCIL CHAMBER ENTRY HALL
Raven walks up to Soran. Soran turns to spot him.
SORAN
There you are.
RAVEN
Why are we here, Master?
SORAN
I do not know myself, but we will find out soon
enough.
They walk into the room as the giant oak doors open. Inside are four Jedi Masters
seated in a circle. There is YOLLEN, an alien of Yoda's species that wears thick
glasses. Next to Yollen is KEAGLE. Across from them are SALINE and JORAN KORN.
JORAN KORN
The council has called you here to present you with an assignment. Recently, the
Republic has approached the planet Coreign with an offer of annexation. We have
been received enthusiastically, but the Council deems it prudent to send a Jedi as
an ambassador, in order to show our…eagerness for them to join.
(Pause)
Unfortunately, the Skenvi Empire has also approached Coreign with their own offer.
They are likely more concerned with the planet's resources, its unique ore, than
they are with its people.
Soran appears amused at this.
SORAN
(he cocks an eyebrow) Joran Korn, you and I both know that while the Republic cares
a great deal about its citizens, the only reason we chose to approach Coreign now
was because of the ore.
JORAN
True. Though I hope you'll be a bit more diplomatic when you meet with the royal
family. And remember the stakes here. If the Skenvi gain exclusive rights to
Coreign's ore, the Republic will be that much closer to losing this war.
SORAN
Don't remind me. I've been on the front lines. We're barely holding our own as it
is. (pause) Have you arranged transportation? I doubt our starfighters will make
for a comfortable trip.
JORAN KORN
We have hired a pilot to transport you there safely and quietly.
Soran bows.
SORAN
Then we'll be off.
JORAN KORN
May the Force be with you.
Soran and Raven turn and leave the Council Chambers.
7. INT. YAVIN JEDI TEMPLE - HALLWAY
Raven and Soran walk down the hallway.
RAVEN
Another mission, Master? This is overkill.
SORAN
I must admit, I did feel something in the Force when we returned,
hence my suggestion that you get some rest.
RAVEN
I was looking forward to continuing my studies.
SORAN
You will still be able to. A firm grasp of diplomacy can often be a Jedi's greatest
asset. Having the strength and skill to win a fight is not nearly as important as
being able to avoid one in the first place. And, I might remind you, you will be
tested on such things during your Trials. Practice such as this mission should
serve you well. Now go and pack your things; we will leave as soon as you're ready.
Raven turns down a separate hall, heading to his room.
8. INT. YAVIN JEDI TEMPLE - HANGAR BAY
THE STARSTREAM, a rusty, near run-down transport ship is resting in the Hanger. A
man in his later 30's stands near the ship. He spots the two Jedi and walks towards
them. This is KARUS KAHN.
KARUS
You two boys must be the Jedi I'm transporting.
He holds out his hand and shakes the hands of both Jedi.
KARUS
The name's Karus Kahn. I'm your pilot for this mission.
SORAN
I am Soran Darr. This is my apprentice, Raven Darkham.
KARUS
Nice to meet you both. If you'll follow me, we can be on our way.
The two Jedi follow Karus onto his ship, and plunk down on a comfy bench in a small
tight Passenger Compartment.
KARUS
You might want to buckle in for takeoff. The inertial compensators on this baby
aren't what they used to be.
Karus continues on to the cockpit. He straps himself into his seat and powers up
the ship. A few minutes later, the StarStream lifts off and zooms off through the
Yavin sky, heading for space.
9. EXT. COREIGN PALACE - ROYAL GARDEN - WATER FOUNTAIN - DAY
A woman sits on a bench near a fountain. It is QUEEN ERIN AD'LAH of Coreign. She
sits there staring at the water pooling at the bottom of the fountain, her mind
obviously elsewhere. We see a young girl, 14 years old, in a beautiful dress walk
up to her. She sits down with her mother. This is the princess of Coreign, ARIANNA
AD'LAH. The Queen looks up at her and smiles.
QUEEN ERIN
You look beautiful today, Arianna.
ARIANNA
(slightly smiling, embarrassed) You say that everyday, mother.
QUEEN ERIN
That's because you look beautiful everyday.
The Queen smiles to her daughter and Arianna blushes. The Princess turns to look at
her reflection in the water and stares off into space. Queen Erin notices.
QUEEN ERIN
What's wrong, sweetie?
ARIANNA
Sometimes I just wish there was something more to my life. I mean, everything about
my future is already decided for me. I'm to be Queen of Coreign. I'm to marry a
handsome young man from one of the noble Houses. It isn't that I don't like this
life; I do. It's just that, well…
QUEEN ERIN
(a sad smile crosses her face) You want to be something beyond what you were given.
(she sighs) I know how you feel. I never wanted to marry your father; I had it set
in my mind that I would fall in love with a man, and then marry him, regardless of
what my parents wanted.
ARIANNA
Your parents forced you to marry?
QUEEN ERIN
No. They gave me as long as I wanted to make the decision, and your father courted
me for nearly a year. In the end, I realized that I hadn't ever given Juster a
chance.
ARIANNA
So you married him after that?
QUEEN ERIN
Yes. And I found that he was everything I had hoped for, though it was nothing like
what I imagined it would be. (she sighs again) Sometimes, Arianna, we grow to love
the roles we are forced into in life. Everything may be given to you, but it is
what you do with what you are given that truly matters.
Arianna smiles at her mother, knowing she is right. Suddenly her smile fades.
QUEEN ERIN
Something else bothers you?
ARIANNA
Do you know that feeling you get when someone is watching you?
QUEEN ERIN
Yes. Why?
ARIANNA
It's the Skenvi ambassador. Whenever he's around, it's almost as if I can feel him
watching. Even if he's in a different room.
Queen Erin frowns, considering, but then chuckles as if shrugging off her
daughter's concerns.
QUEEN ERIN
I'm afraid this won't be the first unsavory character you'll be forced to deal
with. As Queen, it will be your responsibility to deal with such people, whether
you like them or not.
A Royal Guard approaches, interrupting any further conversation, and stands at
attention. His badge reads ‘TURVO'.
TURVO
The Ambassador from the Skenvi Empire is here to see you, m'lady.
Queen Erin faces Arianna.
QUEEN ERIN
How about you handle the matter, dear? It will be good for you to practice
negotiating with someone you dislike. (she smiles mischeviously) Perhaps it will
even irk his Lordship a bit when he finds that I haven't deigned to see him myself.
Arianna fidgets, uncomfortable with what her mother just said to her. Queen Erin
takes her hand gently and lovingly, calming her.
QUEEN ERIN
Everything will go fine.
Arianna nods and stands, turning to face Turvo.
ARIANNA
I will see him in the Main Hall.
The Guard bows and walks away.
10. INT. COREIGN PALACE - MAIN HALL
Standing around, admiring the artwork on the walls is LORD SIEGE, Ambassador of the
Skenvi Empire. He is in his late 20's and is dressed entirely in black. A door
opens and he turns to face Princess Arianna as she walks into the room.
ARIANNA
Hello, Ambassador. I am Princess Arianna. You asked for an
audience…
Lord Siege looks around the room, expecting the King or Queen to walk in at any
point.
LORD SIEGE
With the King and Queen, child. Are they otherwise occupied, or do my rank and
status earn me nothing more than calculated insults?
ARIANNA
They are busy attending to other matters and have sent me in their place.
LORD SIEGE
Other matters indeed. But I believe you're more than capable of speaking in your
parents' stead, my lady. I trust that they have come to a decision concerning my
proposal?
ARIANNA
My parents will be meeting with Jedi Knights from the New Republic today to discuss
Coreign joining the Republic, and if that happens, then we will have to sever our
connections with the Skenvi Empire.
LORD SIEGE
Ah, the vaunted freedoms of the New Republic. I see that sovereignty, however,
isn't one of them. The Empire, on the other hand, encourages all profitable trade
relationships, so long as our systems put Skenvi interests first.
ARIANNA
The Republic has our best interests at heart…While as far as I
can tell, the Skenvi are only interested in our minerals.
LORD SIEGE
You malign us, my lady. We fear for the health of your economy. The Republic is
small, and simply cannot provide you with the market you require. The Empire can,
but if you join the Republic and are forced to embargo us, the consequences for
your people will be disastrous.
ARIANNA
(unsure of her words) But there are other places we could sell it to, other…
Momentarily ignoring her, Lord Siege walks over to a small painting on one of the
walls.
LORD SIEGE
Fascinating, isn't it?
ARIANNA
I don't understand...
LORD SIEGE
No, perhaps you wouldn't. Allow me to explain. This is a painting of a battle from
your revolution, two centuries ago. A rebellion fought by your people and led by
your ancestors, to free Coreign from a line of brutal dictators.
ARIANNA
I know. I've studied our history.
LORD SIEGE
To study something is not to understand it. Perhaps that is why you fear us so, why
you cannot conceive of a martial nation being anything but evil. All this time, and
you still don't understand who you are. As a people.
While he talks, Lord Siege seems lost in thought, but he strokes his fingers down
Arianna's cheek and under her jaw, and gently lifts her face, so that she looks him
in the eyes. He smiles coyly, though with a hint of bemused arrogance, and steps
back.
LORD SIEGE
But of course, I have faith that your family will make the wiser
choice.
After all, the King and Queen do have the best interests of the
people at
heart.
He smiles softly, bows lightly, and then walks out of the room. Arianna just
stands there, feeling confused...and yet she knows one thing:
ARIANNA
I've got a bad feeling about this.
11. INT. STARSTREAM - PASSENGER'S COMPARTMENT
Raven stands in the cramped passenger compartment, trying to practice his
lightsaber techniques. There is a small round droid floating around, shooting
harmless lasers at him, and he is trying his best to deflect the shots with his
lightsaber. However, due to the limited space, he often finds himself shaving bits
of the wall or other objects with his lightsaber. Soran sits on the bench,
watching.
SORAN
Your skills with a saber are progressing quite well.
Raven deflects another blast before the little robot zooms around behind him and
fires again. Raven ducks, the blast going over his head and dissipating harmlessly
as it touches the wall. Raven whips around and deflects another blast.
KARUS
(V.O.)
We are coming up on Coreign. We'll be leaving hyperspace in a few
seconds.
The announcement causes Raven to stop. The droid, however, does not and shoots
Raven in the back. Raven jumps slightly. Soran stands up and turns the droid off
and puts it away in a box.
RAVEN
Master, now that I am done my studies, I wish to discuss something with you. I had
a dream earlier. It was clear, vivid, not like my other dreams…I was in the middle
of this big…
SORAN
A vision?
RAVEN
Maybe. I don't know.
SORAN
A Jedi should always be mindful of his dreams, Raven, especially
when they seem out of the ordinary. Consider what you saw,
meditate on it. We will discuss it when we are settled in on
Coreign.
12. EXT. COREIGN - DAY
The StarStream enters the planet's atmosphere and zooms across the sky, heading
towards a city.
13. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
As Karus pilots his ship, he sends out a transmission.
