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FADE IN EXT. DIESEL LOADING TRUCK STATION - NIGHT It is a mid morning turn over night for these hard working truckers. Men and Women are either loading, inspecting, locking up their semis or finishing up paper work so they can get home or hit the road. Next to a nice diesel truck is a YOUNG GENTLEMAN fixing the straps on his back pack. He looks to be in his mid 20's at the most. Clean cut face, rock hard body and a smile from cheek to cheek. Walking up from behind him is an older late 30's mid 40's Afro American OLDER GENTLEMAN holding a bouquet of flowers in his left hand. OLDER GENTLEMAN Hey Jimmy, Jimmy. The Younger Gentlemanís name is JIMMY HAZE. JIMMY Eric, Hey. Older Gentlemanís name is ERIC WRIGHT. ERIC Just wanted to thank you for covering my shift last minute, you know I really appreciate it. JIMMY Hey I needed the money, anytime...but If I'd known you were going to bring me flowers I would of worn my red dress and high heels. They both laugh simultaneously. ERIC Maybe next time Jimmy, may be next. Eric lifts the flowers up. ERIC (CONT'D) These babies here are for the wife. JIMMY I don't understand why chicks dig flowers anyhow. Don't get me wrong, they look good and smell nice but they wind up dead dry and grey you know. Big waste of money if you ask me. ERIC Your married Jimmy? JIMMY No sir'ee, not in my best interest. ERIC I didn't think so. Well when and if you marry you'll need to know, anything to please and make them happy. The trick to a successful marriage is you have to keep your woman on her toes, don't spoil them with to much or leave them with to little. When you master that than you wonít have to understand why they like flowers or holding hands, youíll know how to play the game. BLACK SCREEN Eric's voice is heard singing a very familiar Motown tune My Girl. The volume of the music is just low enough to hear Eric harmonizing to the song. ERIC (O.S.) (singing) I got sunshine on a cloudy day, when it's cold outside I got the month of may. INT. CHEVY CAVALIER VEHICLE Eric is driving with his left hand, sporting a nice ring which signifies that he is married and from the looks of his shinny ring and beaming smile heís proud. Laid out on the passenger seat is a dozen fresh cut flowers ready to make a girl happy. ERIC (singing) I guess you say what can make me feel this way. My girl. CUT TO: INT. UNKNOWN BEDROOM Sex is steaming up this room between two passionate in heat people. The WOMAN sexy mid twenties is laying on the bottom of a squeaky bed and literally getting the shit fucked out of her by a well built Latin GENTLEMAN who knows what to do in the bedroom. GENTLEMAN (deep accent) My girl, mi amour........ The Latin Gentleman continues to excite her by speaking and thrusting in his Spanish dialect. WOMAN (moaning) Yes, yes..... The Woman clenches his hand with her left. Her wedding band matches the one Eric is wearing. BACK TO: INT. CHEVY CAVALIER VECHILE Eric is more into the song than when we last saw him. ERIC I got so much honey the bees envy me. Eric pulls his vechile into a drive way and shuts off the car, still singing without the radio on. ERIC (CONT'D) I gotta sweeter song than the birds in the tree. Eric exits the car goes around the vehicle opens the passenger door and grabs the flowers then proceeds to close the door. BACK TO: INT. UNKNOWN BEDROOM The bed is squeaking and the post is banging off the wall, mixed to the sounds of grunting and moaning. Next to bed is a small table with a picture of Eric and the Woman that is being fucked by the Latin Gentleman. The picture falls forward shattering the glass caused from the continuous hard knocking. EXT. HOUSE A key is entered into the door lock. Eric goes to walk in but pauses fir a second, takes a look over his shoulder and seeís a unknown vechile parked next to his house. Nothing suspicious, just one of those feeling. INT. BEDROOM It is now very evident that the bedroom belongs to Eric and the Woman. The Woman is riding the Latin Gentleman like a cowboy on a wild bull. The Latin Gentleman begins to twitch and blows off a load right inside the Woman. She smiles and starts rubbing on her chest. She then slides out of him and goes down on him to bring the one eyed monster back to his feet for another round. INT. HOUSE HALL Eric is walking up the stairway into the hall. As he walks he stops out the blue and turns around, he notice something on the floor. On the floor is a pair of male dress pants and one shoe. Eric picks up the shoe drops it down softly and examines the pants by searching the pockets to find a wallet. Eric takes it further by opening up the wallet and taking out the drivers license inside. Eric stands up and looks straight ahead at the door, eyes filled with anger and pain. INT. CLOSET The closet door is open. By the light from the hall way we see a bat only as a silhouette. Eric grabs the bat and closes the closet door. INT. NOWHERE Eric is sitting in a nondescript room speaking directly to the camera with the softball bat clinched in his hands. ERIC What would you do...what would you do in this situation? What.. you think you could be rational, really...well put yourself in my shoes...no go..come on now my feet don't stink. Pictures this, on the road truck driving for over 100 hours a week. Job pays good but the hours suck. So being a nice husband I decide to surprise my wife and come home, take her