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Sunday, October 28, 2012

So Pretty – Filmed! - post author Don

Congratulations to James. His short horror script So Pretty was filmed.

An avid fan of modern day vampires takes the late train home. 6 pages – pdf format

Discussion Board Member, say nice things to James on the Discussion Board

I’m particularly thrilled as SimplyScripts was the first place that script saw the light of day, and this is where the director found it.

12 Comments so far


Justin Waddell
October 30th, 2012 at 1:31 am

James, interesting perspective on vampires..
I like vampires, and like to see them in action/horror
settings more then I do in love stories(Twilight). The Intro is awesome, you don’t really know who Sean is, a man with confidence, or a creep. But the jokes on Lisa when he reveals his true self. Cool story- could see it being the intro to a feature!



Courtney Love
October 31st, 2012 at 2:52 am

How much vampire talk does it take to kill a film? five full minutes worth. this short sucks worse than a vampire bite, which i found myself hoping for as i forced myself to watch it. in fact, i’m still hoping that some cinematic vamp will suddenly fang this one to death before it has a chance to spread among real film lovers. I want to suck theblood right our of my eyes after seeing this suckfest.


Courtney Lovesmywriting
October 31st, 2012 at 6:51 pm

Thanks for watching, Courtney. Was obliged to waste nine minutes of your life.

Justin, thanks for watching and the kind words. We are working on another episode with Sean’s character. When I get the script done it will probably post here first so the usual clan can hammer it, only to improve it.



November 1st, 2012 at 1:57 pm

LOVED THIS! I am a big fan of Vampire myths, yet can’t stand what Twilight. Vampires are meant to be feared, not sparkly. I love this true vampire’s approach to the “modern vampire”. This is well done.

Will spread the word.


Michael Zuno
November 4th, 2012 at 6:52 pm

8 minutes… For 8 minutes I was excited, courious and involved. I loved your short film and wanted more. I look forward to more from you.
Thanks for the treat, MZ


Michael Belfast
November 6th, 2012 at 3:04 pm

Very enjoyable. Great atmospherics. Keep it up.


Wes Williams II
November 8th, 2012 at 8:58 am

Dude. Great directing job man. effects were cool, actors were good and emotions on point. If you stole that shot guerilla style.. I would worship you! Dont tell though, have us directors wondering. Congrats!
-Wes Williams II
–CEO of Camp 9 Films


November 10th, 2012 at 4:21 am

Good job!!!! II look forward to more of your films.. Im truly inspired.. and wanna write my own short 🙂


Cindy L. Keller
November 12th, 2012 at 9:37 am

Very nice. Good all around. I enjoyed every minute of it.
I thought this was a good story and the actors were pretty darned good too.

Good job.


November 21st, 2012 at 10:48 pm

Awesome take. Really spooky- with a good relationship building between the two. The shot from the reflection in the mirror was a nice tipping point and it progressed from there. looking forward to making my own after enjoying something like this.


SimplyScripts - Movie Scripts and Screenplays » So Dark – sequel to So Pretty written by James Williams
June 4th, 2013 at 12:03 pm

[…] his actions in the short film “So Pretty“, Sean, a 200-year-old vampire with a conscience, has now been arrested for murdering a […]


SimplyScripts - Movie Scripts and Screenplays
February 15th, 2014 at 9:22 am

[…] remember So Pretty about a vampire fan taking a late train home where she meets […]

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