KARUS
Coreign Air traffic Control, this is the light freighter
StarStream, requesting permission to land. I am
carrying the Republic ambassadors.
AIR TRAFFIC CONTROLER
(V.O.)
This is Coreign Air Traffic Control. Permission granted,
StarStream.
Landing coordinates start filling Karus' database screen and he plots the best
flight path to them.
14. EXT. COREIGN - DAY
The StarStream roars overtop of Coreign City, heading for a Docking Bay at the edge
of the city.
15. INT. STARSTREAM - PASSENGER COMPARTMENT
Raven looks out the window and gasps.
RAVEN
Master! It's the city from my dream!
Soran walks over and looks out the window at the city below.
SORAN
Interesting.
After a few seconds, he turns and goes back to the bench as Raven continues looking
out at the city.
16. EXT. COREIGN - DAY
The StarStream approaches the Docking Bay and goes in for a soft landing. Royal
Guards are standing by the door, guns resting on their shoulders.
17. INT. STARSTREAM - HALLWAY
Karus lowers the ramp as Soran and Raven appear.
KARUS
I may go out looking for some spare parts, but I should be here
by the time you two get back.
SORAN
That's fine. I doubt we'll be back anytime soon.
Soran and Raven walk down the ramp and meet with the guards. One of the guards,
Turvo, steps forward.
TURVO
Ambassadors. (he bows) I am Captain Turvo of the Royal Guard. My
men and I will escort you to the palace.
SORAN
Is all this security really necessary? We were under the
impression that Coreign was a peaceful planet.
TURVO
And it is. We are simply your honor guard. A tradition,
ambassador.
SORAN
Very well. Lead the way.
The Guards surround the two Jedi and the group walks out of the Docking Bay.
18. EXT. COREIGN CITY - DAY
Soran and Raven are led through the city streets. At some point during their walk
and following conversation, a trio of small land rover-like robots wheel down the
street. They split apart into three directions and each one goes to a different
house. Raven watches one as its back opens up and a clawed hand emerges, holding an
envelope. The hand continues to rise until it reaches a mailbox and slips the
envelope in. The hand retracts and the robot goes on to the next house. Also, a few
Hover-Vehicles drive past the group on and off during their walk.
SORAN
I hear the King and Queen are well-loved by the people.
TURVO
They are indeed. I'm afraid you won't be meeting with them right
away, however.
SORAN
No?
TURVO
No. They will be available for an audience later today, (Soran is
somewhat puzzled by the request) but they have
requested that you first meet with their daughter, the
Princess Arianna.
Soran frowns at this, at first taking it as an intended insult. Then, his brow
furrows, and we can almost see his mind racing through the implications of the
request. He glances briefly at Raven, and after a few seconds, smiles and responds.
SORAN
Of course. A future Queen would no doubt need to practice her
skills at diplomacy. How old is she?
TURVO
She is 14, but mature long beyond her years. She will take over
for her parents on her 18th birthday.
Soran smiles cordially, but there is something almost wolfish about the smile. The
camera moves, and we see a train station in the background.
19. INT. TRAIN
They are now on some form of train, in a private compartment reserved only for
nobility. It moves so fast, everything outside the windows is a blur.
SORAN
I think I will let you handle the negotiations alone, Raven.
Judging from what Captain Turvo said, you could both use the
experience. It may also help relax the Princess, dealing
with someone around her own age.
Raven is shocked and looks at Soran. Soran chuckles.
SORAN
Relax, Raven. I don't even need the Force to sense how nervous
you are. Remember, she'll be just as inexperienced at this as
you.
RAVEN
Yes Master, I will do my best.
SORAN
That is all I ever ask of you.
20. EXT. ROYAL PALACE
The Guards and Jedi are walking up the stairs leading to the Palace. We can see the
Hover-Train taking off at tremendous speed, in the distance. The group walks up the
stone steps and reaches the humongous Palace doors. The Guards push them open,
allowing the Jedi to go on ahead.
TURVO
If you'll follow me, young Jedi, I will take you to the Throne
Room.
Raven follows Turvo out of the room.
21. INT. ROYAL PALACE - THRONE ROOM
Raven stands alone in the Throne Room. A door opens and he turns to see Princess
Arianna walk in. His eyes go wide as realizes that it is the same girl from his
dream. Although she currently has her hair out loose and she is wearing a dress, he
is sure it is the same person. Arianna approaches Raven.
ARIANNA
You must be the Jedi I am meeting with. I am Princess Arianna.
RAVEN
My…My name is Raven. Raven Darkham.
Arianna takes Raven's hand and shakes it.
ARIANNA
You're so nervous.
RAVEN
I must admit, I've never met a princess before.
ARIANNA
I too have a confession. I've never met a Jedi Knight before.
RAVEN
Actually m'lady, you still haven't. I'm not quite a Jedi Knight
yet. I'm still only a student.
Arianna chuckles.
ARIANNA
If you are a student, then where is your teacher?
RAVEN
He is around someplace. He trusted me to handle the matter alone.
Raven sighs and then adds on in a much quieter voice,
RAVEN
I need more experience in such matters.
Arianna chuckles again and turns and heads up the stairs to the two Thrones seated
at the top. Raven stays in his spot. Arianna sits in one of the Thrones and smiles.
ARIANNA
You may come sit next to me, Raven Darkham.
Raven hesitantly takes a step and then stops, looking around. Arianna continues to
smile and giggle.
ARIANNA
Don't worry. My parents will not mind us using their seats.
Raven slowly walks up the steps and sits in the empty throne. The two turn to face
each other. Arianna notices that Raven is shaking slightly, with nervousness.
ARIANNA
So what exactly does a Jedi do?
Arianna lays a hand on Raven and feels his nervousness slightly leave.
RAVEN
We're peacekeepers and ambassadors mostly. We represent the New
Republic in neutral systems just like its regular diplomats,
except for one little advantage of ours.
ARIANNA
What is that?
Raven holds up his lightsaber and grins.
RAVEN
This.
Arianna chuckles and removes her hand from his, content now that Raven seems to be
more comfortable.
ARIANNA
Well, I suppose we should get down to business. If the Republic
accepts our request to join, we will be more then willing to
grant them exclusive rights to our Trebilium.
RAVEN
Trebilium, what is that?
ARIANNA
It's a special ore found only on Coreign. It has the ability to
regenerate its structure when it's damaged.
RAVEN
Starship armor, right? Some of the newer frigates and cruisers in
the Republic fleet have Trebilium armor plating.
ARIANNA
You're in the fleet as well?
RAVEN
(with mock arrogance) What can I say? We Jedi are…versatile.
ARIANNA
(nearly giggling) Not to mention insufferably self-centered. And
here I
was trying to discuss important affairs with you.
RAVEN
(he grins, and then tries to mask it with a mockery of a stern
look) Very well, then. Why does Coreign wish to join with the
Republic?
ARIANNA
(more seriously) We believe strongly in everything the Republic
stands for. It is also in our best interest. The Republic
has many things to offer to its members. (looks sadly at the
floor) I am sure that by now it is no secret that the Skenvi
Empire has been pestering us for greater trade concessions with
our ore.
She looks back up and locks eyes with Raven.
ARIANNA
There are rumors of an invasion if we do not cooperate. The Republic would be able
to defend us, as we do not have the forces nor the resources to defend ourselves.
All we have is the planetary police, and they don't amount to much. The majority of
our old Coreign Fighters are outdated and far beyond repair.
Arianna giggles and smiles to lighten the mood, but keeps eye contact with Raven.
ARIANNA
Plus, it's good to have the Jedi on your side. I feel safer with
a Jedi around.
The two stare deeply into each other's eyes for a minute. Raven swallows and then
stands up, breaking eye contact.
RAVEN
I guess that concludes our business. I will relay your answers to
the Senate.
Arianna also stands.
ARIANNA
Thank you. And now with business out of the way, would you like
to see the Royal Gardens? I am retiring there now and would
love for a Jedi to accompany me.
Raven thinks about it for a moment. He looks at her beautiful smiling face and
gives in. He smiles back at her.
RAVEN
Lead the way, m'lady.
Arianna smiles and starts walking out of the room, Raven following.
22. INT. COREIGN PALACE - OBSERVATION ROOM
Above the Throne Room is a room with a two-way mirror looking down into the Throne
Room. Soran and King Juster stand there, watching Raven and Arianna as they walk
out of the room.
SORAN
They seem to get along well.
King Juster turns and walks out of the room and into the hall, Soran walking beside
him.
KING JUSTER
Yes. I must say, I am gratified to find that the Republic deems
us important enough to send two Jedi as ambassadors.
SORAN
Every system is important to the Republic.
KING JUSTER
But some more than most, no? After all, what would the Republic
do if
we were to join the Skenvi instead, and deny you access to our
ore?
SORAN
We would do as we always do, your Grace. Persevere. If you wish
to join the Skenvi Empire, it is your right. Likewise, if I wish to
take a stroll out of that window, it is my right also.
King Juster laughs heartily.
KING JUSTER
A fine assessment of the situation. The Skenvi ambassador lies by
default. I'd have to be a fool to trust his honeyed tongue.
But he's been getting bolder, more insistent, lately. I hate
to think about what might happen when we sign the Republic
charter.
Soran nods, understanding.
SORAN
And what does Queen Erin think of the situation?
KING JUSTER
She's always the optimist. We can go see her right now if you
wish, and you can ask her yourself.
SORAN
Actually, your Grace, I shall have to decline for the moment. I
had not expected you to return so quickly, and I must make a
brief report to the Council on my arrival. I promise to join
you within the hour.
KING JUSTER
Very well. My wife and I will be in the gardens.
23. EXT. COREIGN PALACE - ROYAL GARDEN - DAY
Arianna and Raven walk down a path, a wall of hedges on either side.
ARIANNA
The Gardens are huge. Mother had them built when she was younger so she could have
a private and peaceful place to meditate. When I became old enough to know the way
of things, she introduced me to meditation as a way to calm the spirit. I come out
here often and meditate for hours at a time. It's so peaceful.
They walk around a corner and enter a wide opened area. There are a few small
hedges and plants doting around the area, but other then that, not a single thing
apart from grass and a small shed.
ARIANNA
And this is where I like to practice my fencing.
Raven looks at her, amused.
RAVEN
Fencing? I thought that sport only existed in history books.
ARIANNA
I've been doing it since I was a little girl. My mother taught me
and her mother taught her.
Raven chuckles and Arianna playfully pushes him.
ARIANNA
What's so funny?
RAVEN
I can't picture a princess fencing. It's too absurd!
At this point, Raven breaks out laughing. Arianna jokingly gasps.
ARIANNA
Would you like to see? Better yet, would you like to have a
friendly duel?
Raven stops laughing but continues to smile.
RAVEN
I accept.
Arianna walks across the lawn towards the shed. She disappears inside, leaving
Raven alone outside. A few minutes later, Princess Arianna emerges outside with
two swords in her hands, and a fencing suit covering her body. She does not wear a
helmet however and Raven sees that she is not bringing him a suit.