out like before we got married you know. Looks like I'm the one thatís gonna get the surprise. INT. BEDROOM The Latin Stallion is on his knees with his back arched he is probably receiving the best blow job he has ever been given to this point in his life. The Latin Gentleman has his back towards the door. The gentleman starts talking dirty in Spanish. Behind him we see Eric come through the door. The Woman seeís Eric from the corner of her eye. WOMAN ERIC!!!! The Latin Gentlemen looks over his shoulder and gets knocked out just as he turns around. INT. INTER THOUGHTS Thereís an argument going on between the INTELLECTUAL side of Eric and the THUGISH side. Int. Eric stands to the right as Thug Eric is to the left. Eric himself is sitting on a stool. INTELLECTUAL ERIC Wait, wait you have to calm down and analyze this misunderstanding youíre getting out of control again. THUGISH ERIC Out of control fuck you motha fucker, kiss my ass, I'm gonna skin that Ricky Ricardo looking motha fucker. INTELLECTUAL ERIC Please lets try and figure this out. THUGISH ERIC There is nothing to figure out. Ok may be there is, heres the problem.A: This fucker is meat bouncing your wife, his dick between her legs, her mouth and probably her ass, do you understand what Iím saying. So the only way to solve this problem is to kill this motha fucker NOW!!!. INTELLECTUAL ERIC Smashing him in the head with a bat was not barbaric enough for you? We can walk out be cool and pretend like nothing happen. THUGISH ERIC Cool, cool motha fucka I can't be cool, this isn't a cool situation. This is a hot situation like being inside a car on a hot day with no AC, fucked up widows and a fan that blows car fumes. Not so cool now isn't it. INTELLECTUAL ERIC Ok but I'm not a killer and neither are you. I can't go back to prison, I can't.Intellectual Eric breaks down and cries. INTELLECTUAL ERIC (CONT'D) (crying) Why did she do this to us, we were good to her, treated her like a princess and now this? THUGISH ERIC Look at you....as pissed as I am right now and as bad as I want to kill this motha fucker, I don't think our conscience can deal the wheels with this type of consequences... forget it. Thuggish Eric looks defeated. Intellectual Eric works his tears into laughter. INTELLECTUAL ERIC Forget it, forget it, I canít forget it. You think you can build a life with me and break it down it down just like that do you, DO YOU....not this time sweetheart. THUGISH ERIC That's what I'm talking about, thatís what I'm talking about. Lets pounce on this motha fucka. INT. GARAGE Eric is enraged but in control, the Latin Gentleman is naked with his dick in a vise. Eric secures it and removes the vise handle. Eric shakes his head and places the hacksaw down on a working table. ERIC Did you know that one doesn't find happiness in marriage but brings happiness into one? GENTLEMAN Please, I'm sorry...please. ERIC This isn't a please situation, stop pleasing. GENTLEMAN I have money, I will give you. ERIC Shut up, shut the fuck up. Now is not your time, it's my time. Eric grips the vise handle, locks it back in and tightens it just a little. Eric then removes the handle. The Gentleman screams in pain. GENTLEMAN Vic..Victo...Victor Espenoza, my name is Victor Espenoza. I..I..I ERIC Oh we're introducing ourselves. Iím Eric Wright and the bitch passed out in the room is my wife Anisa Stevens...but you knew that already. VICTOR What are you going to do to me...Let me free I wont press charges, tell anyone about this, nothing, please, please. My word is honor. ERIC Victor, do you feel sorry for what you did? Adultery is a serious thing. In other countries they would have you and your parents killed for what you did in my very own house today... But I'm not gonna kill you Victor. VICTOR Thank you senor, thank you. Victor begins to thank God and pray.. ERIC Four questions, just four questions I will ask. If you answer them I'll give you the opportunity to leave with your life. Answer wrong, well lets just say you don't want to answer wrong. VICTOR OK, ok, what ever you say. Please... Eric grabs a small bottle of lighter fluid from his pocket. ERIC Question number one...Lets see if I can word it correctly. Where and when did you meet my wife? Victor calming down trying to hold the pain in the best that he can. VICTOR Four months ago at starbucks. The pain builds on Eric's face every time Victor says a word. ERIC Go on. VICTOR I was in line and she said she didn't know what to order so I helped her in deciding thatís it....but If I had known she was married senor. Just as Victor begins to add more to the conversation then he was suppose to Eric squeezes lighter fluid on his face. Victor screams out. ERIC All I want is an answer, not two, not three or four, one. Number two, have you had sex with my wife prior to today. VICTOR No.. Eric doesn't believe him so this time instead of a little squeeze of fluid he douses him with it. ERIC (angry) Don't you bullshit me mother fucker, don't do that shit. Did you or did you not pin the tail on my wife prior to today. VICTOR (very weak) Yes. ERIC How many times did you and my wife tango? VICTOR It's been a couple of times. ERIC Couple meaning twice or a couple meaning you don't want to give me the number. Iím losing my patients here. Victor lost in words. VICTOR I..I...couple...I. Eric slashes the front of Victorís chest with a blade he had on the side of his belt. ERIC Quit fucking