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Friday, August 17, 2018

Insomniac by David M Troop – Filmed! - post author Zach Zupke

Insomniac (12 page short thriller in pdf format) by David M Troop

A late night talk jock gets an unsettling caller.

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Hollywood and its inhabitants live in a crazy paradox. In one breath, they claim originality to be extinct. Yet they pan for it… daily. Then, when a true nugget of uniqueness is found, it’s immediately turned into a movie dating game:

“Think of it as Superman meets Super Fly!”

The Godfather – meets George Burn’s Oh, God!

Mary Poppins Meets Mary Jane!”

(I think that last one actually happened. At least my hallucination-induced penguins say so.)

And David Troop’s hauntingly clever Insomniac could certainly be pitched in those terms. It’s “Play Misty for Me” meets “Se7en.” Now there’s an easy elevator sell. But I’d rather call it… screenplay gold!

Like many an evil tale, Insomniac begins at the edge of night. Late night talk show host Dave Burrows burns the late night oil in Philly – catering to listeners who’d rather not be listening, but have tuned in for multiple sorry reasons: “My husband snores.” “You catch the Eagles game, Dave?” In other words, they’re insomniacs. Sleep’s a distant memory.

But Dave’s rapport with his listeners soothes their woes… well, mostly. Treating each anonymous caller as a long-lost friend, his delivery is warm and glib. Especially when he gets a ring from “The Caller”, who tells him – “I’m having this nightmare. But I’m awake.” The Caller worries out loud that he’s gone crazy.

“No. Actually it sounds like my first marriage,” quips a weary Dave. “Get out and take a walk. Clear your head.” Spot on advice. Or so it seems.

Two weeks later, the “Caller” resurfaces. This time it’s to thank Dave for his sage advice. The Caller’s enjoyed his new practice of walking at night. Especially that time he met a freshman girl. “She looked young. Almost too young to be in college…”

The Caller trails off, his voice sinister. And Dave snaps instantly awake. Both he – and the reader – know immediately when this story’s heading. Details of a butterfly shaped toe ring. A foot tied to a bed. Muffled screams. And a bedpost slamming against a wall. Helpless to do anything, Dave (and his technicians) take the horrifying sounds in.

But ultimately – is it just a prank? A sleep-deprived man’s sick idea of humor? Or is the Caller horrifyingly real – leaving a mysterious trail of terror, wafting over the city like scattered radio waves? You’ll have to read Insomniac to find out. Inspiringly original, it’s a throwback to the golden age of terror and suspense. A case of “clever” meets “terrifying.”

Budget/casting: Locations minimal. A rented sound booth would be great, but any office setting will suffice. An apartment and a toe ring. Four actors…and a foot. Also, I immediately heard Kevin Spacey as the Caller. If you can get him, give HIM a call. Immediately!

About the writer: David M Troop resumed writing in 2011 after a twenty-five year hiatus. Since then, he has written about 50 short scripts, two of which have been produced. Dave would like to make it three. He was a regular, award-winning contributor to MoviePoet.com. Born on the mean streets of Reading, PA, Dave now resides in Schuylkill Haven with his wife Jodi and their two lazy dogs Max and Mattie. He can be reached at dtroop506 “AT” Gmail

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About the reviewer: An accomplished writer as well, Zack Zupke lives in Los Angeles. He can be contacted via email at zzupke “AT” yahoo

Wednesday, August 1, 2018

Trust Me written by P. H. Cook – Filmed - post author Don

Trust Me (6 pages in pdf format) by P.H. Cook

A little girl in danger is happy to be saved by a police officer…


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Friday, July 27, 2018

Stories Of The Subconscious Mind by Curt Dennis – Filmed! - post author Don

Stories Of The Subconscious Mind (5 pages in pdf format) by Curt Dennis

If you could go inside the subconscious of a depressed person, what would you find?

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Friday, July 20, 2018

Lullaby by Warren Duncan – Filmed as “Hush” - post author Don

Lullaby (3 page horror in PDF format) by Warren Duncan

A dad pushes his daughter on a park swing. A perfectly innocent moment until it’s not.

Hush (Horror Short Film) from Logan Ward on Vimeo.

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Wednesday, July 18, 2018

Winters Past by Tony Moore – Filmed - post author Don

Winters Past (20 pages in PDF format) by Tony Moore

A Britain devastated. ‘The Fire’ has ripped apart the world. The street drug Utopium allows for individuals to relive past memories at the cost of slowly destroying their minds. Can Hendric, a man trying to remember the death of his sister, uncover the disturbing truth whilst trying to surviving trapped inside the brutal drug den of a psychotic underworld leader?

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Monday, July 16, 2018

Devlin and the Clown by Daniel Walker – Filmed - post author Don

Devlin And The Clown (7 pages in pdf format) by Daniel Walker

A young man develops paranoia after meeting a creepy looking clown.

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Monday, July 9, 2018

Normal Activity by Warren Duncan – Filmed! - post author Don

Normal Activity (4 pages in pdf format) by Warren Duncan

Two home intruders cause a man to come to terms with the grim truth about himself. (Psychological Thriller)

Normal Activity from Jemel Richards on Vimeo.

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Thursday, July 5, 2018

The Cleaner by René Claveau – filmed as “Cleaners” - post author Don

The Cleaner (6 pages pdf format) by Rene Claveau

A bodyguard walks in on the cleaner hired to dispose of his client’s body. 6 pages

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Monday, June 18, 2018

The Ephesian by Mark Lyons out on Amazon Prime - post author Don

Watch The Ephesian by Mark Lyons on Amazon Prime!

When a long-grieving father lobbies to visit a killer on death row, he walks into the chance of a lifetime to come face-to-face with the man who murdered his infant son.


The Ephesian (16 pages in pdf format) by Mark Lyons (rc1107)

A mourning father lobbies to visit a gangster on the eve of his execution.

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