The Princess tosses a sword to Raven and he catches it clumsily. He moves his hand
around, getting used to the feeling. It os definitely different then a lightsaber.
Arianna giggles at Raven's inability to properly use a sword.
ARIANNA
Here…
Arianna stands next to him and shows him how to properly hold it for sturdiness.
RAVEN
It's a bit different then a lightsaber, but it'll do.
Arianna backs up and stands in a fencing ready stance. She sticks the sword out
straight, bending her right leg forward, and arches her free arm up in a half moon
pose. Raven tries to copy the stance, however his form is more loose.
ARIANNA
Are you ready?
RAVEN
As ready as I'll ever be, Princess.
24. EXT. COREIGN PALACE - DIFFERENT LOCATION OF ROYAL GARDEN - DAY
King Juster and Queen Erin stare out at Raven and Arianna. Lord Siege walks up
behind the King and Queen. They only notice him when he speaks.
LORD SIEGE
Ah, young love. Touching, isn't it?
The King and Queen only glance over at him for a moment, but the smiles on their
faces quickly become frowns.
LORD SIEGE
Do you know, your Grace, what Jedi philosophy says about
attachment?
KING JUSTER
(with biting sarcasm) No, Lord Siege, I don't. Perhaps you could enlighten us?
LORD SIEGE
It says that a Jedi must forsake all attachments, that he may better serve the
Force. That is why candidates for their Academy are taken at such a young age, and
why (he smiles) they are forbidden to love.
The King and Queen now turn their heads toward him in shock.
LORD SIEGE
And yet the Jedi Master throws his apprentice headlong into your romantic trap,
knowing full well what the outcome will be.
They can only stare, not quite comprehending the implications.
LORD SIEGE
Perhaps, your Grace, it would do you well to remember this, as a
lesson.
KING JUSTER
(somewhat shaken) A lesson about what?
LORD SIEGE
Why, ulterior motives, of course. The quickest judgment about a man may often prove
to be the farthest one from the truth.
KING JUSTER
I think that my judgments about you and the Skenvi Empire are quite sound, Lord
Siege. If you think spouting platitudes…
LORD SIEGE
(interrupting) No doubt they are. You see only the surface, but perhaps that is
enough for you. Were I you, though, I would look carefully at your new allies.
KING JUSTER
Except that you're not me, which is why Coreign will never join the Skenvi.
LORD SIEGE
No less than I expected. When the end comes, your Grace, you may reconsider your
words, though it will be far too late. When Skenvi warships occupy your orbitals,
when your cities are awash in flame, and when you find yourself a king over charred
bones and cooked meat, perhaps you will look back and wish that you had chosen a
position of strength over one of weakness.
KING JUSTER
Are you threatening us?
LORD SIEGE
I am stating Skenvi policy. Coreign is merely an objective in this war, a resource
to be fought over. Dig past the web of self-righteous lies, and you will find that
the Republic feels much the same way. And what of when you become a burden to your
allies, your friends? Coreign is weak, and in this galaxy, your Grace…(he pauses
for a moment, sobered by a recollection of things past)…weakness invites betrayal.
With that said, he turns around and walks out of the gardens, leaving the King and
Queen baffled and more than a little frightened. Soran walks up, passing by Lord
Siege. The two make hard eye contact as they pass. When Soran reaches the King and
Queen, he spots what they are looking at.
SORAN
I see I'm just in time for the show.
25. EXT. COREIGN PALACE - ROYAL GARDEN - DAY
The two teenagers dive at each other and swords clang together. Raven isn't
expecting to feel the force of the swords banging against each other, which results
in his sword flying from his hands. Raven dives and comes up in a roll, holding his
sword once more. He whips around and blocks a stab by Arianna. Arianna twirls her
sword around so it is on top of Raven's and very lightly taps it against his chest.
They brake apart and return to the ready stances.
Arianna nods and Raven nods back. They charge each other once more, and this time
Raven is prepared for the force of the swords clanging together. As their swords
meet, Arianna smiles.
ARIANNA
I see you're learning.
RAVEN
I've always been a fast learner.
They break apart and Arianna charges at Raven, their swords clanging together in a
series of attacks and blocks, Raven getting pushed back further and further, one
step at a time. Raven ducks and maneuvers to the side, coming up beside Arianna. He
swings his sword down at an angle so it would hit off her shoulder pad, but she
whips around and blocks at the last second.
Raven twirls his sword around, so it is overtop of hers, much like what she did to
him, but she continues the twirling and brings hers back on top of his. He raises
his sword up, causing Arianna's sword to go higher when she stabs it forward, just
skimming the top of his head. Raven pokes his sword forward, lightly tapping her
chest.
They break apart and return to ready stances. This time Raven's stance is much
better.
ARIANNA
You really do adapt quickly.
Raven smiles as he raises his arms and bows. He returns to the ready position and
nods his head. Arianna nods hers as well. Raven slightly moves his body forward,
but does not move his feet. Arianna, thinking that Raven is going to charge,
charges first and runs at Raven. Raven steps to the side and swings his sword
towards Arianna as she approaches, but she ducks, going under the sword, and then
comes up beside Raven.
Their swords meet and they once again parry back and forth, attacking and blocking,
as they move around the open field. Arianna quickly spins and blocks an attack. She
pushes the blade away and slices at Raven's chest. Raven blocks and spins, sending
a shot towards Arianna's left shoulder, which she in turn blocks as well. Arianna
breaths heavy, running low on breath.
ARIANNA
You're really good.
Raven stabs forward and again, she blocks.
RAVEN
You're better.
He swings upward, but Arianna bends backwards, causing the tip of Raven's sword to
miss her by inches. She swats it away and changes back to the offensive. She slices
at his chest but he blocks easily with a swat to the left. She spins and slices
toward his right arm but he blocks and swings to her side. She blocks and slices
toward his stomach. He blocks once again and slices toward her chest. She spins
around and knocks his blade away. She uses her momentum to slice at his thigh but
he blocks the attack.
She continues to up the offensive and Raven moves the sword around in a flurry of
blocks. Raven takes a few steps back as he blocks. As he lifts his foot up to take
another step back, but trips backwards on a small rock and starts to fall down.
Arianna lunges in for the finishing point, but Raven turns his body to the side and
stretches out his hands, grabbing the end of Arianna's uniform.
The two fall to the soft ground, their bodies tangled up in each other. They turn
their heads to look at each other and find their faces inches apart. They stare
deeply into each other's eyes. Arianna starts to slightly lean in for what seems to
be a kiss.
RAVEN
I win.
With the chemistry broken, Arianna snaps out of her love-struck daze. She feels
something softly putting pressure on her stomach and she looks down, seeing that
Raven has the end of his sword touching her stomach. Arianna starts to laugh at the
situation.
ARIANNA
Well done, Jedi.
Raven starts laughing as well and stands. He reaches a hand down and helps Arianna
to her feet as well. They start brushing grass off of themselves. They hear
clapping and look over to see the Queen, King, and Soran walk into the field. King
Juster is the one clapping.
SORAN
That was quite the show. I was only there for part of it, but I
can tell that you're very talented, Princess.
ARIANNA
I practice three times a week and train with my mother. She's
even better.
Queen Erin chuckles.
QUEEN ERIN
Not for much longer, if you keep it up.
She turns to Soran.
QUEEN ERIN
Arianna has won many fencing tournaments here on Coreign. We're
all very proud of her.
The King claps his hands together to get everyone's attention.
KING JUSTER
I'm sure Soran and his student are exhausted from their trip here
and could use a bit of rest. Arianna, would you be so kind as
to show them to the Guest Rooms?
ARIANNA
Certainly, Father. If you'll follow me, gentleman.
Arianna walks away, still dressed in her fencing uniform. Soran and Raven follow.
26. INT. COREIGN PALACE - HALLWAY
Princess Arianna leads Soran and Raven down a hallway.
SORAN
Princess, your parents say that you are very perceptive towards
others' feelings. Do you often have strong emotions toward
certain people only in their presence, or perhaps know that
they are nearby before you can see or hear them?
Raven glances at his Master, curiosity on his face.
ARIANNA
All the time. Mother says it's a gift that I have been blessed
with.
Soran nods his head and Arianna stops by an open door.
ARIANNA
Here is your room, gentleman. Take as long as you need to rest.
My parents will meet with you afterwards, to finalize the
negotiations.
SORAN
Your hospitality is much appreciated.
Soran walks into the room. Raven looks at the Princess before going into the room.
They smile at each other.
ARIANNA
Rest well.
RAVEN
I will.
Raven turns and walks into the room, closing the door behind him.
SORAN
The Force is strong in her.
RAVEN
I know. I felt it when we were fencing. It doesn't matter,
though. She's too old to begin the training.
SORAN
The Council has made exceptions in the past. I will talk to
Master Joran Korn when we return.
Raven goes and lies on the second bed as Soran lies on the first.
27. INT. COREIGN PALACE - ARIANNA'S ROOM
Arianna, dressed in yet another dress, sits in her bedroom, staring at herself in
her mirror. Her mother stands behind her, brushing her hair. Her mother smiles.
QUEEN ERIN
You've fallen for that boy, haven't you?
Arianna looks down at the floor and smiles as well.
QUEEN ERIN
I am happy for you…but there is something you must know. The
Jedi…they do not permit members of their order to be
involved…romantically, at all. I am truly sorry, but there
isn't any way this could ever work out.
Arianna's smile fades. She is plainly shocked by the news.
QUEEN ERIN
Perhaps it is best if you do not attend the finalizing of the
negotiations. Your father and I can handle it on our own.
The Queen pauses to get a knot out of her daughter's hair and then continues.
QUEEN ERIN
Forget about him. It will be easier once you do.
ARIANNA
I know, mother, but I can't help how I feel.
QUEEN ERIN
It will take time, but it's for the best. You know this.
The door opens and a shadow falls over both of them. They turn to see who entered,
however we never get to see who. Arianna's eyes widen. Queen Erin takes a small
step back. Her voice is filled with fear when she speaks.
QUEEN ERIN
Can we help you with something? You appear be lost.
28. INT. COREIGN PALACE - THRONE ROOM
King Juster sits on his Throne as Soran and Raven stand at the bottom of the
stairs, their hands behind their backs. The room is quiet. King Juster sighs as he
looks at his watch and Raven's eyes keep darting to the doors. The doors creek
open, causing everyone to look at it. A lone handmaiden walks into the room. As she
walks by the thrones on her way back out of the room on the other side, the King
stops her by calling out her name.
KING JUSTER
Falaish.
She stops and turns to face him, bowing to her knees.
KING JUSTER
Could you please go and remind my wife of the meeting? She was
last
headed toward the Princess' quarters.
FALAISH
Certainly, your Grace.
As Falaish stands up to leave, Soran feels a disturbance in the Force.
SORAN
Raven, how about you accompany her. You won't be missing much
here.
Raven catches the look Soran gives him and nods.
RAVEN
Certainly, master.
Raven turns and exits the room with Falaish. Soran stares after them for a minute
before turning back to face the King. King Juster chuckles.