around and tell me what I want to know VICTOR. VICTOR Ok..ok....5 maybe 6 times. ERIC Five or six Victor five or six? VICTOR Six, six times. ERIC Are you sure? VICTOR Yes. ERIC Thank you. Question number four. Do you honestly feel bad for what you have done to me and my life? Eric goes to squeeze more fluid but nothing comes out. ERIC (CONT'D) Oh...empty...hold that thought. Eric walks to a corner, brings out a gasoline container places it on the table and pops the top open. ERIC (CONT'D) Well. VICTOR (begging and crying) Mister I am sorry for bringing this upon you, if I would of known she was married the first time then this wouldn't be going on right now. The garage door is slightly opened, we can see that Anisa has regain consciousness. She has no idea what is going on. Anisa walks into the garage just as she opens the door she sees Victor at the vise and Eric holding on to the gasoline container. Frighten she closes the door but curiosity forces her to take another peek. Eric snatches her in the garage by her hair. Anisa tries to fight and scream. INT. GARAGE Eric unhands her and Anisa stands still in shock. ERIC Look it here, one happy family. I support her and you fuck her, isnít that sweet. A moment of silence is held between the three. ANISA Stop this, you're out of control Eric, I'm sorry if I hurt you please, baby please just stop, this is madness. ERIC You're right, you're right this is wrong. What am I thinking. Victor in pain but for the first time looks relived knowing the situation has come to an end. Eric starts laughing like a nut case drugged up on pills. He looks over at Anisa and tosses the gasoline container knocking her to the ground. ERIC (CONT'D) I'm going to let you go Victor because you and me both are the victims of this woman's lust and greed. Eric looks over to Anisa. Eric makes his way towards Victor with the vise handle in hand. Just as he gets to him he stops. ERIC (CONT'D) I want to tell you a little story before I free you. Awkward moment in time to tell a story but I feel it's necessary. Anisa's nose begins to sprinkle with blood. ANISA Sick you're sick in the FUCKING HEAD!!! ERIC Deceitful lies and trickery will do that to you. Now shut the fuck up and don't say another word. Anisa stands up as if sheís full of liquid courage. Eric grabs her, to the right of her is a chest big enough to fit a small person inside. Eric strikes her once in her face causing what ever fight she had left in her to decease. Eric stuffs her inside the chest locking it shut behind him. ERIC (CONT'D) Victor still with me? VICTOR (losing control) You insane piece of shit let me out of here, I do not deserve this, fuck, Jesus Christ. Victor continues to swear in Spanish. Eric steps right in front of Victor face, looks him dead in the eyes, Victor becomes silent. ERIC Did I tell you to speak, huh DID I TELL YOU TO SPEAK? He then proceeds by slashes him four times in his chest with his already used blade. ERIC (CONT'D) I sense a lot of hostility going on, don't you? Eric firmly grabs his face and regains his exposure. ERIC (CONT'D) Have you ever been fucked. Victor's eyes meet with Eric. ERIC (CONT'D) Fucked over Victor, have you or have not? VICTOR Yes. ERIC Not fucked like someone took you for cash money... fucked like by your own kind, by someone outside the pin you would call a homie. Ever been to jail Victor? VICTOR No. ERIC I have. My own kind..these motha fuckin niggers did something to me that can never be forgotten. Those fucks stripped me, pinned me down used hair grease to lube my rectum and one by one shoved their manhood inside me like I was a trailer trash virgin. It was the thing to do with the new bitch in the jail house. They tore me up pretty bad... giving me a combine total of 23 stitches. That wasn't the worst part for me Victor, not even close. Stitches heal but mental scars donít go away. That night five niggers splashed their semen in my body, nothing I could do to prevent it, nothing. You might be wondering why I'm telling you this...never told anyone about this before. Eric removes his shirt. ERIC (CONT'D) You've giving me another mental wound...I am not the bad guy here...the villain...evil filth...you are...you are and she is. It mentally, permanently scars and haunts you...but this time I can do something about it. Eric picks up a hacksaw. Victor, terrified, screams. VICTOR (Loud) "Stop! Stop! You're not going to to cut it off, please?" What I did to you was wrong I..I wasn't sorry at first but I am now, please...You promised not to kill me. Eric tosses the hacksaw over close enough for Victor to reach. Eric walks over to where the chest is we hear Anisa inside. Eric bends over and picks up the gasoline container and pour it over the chest making a trail over to the front door. ERIC I said I would give you the opportunity to leave here with your life...here you are. Victor holds the hacksaw in his hand looking at it, then looking at the chest and back to Eric. Eric removes some matches out from his pocket and lets one fly fully inflamed. INT. CHEVY CAVALIER VECHILE Eric starts the car engine. My Girl continues where it left off from his CD player. Eric is not driving alone. Thuggish Eric and Intellectual Eric smile in the back seat They all dance and laugh. Just as Eric drives off we see that their is nobody really inside the car but himself singing. FADE TO BLACK.
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