KING JUSTER
My wife can never keep an appointment unless it's for her hair.
Soran smiles, but we can tell through his expression that his mind is elsewhere and
his smile is forced.
29. INT. COREIGN PALACE - HALLWAY
Raven follows Falaish down a hall. They round a corner and see that the door to
Arianna's room is wide open. Raven feels that same disturbance in the Force that
Soran felt and lays a hand on Falaish's shoulder.
RAVEN
Stay here.
Raven runs down the hall and into the room. The Queen is lying on the floor and
Raven takes a few slow steps towards the body and kneels down to feel her pulse.
RAVEN
She's…dead.
A scream causes Raven to whip his head around and see Falaish standing in the
doorway.
RAVEN
Go and get my master!
As Falaish rushes away, Raven scans the room and sees no sign of the Princess. He
rushes to the open window and looks out. The evening sky makes it difficult to spot
anything. Raven reaches into a pouch tied to his belt and brings up two small
lenses. He places one in each eye and taps them. The entire world lights up in
various shades of green. Raven scans the area and taps the sides of the lenses to
zoom in. He spots something moving quickly away from the Palace. He zooms in
further and picks out a man dragging a bound and gagged female teenager.
Raven removes the lenses and place them back in his pouch. He places his hand on
his lightsaber as he jumps up onto the windowsill and leaps out.
30. INT. COREIGN PALACE - THRONE ROOM
Falaish runs into the room. King Juster leaps to his feet and Soran turns to face
her. Both of them run to the maid as she stops on the spot and starts crying. In
between sobs, she explains.
FALAISH
The Queen is dead! The Princess is missing!
King Juster stumbles back and falls to the floor, heartbroken. He stares off into
space, too upset to even cry. More in a state of devastating shock then anything.
Soran turns and rushes out of the room at top speed.
31. EXT. COREIGN CITY - EVENING
Lord Siege is dragging a bound and gagged Arianna through the streets. He is
holding onto the rope that is binding her hands like handcuffs. A few onlookers
stop to watch the scene, and quickly take off to tell the local law enforcement.
Arianna fights as best she can with hands tied and mouth gagged. She twists, turns
and squirms as much and as strong as she can, but Lord Siege has a strong grip on
her binds and is sure not to let go.
Arianna tries not moving her feet, but she quickly finds that Lord Siege has no
problem with dragging her across the ground. Arianna tries to scream, but only a
low muffle escapes the gag. Lord Siege roughly shoves the Princess into an open-
roofed Hover-Car and hops in behind the wheel. With a flick of his finger, the
Hover-Car starts up and he zooms away at top speed.
32. EXT. COREIGN PALACE - EVENING
Soran meets up with Raven outside of the Palace and the two rush down the street
together. Soran comes to a halt.
SORAN
Raven, stop!
Raven does so and looks back at his master, impatiently.
RAVEN
Why? We don't have time for this!
Soran points to two Speeder Bikes sitting outside of a bar.
SORAN
I hate stealing, but desperate times call for desperate measures.
Soran jumps on top of one, Raven on the other. Raven is zooming off before Soran
even has his started up. He gets his moving within a few seconds and races to catch
up with Raven.
33. EXT. COREIGN CITY - HANGAR BAY
This is a different Docking Bay then the one Karus landed in. Lord Siege jumps out
of the Hover-Car and shoves Arianna through the entryway into the Docking Bay. She
stumbles and falls to her knees. Lord Siege grabs her bounds and drags her across
the floor until she stumbles to her feet.
The sound of approaching engines causes Lord Siege to stop and turn around. Two
Speeder Bikes come to a sudden halt and the Jedi somersault off, landing a few feet
away from Lord Siege and Arianna, just outside of the doors. The second their feet
touch the grounf, their lightsabers are ignited.
LORD SIEGE
You are too late, Jedi.
He shoves Princess Arianna to the floor behind him. He takes a small device from
his belt and shoots it towards her. Thick rope shoots out and wraps around
Arianna's legs. Lord Siege throws the gadget to the floor as he reaches onto his
belt for something else.
He raises it close to his head and a long red bar of light ignites from the
lightsaber. Soran and Raven's eyes go wide, realizing that Lord Siege is a Sith.
Lord Siege smiles as he removes one hand from the lightsaber handle and raises the
hand. Soran and Raven start to move towards him, but are blocked as Lord Siege uses
the Force to close the metal doors, keeping the two Jedi from advancing. He picks
Arianna up over his shoulders.
The two blue lightsabers start burning through the doors and move in opposite
directions, forming a circle. Lord Siege gets to his ship, the DREAD, and dumps
Arianna inside. He turns around as a circle falls out of the middle of the doors
and the Jedi rushed inside.
A group of Skenvi Soldiers rush out from The Dread and stand in front of Lord Siege
as they turn on their blaster rifles and fire at the intruders. Raven and Soran
block each shot with their lightsabers, deflecting the blasts into random areas of
the Docking Bay. It isn't long until the blasts are deflected back at the Skenvi
Soldiers and they all lay dead on the floor.
Lord Siege slams his hand out and Force-Pushes Raven across the room. Raven lands
in a pile of junk spare parts, and Lord Siege uses the Force to raise a second pile
and slams the junk down on top of Raven, burying him.
By this point, Soran has reached him and Lord Siege moves his lightsaber in front
of him to block a furious blow. The lightsabers crackle with energy as they meet,
neither one willing to move theirs first. Lord Siege sneers as he moves his
lightsaber back and quickly slams it forward, lower then last time.
Soran backs up, the blow missing. Lord Siege charges and brings his lightsaber down
towards Soran's neck. Soran bends his neck to avoid getting sliced off and blocks
the attack with his saber. Lord Siege continually attacks Soran in force, making
him be the one who backs up step by step and defends.
Soran slams his lightsaber up, causing Lord Siege's to go flying up above his head,
leaving his grasp. Soran uses the free time he has to move to the side and jam his
saber forward. Lord Siege jumps out of the way, but not quick enough and manages to
burn the edge of his arm as Soran's saber skims the surface.
Soran twirls his lightsaber in his hand as Lord Siege uses the Force to bring his
own lightsaber back into his hands. He ignites it just in time to block another
attack from Soran. Soran slices towards the Sith's arm, but Lord Siege knocks the
blade away and slices towards Soran's chest. Soran is able to block the saber in an
upward motion and kicks Lord Siege in the chest, causing him to stumble back a bit.
Lord Siege jumps forward as Soran does the same and their faces meet inches from
each other, with only room for their two lightsabers to be in between. Lord Siege
moves his head back as he twirls to the side and comes up behind Soran. As Soran
starts to turn to face him, Lord Siege does the only thing he has the time to do,
which is bring the hilt of his lightsaber across the back of Soran's head. The Jedi
falls to the floor, unconscious, his lightsaber rolling away from him.
The Dread's engines start up as Lord Siege puts away his lightsaber and rushes up
the ramp into his ship. The ramp retracts as the doors close and the ship lifts up
off the floor, blowing scorching hot air into the room.
Just as the Dread tilts up, Raven's hand emerges from the top of the junk pile and
with a grunt, he pulls himself out. Raven sees the ship slowly lifting up into the
sky and quickly reaches into his pouch. He retrieves a small electronic item and
whips it across the room. It sticks onto the side of The Dread as the ship reaches
the top of the room and zips away into the sky.
RAVEN
Master!
Raven rushes over and bends down next to Soran. He feels around for a pulse and
sighs, relieved, when he finds one.
34. EXT. SPACE
The Dread zooms through space, leaving Coreign behind.
35. INT. THE DREAD - LORD SIEGE'S QUARTERS
Lord Siege is standing, looking at Arianna. Arianna is tied to a chair. There are
electronic bounds centimeters above her wrists and away from her ankles. She tries
to stand up, but when her arms touch the electronic bounds, a surge of strong
electricity flows through her body and she lets out a scream.
The door slides open and Sha'Tilk, a strong but deadly female Bounty Hunter walks
in. Her voice is raspy and snake-like.
SHA'TILK
Please, can we gag her again? Her screaming is enough to give
even womprats a headache.
LORD SIEGE
Not yet. I'd like to have a few words with the princess first.
He walks over, and Arianna tries to lunge at him when he gets close. She screams
when she is electrocuted, but less strongly than the last time.
LORD SIEGE
I can see that breaking you will take more than just physical pain. The Force can
do terrible things to both mind and flesh, twist you in ways you never thought
possible, but for now I will simply leave you with the threat of such agony.
(pause) Tell me, Princess: If I were to disable the binds and free you, what would
you do?
ARIANNA
(with as much passionate hate as she can put into her voice) Kill you.
LORD SIEGE
Such violence…such hate. What if I told you that you could do that without ever
lifting a finger…kill me while still bound to that chair?
Confused, but still trying to maintain her hateful expression, Arianna only looks
at him.
LORD SIEGE
You, Princess, are strong in the Force. Very strong. With sufficient training, I
would be hard-pressed to match you.
ARIANNA
Is that what you want? To turn me into a (almost spitting) Sith?
LORD SIEGE
In time, yes. But I think you will find your alternatives rather limited in that
regard. Not even your precious Jedi friends can save you now.
ARIANNA
Liar. Raven will come for me.
LORD SIEGE
Of course he will. And when he does, we shall truly test the bounds of your
resistance.
ARIANNA
What are you talking about?
LORD SIEGE
How do you think it will feel, to watch as I break him?
She can only stare in horror as he continues.
LORD SIEGE
To stand witness as I peel away, one by one, all the layers of his sanity, and
leave him a gibbering shell of what he once was…
ARIANNA
No!
LORD SIEGE
And what if I were to turn him instead of you? You've already suffered my betrayal,
and the consequent death of your mother, but can you suffer his?
He stops for a moment, again haunted by a recollection. When he speaks, his voice
is sad, almost wistful.
LORD SIEGE
Can you endure treachery from the one you love the most?
Arianna continues staring for a moment, and then breaks out into sobs and
supplications. Lord Siege turns around and walks over to Sha'Tilk.
LORD SIEGE
You may gag her now, Sha'Tilk. And set a course for the Emperta
system.
SHA'TILK
The slave station? I thought you wanted to keep her.
LORD SIEGE
Oh, I will. When the time comes, (he gestures with an open palm) I shall have all
of my enemies sitting in the palm of my hand.
Abruptly, he closes his hand into a fist, and then exits the room amid muffled sobs
and screaming.
36. INT. COREIGN PALACE - THRONE ROOM
Raven and Soran stand in front of King Juster in the Throne Room. The King sits in
his throne and speaks in a sad tone.
KING JUSTER
(as if comforting himself) Arianna has always been strong. If
anyone can
survive this, it is her.
SORAN
We will do what we can to return her safely, but your Grace,
please, do not let this interfere with the negotiations. You
will no doubt receive demands to reconsider our offer and
instead join the Skenvi…do not listen. We will get your
daughter back.
RAVEN
I swear we will return her and kill the man that did this.
Soran shoots a hard look at his padawan, but does not get the chance to speak as
King Juster does so first.
KING JUSTER
The man you are seeking is named Lord Siege. He is an ambassador
of the Skenvi Empire. I wish you both the best of luck, and
please bring my daughter back safely. She is all I have now.
Tears start rolling down his eyes. Soran looks over at Raven and sees the
determined expression on his face and closes his eyes in pain. Raven is about to
tread down a dangerous path. Soran opens his eyes.
SORAN
Come on.
Soran turns and walks away, Raven striding beside him.
37. EXT. SPACE
The Starsteam zooms through space.
38. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
Karus is piloting the ship and Soran and Raven stand behind him. Karus points to a
dot on a screen.
KARUS
That's the ship you're tracking.
He enters in a bunch of commands on a console and a huge space station comes on
screen.
KARUS
The navicomputer is 90% positive that this is where they are
headed, judging by their trajectory.
RAVEN
A space station? In what system?
KARUS
It seems our boy is taking the Princess to Emperta.
Karus looks back at the two Jedi, but notices their confused looks.
KARUS
It's a space station that operates within the black market. More
specifically, with slave dealing.
It dawns on Raven what Lord Siege plans on doing.
RAVEN
We have to get there right away!
Soran places a comforting hand on Raven, but Raven just shakes it off and storms
away to the Passenger Compartment.
SORAN
Thank you, Karus. Stay on course.
KARUS
Sure thing.
Soran walks out of the cockpit.
39. INT. STARSTREAM - CORRIDOR
Soran stops in the corridor and takes out a small round holonet comlink. He presses
some digits and a hazy beam of light shoots an inch into the air. Soran presses
another few digits and a hologram of Joran Korn appears in the hazy light.
JORAN KORN
Ah, Soran. How are the negotiations progressing?
SORAN
Disastrously, though we can still salvage them. The Skenvi
ambassador has kidnapped the Princess and is now taking her to
sell on the slave market. What's more, we confronted him on
Coreign, and discovered that he is schooled in the ways of
the Force. A lone Dark Jedi, if we are lucky.
As Soran talks, Joran Korn's bright happy face soon turns to one of worry.
JORAN KORN
You don't believe that.
SORAN
No. He disguised himself too well, fought too masterfully…I fear
he is a Sith.
JORAN KORN
This is dire news, indeed. I will discuss this with the Council,
but you must do all that you can to find out more about this
man. Pursue him. rescue the princess, if she is not sold or dead
already. And above all
else, be careful. You are in more danger here than you know.
Soran nods, but does not end the communication.
JORAN KORN
What else is troubling you?
SORAN
It is Raven. He has become…emotionally attached…to the Princess.
JORAN KORN
Watch him closely, then. His involvement with her can be dealt
with later; for now, you must make sure that this quest of yours
does not become an instrument of vengeance for him.
SORAN
I agree.
JORAN KORN
Contact me again when you know more.
SORAN
I will.
Joran Korn disappears and the hazy light sucks back down into the holonet comlink.
40. INT. STARSTREAM - PASSENGER COMPARTMENT
Raven paces back and forth, a determined but worried look on his face. The door
slides open and Soran walks in. He watches Raven pace back and forth for a minute
before speaking up.
SORAN
You shouldn't worry. Worry is like fear: it clouds and distracts
the mind.
Raven continues to pace and doesn't even look at his master.
RAVEN
I've tried burying these feelings, but they are overpowering me.
SORAN
Then I think you should sit this mission out.
Raven stops pacing and turns angrily.
RAVEN
I will not stand by and watch!
He immediately realizes that he lost his temper with his master and softens.
RAVEN
I am sorry, master. I did not mean to shout.
When Soran speaks, his tone is filled with sadness and concern.
SORAN
Raven, I fear for you. Your feelings for this girl have clouded
your judgment. Your only concern should be for how this will
help us bring Coreign into the Republic, but you are turning
it into a personal quest for revenge. You fear for the girl, and
so you are angry at our inability to immediately rescue her.
And you hate Lord Siege for doing this to her, to you. You hate him
with a passion that threatens to consume you.
Raven sighs.
RAVEN
I've heard this all before! Is wanting justice for what he's done
going to lead to the Dark Side?
SORAN
You don't want justice! You want vengeance! There is a
difference.
Soran stops, knowing that losing his temper would not help things. He speaks again
in a softer, but just as stern tone.
SORAN
You are an exceptional student, Raven. You have learned so much
since I took you as my padawan, but it seems that you still don't
understand any of it.
Raven sighs, frustrated, and turns away from Soran to sit on the leather bench. He
crosses his arms, sulking. Soran takes a step towards him to continue his lecture,
but is interrupted as Karus' voice fills the compartment over the intercom.
KARUS
(V.O.)
We'll be coming out of hyperspace shortly.
SORAN
We'll continue this discussion later.
Raven ignores him and continues to stare off into space, lost in his own thoughts.
Soran turns and exits the room, leaving Raven to himself.
41. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
Soran enters the cockpit just as the StarStream exits lightspeed. The huge space
station of Emperta looms in front of the ship. Soran stares out the window at it.
KARUS
Welcome to Emperta, Master Jedi. You won't find a more wretched
hive of scum and villainy. Well, this side of Hutt Space, at
least.
Karus pushes a few buttons and takes a radio into his hands.
KARUS
Emperta Station, this is the light freighter StarStream
requesting permission to dock.
After a static-filled five seconds, a voice returns.
VOICE
Docking Port 69.
42. EXT. SPACE
The StarStream slows down as it nears the station and aims for one of the Docking
Ports. The one it is headed towards has the number ‘69' painted above it.
43. INT. STARSTREAM - CORRIDOR
Soran walks out of the cockpit and down the hall. He reaches the main door, but
Raven is already standing there, waiting for the door to open and ramp to lower.
SORAN
I meant what I said earlier, Raven. About you sitting this one
out.
Raven turns to his master and opens his mouth to speak, but is cut off as Karus
walks over.
KARUS
He's right, Raven. Well, half-right, really.
Soran and Raven look at him, confused. Karus turns to face Soran.
KARUS
You should sit this one out as well. They know what you two look
like. If you get identified, they'll run for it again, and we
may not get another shot at this. However, they've never seen
me before.
RAVEN
Fine.
He turns and storms back down the hall towards the Passenger Compartment.
SORAN
Good luck.
KARUS
I'll return with the Princess. I promise.
Karus presses the button to lower the ramp and walks off the ship.
44. INT. EMPERTA - CORRIDOR
Karus walks a busy hall, passing by dozens of people and aliens. Some are walking
alone, looking for a slave or two to buy. Others loners have smiles on their faces
and large pouches of credits in their hands, having just sold a slave. And others
still, walk around with their slaves on leashes or bound with rope, dragging them
up and down the halls. Karus looks carefully at each slave he passes, checking for
the Princess.
He continues down the hall, passing a vendor selling a half dozen slaves of varying
species, most skimpily clad. Upon walking around a corner, Karus spots a diner. He
breaths in, pushes open the doors, and walks into the dimly-lit room.
Karus stops on the other side of the door, giving his eyes a chance to adjust to
the darkness. The room is only lit by small lights lining the walls here and there.
Just enough to keep most of the room - and what goes on in it - out of view. He
spots a vacant table sitting alone in a corner with a light shining near it. Karus
walks over to it and sits down. Shortly after, a short Chadra-Fan waiter scurries
over.
WAITER
What is your pleasure, sir?
KARUS
I'll have a plate of Galaxy Fries with a Tipsy Drink. And a Slave
Sale Advisor, whenever one's available.
The waiter scurries away, leaving Karus alone again. Karus glances around the room
while waiting, but could only pick out slight outlines and movements. Soon enough,
the waiter returns with Karus' order and a tall lanky man with thick glasses and a
trench coat. The man sits down opposite of Karus as the waiter leaves again. Karus
starts picking at his food.
SLAVE SALE ADVISOR
What is it that you are looking for?
Karus takes a few more fries and eats them, washing the remnants down with a sip of
his drink. While he speaks, he removes a few credit coins and starts toying with
them on the table.
KARUS
I am looking for a specific slave. Teenage girl, human, blond
hair, Force- sensitive. They would have just recently docked
and registered.
Karus slides the credits across the table.
SLAVE SALE ADVISOR
I will see what I can find.
The man takes the credits and leaves. Karus reaches down to grab more fries.
45. INT. EMPERTA - DINER - LATER
We can tell time has passed, as Karus' plate of fries is just about empty and he
has a full glass of Tipsy drink next to an empty one. He looks up as the Slave Sale
Advisor returns with a female at his side.
SLAVE SALE ADVISOR
This is Sha'Tilk. She has what you are looking for.
Karus gives the man a few more credits and he walks away. Karus motions with his
hand for Sha'Tilk to sit down and she does so. When her face is at various angles,
her eyes slightly glow in the dark.
SHA'TILK
What precisely are you looking for?
KARUS
I'm looking for a Force-sensitive teenage girl. I heard you have
one.
SHA'TILK
Why does she have to be Force-sensitive?
KARUS
Let's just say that in my line of work, I tend to get into sticky
situations and dealings with some customers would go a lot more
smoothly if I had someone who was in touch with the Force.
Sha'Tilk searches Karus' eyes.
SHA'TILK
Very well. I have just the slave for you. Meet me at Port 12 in
half an hour. I'll have the girl waiting.
They both stand and shake hands. Sha'Tilk turns, but first reaches down and takes
Karus' last few fries before leaving.
46. INT. EMPERTA - CONTROL CENTER
Lord Siege is standing at a command console, looking at images from security
cameras. Around him, Skenvi Soldiers stand watch, and a number of station personnel
are lying dead on the floor. The comm beeps, and Siege presses a button to receive
the transmission.
SHA'TILK (V.O.)
The Jedi are not with him.
LORD SIEGE
Take a team of Soldiers and shadow the smuggler. Report back
when you find out what docking bay his ship is in.
47. INT. STARSTREAM - PASSENGER COMPARTMENT
Raven sits cross-legged in the middle of the floor, meditating. Soran stands behind
him, viewing his padawan as he meditates. Something in Soran's pouch vibrates and
he walks out into the corridor, leaving Raven alone in the room. He reaches inside
his pouch and takes out his COM Link. A hologram of Karus pops up.
KARUS
I've located the Princess. I'm meeting with the Skenvi in half an
hour for pick up and payment.
SORAN
Be careful. Lord Siege will be nearby. Block all thoughts of us
from your mind and focus only on buying a slave for personal
reasons. Siege can
use the Force; if he discovers your true thoughts and intentions,
then it's all over.
KARUS
I'll do my best.
Karus' image disappears. Soran puts the comlink away and turns to walk back into
the Passenger Compartment.
48. INT. EMPERTA - CORRIDOR
Karus walks down a hall, approaching Port 12. Sha'Tilk is standing in the doorway,
holding Arianna by a leash, her hands tied and mouth gagged. She is dressed in a
very revealing skimpy outfit.
KARUS
This the girl?
Sha'Tilk nods her head. Karus grabs Arianna roughly and begins checking her face
for bruises, turning her head to one side and then the next. He looks at her arms
and sees the heavy burn marks on her wrists. Sha'Tilk notices Karus' doubtful eyes
and feels the need to explain.
SHA'TILK
Electrical Binds. She's not exactly the smartest. Kept trying to
escape.
Karus nods his head, giving the impression that he understands. Arianna, having
never seen Karus before and not knowing who he is, tries to pull away, but he has a
strong grip on her binds and holds her still.
SHA'TILK
She's a feisty one. Definitely a plus for someone in your line of
work.
Arianna stops trying to fight and looks sadly at the floor.
KARUS
How much?
SHA'TILK
Fifty thousand.
KARUS
Hah! I didn't pay half that much for my first ship. Fifteen.
SHA'TILK
The girl is a Force user. You can find a heap of scrap like most
of the ships docked virtually anywhere. Forty.
KARUS
An untrained Force user. Twenty-five.
SHA'TILK
If she was trained, we'd both be dead. Thirty thousand credits,
and that's my final offer.
KARUS
I can deal with that. I'll take her.
Karus reaches inside his jacket and pulls out a black datapad. He types something
into it, and then removes a credit chip from a slot in the side. He hands the chip
to Sha'Tilk as the bounty hunter hands him Arianna's leather leash.
KARUS
Good doing business with you.
Karus smiles evilly to add to the effect. He turns and starts to walk down the
hall, dragging Arianna by the leash. After they disappear from view, Sha'Tilk
contacts Lord Siege on her comlink.
SHA'TILK
He's bought the Princess. I'm monitoring their position with the
tracking device I planted on her.
LORD SIEGE (V.O.)
Good. Alert me when he reaches his docking bay.
49. INT. EMPERTA - CORRIDOR
Karus walks quickly down a hall, dragging Arianna by the leash and talking on a
comlink.
KARUS
Got it? Just don't screw up the timing. If you do, we're dead.
He turns the comlink off and puts it away. They rush down the hall towards a blast
door marked "Docking Port 61."
50. INT. EMPERTA – CONTROL CENTER
Lord Siege picks up the comlink again.
SHA'TILK
They're in Docking Port 61. Sixty-one.
LORD SIEGE
Perfect. (to a Soldier) Captain, lock down all ships in that
docking bay. Immediately!
He then rushes off, heading for the docking bay.
51. INT. EMPERTA - DOCKING BAY 61
The hangar is empty, except for a pair of electrified docking clamps that are
extended, but not holding anything. The blast doors open, and Lord Siege walks in,
his lightsaber already ignited. He sees Karus and Arianna, who are standing not too
far from the forcefield that keeps the air in the hangar.
LORD SIEGE
I'm afraid that this is the end of the line, smuggler. The
Princess, and the Jedi in your…(he quickly scans the
hangar, realizing that there is no ship) Well then…a nice ploy,
but it won't save either of you. (to the Soldiers grouped behind
him) Kill the smuggler, and bring me the Princess.
The Skenvi Soldiers advance toward the two, their guns aimed at Karus. Suddenly,
the StarStream flies into view, and its guns begin to fire as it eases into the
hangar.
Sha'Tilk dives out of the way, while Lord Siege blocks a laser bolt and retreats
through the blast doors.
The ship then lowers its boarding ramp, and Karus and Arianna run inside. Lord
Siege stands just outside the open blast doors, yelling into his comlink.
LORD SIEGE
(on his comlink) Override the locks on the stations guns! I want
that ship disabled! (to Sha'Tilk) Get to the Dread. They aren't
free yet.
52. EXT. SPACE
The StarStream zooms through space away from the station, jinking and weaving as
laser bolts fired from the station fly past the ship. Emperta grows smaller in the
background, and the bolts soon stop. The ship settles into a straight course.
51. INT. STARSTREAM - PASSENGER COMPARTMENT
Arianna is sitting on the bench. Raven is kneeling on the floor in front of her,
wiping a cottonball with some kind of cream on it, over Arianna's burn marks on her
wrists. It stings her and she quickly moves her wrist back towards her, away from
Raven. She smiles, embarrassed as she moves her wrist back towards Raven.
RAVEN
Are you ok?
ARIANNA
It stings a little.
RAVEN
You just have to learn to detach yourself from it. When you can
ignore the pain, it all seems to go away.
ARIANNA
I can't imagine a Jedi like you acting as childish as me over
such a small thing.
RAVEN
Jedi have years of training to ignore pain. (lowers voice) But
just between you and me, a simple papercut can drive even
the strongest of
Jedi insane at times.
Arianna starts laughing and Raven smiles.
ARIANNA
Your parents must be so proud of you.
RAVEN
Actually, they don't know much about me. I was taken from my home
when I was three years old, to be trained as a Jedi. I
haven't seen my parents since. I plan on going back to my home
planet after I become a full Jedi Knight.
Arianna is shocked at this news. Raven has finished cleaning the cuts and is now
wrapping a bandage around each wrist.
ARIANNA
I can't imagine being away from my parents for that long.
She trails off as tears come to her eyes, remembering her mother.
ARIANNA
That monster...he murdered my mother. He tortured me.He said he
would...(she breaks off in sobs again)
RAVEN
(stroking her hair) It's alright. He's gone; you'll never have to
see him again.
Raven finishes wrapping her wrists, and hands her one of Karu's pilot uniform to
wear overtop of her slave clothes.
ARIANNA
Never again…
Mid-sentence, she breaks off, and her eyes go wide.
ARIANNA
No! He's coming!
The ship rocks, and Raven is flung to the floor. Arianna manages to hold onto
something and keep her balance. She quickly pulls on the pilot's uniform and they
rush to the cockpit.
54. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
Raven and Arianna run into the Cockpit, meeting up with Soran and Karus.
RAVEN
What was that?!
KARUS
Our friends are back, and they're not too happy about us tricking
them.
A beeping noise fills the room and Karus pushes a button.
LORD SIEGE (V.O.)
You can't possibly escape, Jedi. Would you throw away the lives
of the Princess and your smuggler friend just for a chance
to save yourself?
On cue, another shot hits the StarStream, rocking the cockpit. Before anyone can
stop him, Raven grabs the radio out of Karus' hands.
RAVEN
You'll never have the Princess, Sith. If you want her, you'll
have to get past me this time.
Karus snatches the radio back out of Raven's hands and terminates the transmission.
KARUS
Buckle yourselves in.
SORAN
Can you lose him?
KARUS
Maybe. There's an asteroid field up ahead. We'll have some cover
in there.
Outside the window, a field of gigantic rocks looms ahead, approaching ever closer.
KARUS
This may get bumpy.
Soran and Arianna turn and rush back to the Passenger Compartment to buckle into
their seats, however Raven stays in the Cockpit.
55. EXT. SPACE
The StarStream gets nicked by a laser shot, causing it to shake slightly. It dodges
two other shots and slips into the clustered asteroid field, immediately swerving
around, putting a few asteroids between it and the Dread. The Dread follows without
hesitation and lifts up to avoid an asteroid, however that puts the ship directly
in the path of another nearby rock. It fires, exploding the asteroid, and zooms
through the rubble.
The StarStream flies over, around, and under the abundantful asteroids, careful to
avoid any laser fire from the pursuing ship as well as the asteroids themselves. An
asteroid moves in front of the StarStream, however there is a hole in the middle
big enough to slip through. Once on the other side, Karus has to make his ship do a
nosedive in order to avoid hitting another asteroid. The StarStream straightens as
soon as it can and continues on, dodging the dangerous rocks whenever it is
necessary.
54. INT. THE DREAD - COCKPIT
Lord Siege stands behind a Skenvi pilot.
LORD SIEGE
Faster! We should be gaining on them!
They narrowly miss an asteroid.
LORD SIEGE
Better yet…
Lord Siege shoves the pilot out of the chair as he sits down and takes control.
56. EXT. SPACE - ASTEROID FEILD
The Dread gains speed, passing around an asteroid, The StarStream in full view with
nothing between them. Laser fire exits the Dread and soars towards Karus' ship. The
StarStream lowers at the last second and the shot flies overhead and destroys an
asteroid. The momentum of the explosion sends broken pieces of the rock flying in
all directions. One of the smaller pieces bangs into the top of the StarStream,
creating a fairly good-sized dent.
57. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
Karus has great difficulty regaining control of his ship after that last hit. Raven
looks at the sensor display and notices just how close the Dread is getting.
RAVEN
Move it.
Raven uses his body to push Karus out of the pilot seat.
KARUS
Hey!
Raven ignores him as he takes control of the ship. The first thing he does is push
the throttle all the way forward.
58. EXT. SPACE - ASTEROID FIELD
We see the StarStream significantly speed up.
59. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
KARUS
Are you crazy? You can't fly at this speed in an asteroid field!
You'll kill us all!
Raven concentrates on tapping into the Force. Karus stares out the front window,
completely stunned. It seems that Raven is handling the ship far better with the
boosters on, than Karus did with them off. He maneuvers around both asteroids and
laser blasts alike, not coming close to getting even a scratch. The boy is a
natural pro.
Snapping out of his state of momentary shock, Karus whips around and starts
entering in the lightspeed coordinates for Coreign. They are coming up on the end
of the asteroid field. Karus breathes a sigh of relief as the StarStream avoids the
last of the asteroids and enters empty space once again.
KARUS
Ok, let's go to lightspeed.
RAVEN
Not quite yet.
Raven brings the ship around in a circle, causing it to point back in the direction
of the asteroid field once more.
60. EXT. SPACE
The Dread exits the asteroid field as the StarStream zooms towards it, narrowly
dodging laser blasts as the two ships approach nearer to each other.
61. INT. THE DREAD - COCKPIT
Lord Siege sees what Raven is attempting to do and chuckles. Moving quickly, he
programs something into the ship's computer.
62. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
Sweat drips down Karus' forehead as he realizes that Raven is playing chicken with
the enemy ship. Right before the two ship collide, Raven fires and pulls a hard
right.
63. EXT. SPACE
The StarStream fires and pulls a hard right. As the StarStream zooms away, its shot
explodes against the Dread, destroying an entire wing and sending the larger ship
careening off into a nearby asteroid.
64. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
Soran and Arianna walk into the cockpit.
SORAN
I had a feeling that you were piloting, Raven. That was…what's
wrong?
RAVEN
Siege…he's dead. It's over, and I never even saw him.
SORAN
Revenge is never as satisfying as we believe it will be, Raven.
You think
it ends a conflict, settles a score, but in truth, it only
internalizes it. Take my advice: forget about it. If you don't,
you will go on hating him in the dark corners of your mind,
simply because he denied you your satisfaction.
RAVEN
Yes, master. I will try not to dwell on it.
Meanwhile, Arianna waits off to the side, clearly troubled for her own reasons.
Raven reaches down and presses the button to go to lightspeed.
65. INT. SKENVI SHUTTLE
Lord Siege and Sha'Tilk sit in the shuttle's cockpit. Neither is pleased with the
situation, but Siege has a curious expression on his face, as if this setback has
only provided him with new opportunities. He muses out loud on that subject.
LORD SIEGE
The boy again. Always the boy. A formidable opponent, (he
chuckles grimly) but strength is ever the path to the Dark
Side.
SHA'TILK
(warily) My lord…
LORD SIEGE
What? Has the Red Smile arrived?
SHA'TILK
No. But the freighter has just gone to lightspeed. (she smiles
wickedly) Its hyperdrive is damaged.
LORD SIEGE
(looking at the sensor readout) It is…contact the Red Smile and
tell them that there's been a change of plans. Have them meet us in
the Coreign system.
66. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
Raven opens his eyes to the room shaking as if exiting lightspeed. He takes a
moment to realize that Arianna's head is slumped against his shoulder, asleep. He
gently and slowly eases her head up as he slides out from under her. He lays her
head on the soft cushion of the seat they were seated in and moves into the pilot
seat.
The ship rumbles again, and the bright lines of the stars fade into little dots as
the StarStream comes out of hyperspace. Raven looks out the window, but sees only
blackness dotted by stars.
Soran and Karus walk into the cockpit.
SORAN
(groggily) Uh, where's Coreign?
RAVEN
(defensively) I don't know. The ship just came out of hyperspace
on its own.
Arianna wakes up at the conversation, and Karus shoos Raven out of the pilot seat.
He studies his charts for a moment and then replies.
KARUS
It appears we exited prematurely. We're still hours away from the
planet.
He looks up and presses the button to bring them back into lightspeed, but nothing
happens. Karus looks at the button with an angry expression. He presses it over and
over, but still nothing happens.
KARUS
Sithspit! That asteroid impact must have damaged the hyperdrive.
I guess we're lucky we made it as far as we did.
RAVEN
Is there anything you can do to fix it?
KARUS
Not until we reach Coreign. I don't have the spare parts onboard
to fix it, and it looks like it's going to need to be replaced,
anyway.
SORAN
You did what you could. We'll simply have to wait, now.
Raven turns and heads back to the Passenger Compartment to wait out the last few
hours of the trip.
67. EXT. SPACE
The StarStream zooms through the empty space. After it leaves the camera, pan down
to show the planet of Coreign and the StarStream approaching it. Around the planet,
the usual space traffic is gone, except for a large Skenvi troopship, made almost
invisible by its distance from the camera. The StarStream flies down and enters the
planet's atmosphere.
68. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
As the ship flies through the planet's bright afternoon sky and over top of the
city, Karus tries to raise communications with Coreign Air Traffic Control. Soran
sits in the seat next to Karus.
KARUS
Coreign Air Traffic Control, this is the light freighter
StarStream. We have urgent business with the King, and require
docking space immediately.
Static fills the speakers. Raven and Arianna walk into the room and Arianna smiles
when she sees Coreign City below.
KARUS
That's odd. They aren't responding.
Karus turns to Arianna.
KARUS
Is there someplace near the Palace where we can land?
ARIANNA
There's a landing pad right next to the Palace. We haven't used
it for years now, though, not since father donated his
personal starship to charity.
69. EXT. COREIGN - DAY
The StarStream glides overtop of Coreign City and approaches the Palace. It lands
on the Royal Landing Pad.
70. INT. STARSTREAM - CORRIDOR
Everyone is standing by the door as Karus lowers the ramp.
KARUS
I'll stay on the ship and wait. I doubt I'd feel too comfortable
in a Palace, surrounded by royalty. If you could ask the
King about getting me a new
hyperdrive, though, I'd appreciate it.
Soran chuckles.
SORAN
I'll ask.
Arianna and the Jedi walk down the ramp and across the front lawn of the Palace.
They reach a concrete path and turn to walk up it, towards the Palace doors.
However, before they reach the doors, they begin to open. Arianna's face lights up,
expecting her father. However instead of her father that exits, it is a dozen
Skenvi Soldiers, guns aimed on the trio. Raven and Soran ignite their lightsabers
out of reflex, but Soran stops Raven from charging.
SORAN
Wait! They don't seem to want us dead.
Raven watches as the Soldiers form a line going across in front of them, and
continue to aim their guns at them, but not a shot is fired.
SORAN
They just want to hold us here.
Then, Lord Siege walks out from behind the line of Soldiers, with an amused,
arrogant smile plastered across his face. Soran stares in shock at the turn of
events, while Arianna looks both guilty and ashamed. Raven, however, twists his
face into a mask of hatred. For a moment, though, eager anticipation plays across
his grimace.
SORAN
You won't win this time, Siege.
Lord Siege chuckles as he too ignites his lightsaber.
LORD SIEGE
Oh, but I already have. In a single blow, I have taken this
planet right from the Republic's grasp. When the King signs
our treaty of annexation,
The Republic will be powerless to act, and the Skenvi Empire
shall have the advantage it needs to win this war. And that
brings me to a point I've been meaning to make for quite a
while. Now that I have the King, I no
longer need the Princess.
Raising a blaster pistol, Lord Siege shoots Arianna in the side.
RAVEN
NO!
Raven charges forward at Lord Siege.
SORAN
Raven, no!
LORD SIEGE
Foolish boy!
Lord Siege arcs his lightsaber up to block the attack from Raven. The two
lightsabers clash, energy crackling together. Raven pulls back and then slams his
lightsaber down, aiming for Lord Siege's head, but the Sith's own lightsaber is
already there to meet with Raven's. Lord Siege backhands Raven across the face with
his free hand. Raven stumbles back but quickly regains his composure just in time
to block a slash aimed for his arm.
The Skenvi Soldiers begin firing at Soran and Arianna, but Soran deflects the shots
with his lightsaber.
Karus suddenly appears, firing his blaster at the Soldiers as he hefts Arianna's
unconscious body over his shoulder, with Soran providing cover. They retreat back
to the ship.
As lasers fly in all directions, Lord Siege and Raven continue their duel with
their lightsabers. Raven slams his saber down towards his opponent's shoulder, but
Lord Siege, like always, is much quicker and already has his lightsaber there to
block. Raven spins and sends a kick to Lord Siege's chest, but Lord Siege drops his
lightsaber and grabs the leg with both hands. He throws the leg up, sending Raven
tumbling to the ground. Raven rolls back to his feet, re-igniting his lightsaber.
He jams it forward, but Lord Siege's own lightsaber flies into his hands and he
activates it, jumping to the side and blocking the attack at the last second.
As the two continue to duel, their footwork moves them through the Palace doors and
into the Main Hall. During Raven's foray of furious strikes, Lord Siege manages to
grab Raven's saber hand, however that leaves him vulnerable for Raven to do the
same to him. Both duelists stand still, trying to maneuver the other's lightsaber
to their own neck.
71. EXT. COREIGN PALACE - FRONT LAWN
Soran, Karus, and Arianna reach the StarStream. Karus lays Arianna down just inside
the ship and takes a moment to examine her blaster wound.
KARUS
(with a sigh of relief) It isn't fatal. The bolt didn't pierce
too deeply.
Soran is also visibly relieved, but he continues to ward off incoming blaster
bolts.
SORAN
You have to get her out of here. Now!
Karus picks Arianna up again and takes her inside the ship.
Soran Force-Jumps towards the remaining Soldiers. They try to shoot at him in the
air, but he moves too quickly. As he lands, Soran slices at the closest Soldiers.
The Soldier falls while Soran rams his lightsaber behind him, impaling another
Soldier. He spins around as he brings his lightsaber back to being in front of him,
slicing through yet another Soldier. He raises the saber and slams it down in front
of him, cutting into the last Skenvi. Soran turns off his lightsaber and runs to
catch up with Raven and Lord Siege. Behind him, the StarStream lifts off the ground
and into the sky.
72. INT. STARSTREAM - COCKPIT
As Karus pilots the ship, Arianna stirs in the reclined co-pilot's seat next to
him. Her wound is bandaged, with a small bacta tank attached, and tiny tubes
running beneath the white gauze. She suddenly wakes up, and cries out in pain
because of the wound. After a moment, though, she remembers what is happening and
unbuckles the straps keeping her secured.
ARIANNA
Land the ship! We have to help them!
KARUS
Sorry Princess, but I've got my orders. Get you to safety.
ARIANNA
Look here, flyboy. Those are my friends down there, too. I'll be
fine, but what about them?
KARUS
They are Jedi. They can handle themselves.
ARIANNA
This is my planet, and on this planet I am a Princess, so
therefore you have to do what I command and I command
you to land this heap of rusted junk!
He turns to continue arguing, but sees the stern look on Arianna's face.
KARUS
If we're going to go back, may I suggest we sneak in through the
back of the Palace?
ARIANNA
Assuming the Royal Guards are still alive, they will eagerly
assist us. Land behind the Palace.
KARUS
Yes, M'Lady.
73. EXT. COREIGN - DAY
The StarStream flies in a half-circle and turns around, heading back towards the
Palace.
74. INT. COREIGN PALACE - MAIN HALL
Lord Siege and Raven break away from each other. Raven, frustrated, swings his
lightsaber down with anger, only to have Lord Siege fuel that anger by backing up
to doge the blow. The energy from the saber starts to burn away an inch of the
floor until Raven raises it away. Lord Siege slices down toward Raven's arm. Raven
barely dodges in time, but as soon as he does he jabs his lightsaber toward Lord
Siege's chest. Lord Siege steps back as he raises his lightsaber to knock Raven's
away.
Lord Siege spins in a complete 360 degree angle, his lightsaber forming a brief red
circle, and then strongly slams his weapon towards Raven's head. Raven ducks and
twirls to the side, avoiding the deathblow. They push through a set of doors and
enter into the Throne Room.
At the other end of the Main Hall, Soran rushes in and sees the battle as it moves
into the Throne Room. He starts to run to join in, but Sha'Tilk grabs him from
behind and knocks the lightsaber out his hands. They begin fighting hand-to-hand.
75. INT. COREIGN PALACE - THRONE ROOM
After blocking an attack, Lord Siege slices upwards but low, aiming for Raven's
thigh. Raven blocks and twirls his blade overtop of Lord Siege's and proceeds to
slice upward toward Lord Siege's chin. Lord Siege jumps to the side and slams his
fist down on top of Raven's hand, knocking the lightsaber from his grasp. Before
Lord Siege can do anything else, Raven slams his knee up, connecting it with Lord
Siege's stomach. Pain travels through his body that causes him to double over and
spit out a wad of yellow gooey spit onto the floor. While Lord Siege is doubled
over, Raven swings his foot out and knocks the lightsaber from his grasp.
76. INT. COREIGN PALACE - CORRIDOR
Karus' head pokes out from around a corner.
KARUS
All clear.
Arianna and Karus walk down the hall. In Arianna's hand is a blaster pistol, and
while she is clearly in a great deal of pain from her wound, she is still able to
walk and fire the pistol. They turn another corner without first checking, and four
Skenvi Soldiers turn to look at them. Arianna is the first to open fire, with Karus
not far behind. All four Soldiers are struck down before they can even raise their
guns.
ARIANNA
They must have the Guards locked up. I haven't seen them yet, or
their bodies. If we can get to the Security Control Room,
we can unlock the cells and free them.
Karus follows after Arianna as she leads him down halls and around corners. Along
the way, they kill another few Soldiers and travel down a flight of stairs. Arianna
stops and turns to Karus.
ARIANNA
Come on, it's just around the corner.
Karus pokes around the corner and sees a large group of Skenvi Soldiers guarding
the Security Room door. He turns around to face Arianna.
KARUS
This may be a problem.
Karus stops for a moment to plan what they'll do next, and then sees a Soldier's
body lying prone on the ground back down the hall. A single grenade is attached to
his belt. Karus runs over and grabs it.
KARUS
When I throw it, start shooting.
Karus and Arianna jump out from behind the corner. Arianna opens fire just as Karus
throws the grenade. By the time the grenade explodes, two Soldiers are already down
and many of the rest have dived for cover. Two more get thrown backwards and
peppered with shrapnel from the blast. Arianna ducks back around the corner, only
to poke out and fire at any Soldier that gets too close. Karus dodges the blasts as
he runs towards the Soldiers. He ducks to avoid a blast and jumps to the side to
avoid another as he approaches the group of Soldiers. He fires point blank at one,
knocking him off his feet with a burning hole in his chest. He punches another in
the head and then turns and rams the butt of his gun across another's face. He
turns back around and fires at the first Soldier he punches, then turns once again
and fires at the one he hit with his gun.
A Soldier fires at Karus, but he drops to the floor, allowing the shots to slam
into another Soldier. Karus fires from his position on the floor, taking out the
Soldier that first fired at him. Another two Soldiers drop dead as Arianna fires at
them from her position. Karus rolls onto his back and jumps to his feet. He dodges
a shot, which continues to travel through the air until it hits the electronic lock
on the Security Room doors, shortening it out.
The doors slide open and all the Security Guards run out and begin tackling the
Skenvi troops from behind. Turvo picks up a fallen gun and joins Karus in firing at
the remaining Soldiers, lasers soaring all over the room. By the time a few of the
Guards are shot and fall down dead, the remaining Guards have weapons they took
from fallen Skenvi and return fire. Within a couple minutes, Arianna, Karus, and
the Guards have the remaining Soldiers surrounded. They drop their weapons and
raise their hands in defeat.
King Juster timidly walks out of the Security Room and lets out a cheer when he
sees the outcome of the battle. Arianna whips around at the sound of her father's
voice and runs towards him, giving him a hard hug. King Juster is flooded with
relief.
KING JUSTER
Arianna! I was worried…you're hurt!
Arianna lets go of her father.
ARIANNA
I'm alright. Karus did a good job of patching me up. But I'm only
alive because of the Jedi. If we don't help them, they'll
die.
The King points to a few Guards.
KING JUSTER
You three. Seal the prisoners in the holding cells. The rest of
you come with me. The Jedi could use our help.
KARUS
This way.
Karus runs, leading the way. King Juster picks up a gun and runs beside his
daughter, the guards close behind.
77. INT. COREIGN PALACE - MAIN HALL
Soran is forcibly whipped around and is met with a punch to the face. He elbows
Sha'Tilk in the face and uses an uppercut punch to send her stumbling back. The
bounty hunter regains her balance and reaches into her belt, pulling out a hold-out
blaster.
SHA'TILK
Well, that was entertaining. It's a shame I won't get the
opportunity to snap your neck with my bare hands, but dead is
dead. It ends here, Jedi.
78. INT. COREIGN PALACE - THRONE ROOM
Raven and Lord Siege, both having lost their lightsabers, have started hand-to-
hand. Raven sends a roundhouse kick towards Lord Siege's chest and sends him
falling back to the floor. Raven runs at him and slams his fist down, but Lord
Siege rolls out of the way. Raven's hand meets painfully with the hard floor. Back
on his feet, Lord Siege punches Raven in side of the face. Raven stumbles back a
few steps before Lord Siege manages to slam a fist into his skull.
Raven tumbles backwards and falls down against the stairs leading to the Thrones.
He raises his head to look at Lord Siege angrily, hate radiating off of him. Blood
trickles from the edge of his mouth.
Lord Siege hurriedly scans the room and spots his lightsaber. Reaching out, he
pulls it towards his hand. As it skids across the floor, he glances to his
right…just in time to see that Raven has already retrieved his own lightsaber. The
blue blade arcs up towards his wrist, and at the last moment he tries to pull it
back, letting his lightsaber go flying to the other side of the room. Despite this,
Raven's blade slices off his hand at the wrist. Lord Siege screams in pain, but
when Raven tries to position the blade for the killing blow, Siege lashes out with
his foot and knocks it out of his hand, though he burns his leg in the process.
Siege then catches Raven's wrist with his boot, crushing bones and pinning it to
the floor. His face twisted in rage and blinding pain, he picks Raven up with the
Force. Raven can feel the bones in his neck constricting, being crushed by an
invisible hand.
LORD SIEGE
And so it ends, boy.
79. INT. COREIGN PALACE - MAIN HALL
Sha'Tilk raises the blaster and fires, just as Karus and the Guards burst into the
room. Her aim thrown off, the bolt only grazes Soran's shoulder. She, however, is
riddled with blaster bolts by the Guards, and falls to the ground, her body a
smoking ruin. Karus picks up Soran's lightsaber off the floor and hands it back to
him.
KARUS
You might need this.
SORAN
Thank-you.
Soran ignites the blue blade as he turns to help his padawan.
80. INT. COREIGN PALACE - THRONE ROOM
Lord Siege turns in shock when Soran bursts through the doors. He turns back to
Raven, drops him, and lingers for just a moment.
LORD SIEGE
Or perhaps…so it begins.
Siege calls his lightsaber to his hand and jumps through the window. Soran rushes
to his padawan and checks his pulse. Seeing that he is still alive and breathing,
he runs to the window, only to see a dropship lift off into the sky.
81. INT. COREIGN PALACE - THRONE ROOM - DAYS LATER
The Throne Room is filled with guests of all species, dressed in their finest
clothes. Standing in the front line of the crowd is Soran, Raven, and Joran Korn of
the Jedi Council. At the front of the room, sitting on the two thrones are King
Juster and Princess Arianna, both smiling proudly at the crowd before them.
Standing directly in front of them is Chancellor Dorren of the New Republic.
CHANCELLOR DORREN
On behalf of the Senate, and all the citizens we represent, I,
Chancellor Dorren of the New Republic, hereby welcome the planet
of Coreign to the New Republic!
Grand applause fills the room. Once the applause dies down, the Chancellor
continues.
CHANCELLOR DORREN
I hope that you find it is everything you imagined it to be.
King Juster and Arianna rise to their feet and shake hands with Chancellor Dorren,
smiling.
KING JUSTER
It is already far grander than I could have wished. Thanks to the
Republic, my daughter is safe, and the people of
Coreign need not
fear another era of tyranny.
In the crowd, Joran Korn leans in to whisper to Soran. His voice is quiet, but
troubled.
JORAN KORN
The Council has been unsuccessful in uncovering any further
information on the Sith Lord you spoke of. If he is placed so
highly within the Skenvi political structure, they may be
more dangerous than we ever imagined possible. (he pauses)
And there are always two…if this Lord Siege is in fact the
apprentice, then his master might very well be the Skenvi
Emperor himself.
Raven and Arianna make eye contact. Raven can't help himself from smiling at her,
which is returned by a smile from Arianna, a connection flying between the two
without words having to be spoken.
CHANCELLOR DORREN
This concludes the ceremony. I wish the people of Coreign a
glorious future, but I also remind them that the present is a
dark time. As ever, we must stand fast against the rising tide of
evil.
The King and Arianna step down and stand beside the Chancellor as the Chancellor
also turns to face the audience. The room fills with clapping and applause.
82. EXT. COREIGN PALACE - ROYAL GARDEN - WATER FOUNTAIN - EVENING
The red glow from the setting sun washes across King Juster, Joran Korn, and Soran
as they stand by the water fountain that Queen Erin sat at earlier in the film.
King Juster plumps down onto the wooden bench, an expression mixed of confusion and
grief on his face.
KING JUSTER
I only want what is best for her.
SORAN
As do we, which is why we are making this request.
JORAN KORN
The Jedi Council has discussed the matter. It would be an honor
if Princess Arianna returned to Yavin with us to start her
training as a Jedi.
The King sits in silence, thinking things over. He looks up as Joran Korn
continues.
JORAN KORN
I understand your feelings, and would understand if you turned
our request down. We cannot and will not force you to do this,
but we do believe that it would be both in her best interests
and in those of the Republic.
A tear falls down King Juster's face.
KING JUSTER
My wife always had a feeling that Arianna was meant for greater
things then the crown, but I always passed it off as
nonsense.
Joran Korn lays a comforting hand on the King's shoulder.
JORAN KORN
You do not have to make a decision just yet.
A smile forms across the King's face as he wipes away his tear.
KING JUSTER
No. There's no need to wait. My mind is made up.
Soran turns sadly to walk away, but is stopped when King Juster grabs his arm.
Soran turns back to face him as he goes on.
KING JUSTER
If the Council believes that it is her destiny to become a great
Jedi, then who am I to deny it? It's her future, and if Arianna
is up to the challenge, she has my full approval.
Soran smiles at the unexpected answer. The King continues.
KING JUSTER
However, when it comes time for me to step down, Arianna must
return to take my place. There is no one else.
JORAN KORN
Agreed. With a Jedi Princess ruling it, Coreign will be in the
best of hands.
They shake hands with the King as he stands. The three turn to gaze at a rapid
waterfall in the distance, the orange light from the lowering sun reflecting off
the water.
83. EXT. COREIGN PALACE - ROYAL GARDEN - EVENING
Princess Arianna and Raven walk together, hand-in-hand.
ARIANNA
What will happen if my father agrees to the Council's request?
RAVEN
You'll be trained as a Jedi at the Temple on Yavin IV.
ARIANNA
With you?
RAVEN
With me. I promise, I'll never let anything happen to you again.
Ever.
Arianna looks back up at him, losing herself in his eyes. Her free hand slowly
moves to the back of Raven's head as she leans in to kiss him.
The second before their lips touch, Raven glances over and notices Soran standing
with Joran Korn and King Juster with his back turned to him. Raven turns away and
leaves Arianna's grasp. Arianna, heartbroken and crushed by the turn-down, steps up
to stand next to Raven once more.
ARIANNA
What's wrong? I thought you wanted this.
Raven is clearly torn in half.
RAVEN
I…I can't. I'm a Jedi, and soon, you'll be one also. I want you
more than anything in the galaxy, but you're the one thing I
can't ever have. (at the point of tears) What if I lose you
again? Do you know what I would do to get you back? (he
pauses) The galaxy doesn't need another Lord Siege. One is
enough.
Arianna shivers at the mention of that name and takes Raven's hand in hers once
more. She lays her head on his shoulder as they look out at the city below, the
glow from the sun shining overtop of the buildings.
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