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ZIP ACROSS AMERICA
SCREENPLAY
BY
RAYMOND VACA JR.
Story
By
RAYMOND VACA JR.
Copyright @2003 by Raymond Vaca Jr.
WGAw # 907646
ZIP ACROSS AMERICA
STORY BY RAYMOND VACA JR.
SCREENPLAY BY RAYMOND VACA JR.
SCRIPT SYPNOSIS
A group of teenagers from different social-economic, cultures and races come
together through their school job service where they all are assigned jobs with
ZIP, ZONE INTERSTATE PARCELS, a company that ships parcels across America.
While at ZIP they overcome their differences and form as a unit once they
investigate and decide to save AMERICA from sabotage including bubbles in malls,
faulty sprinklers disrupting youth sports, and other hi-jinks against amusement
parks, water parks and a new meaning to "runs" at baseball stadiums across
AMERICA.
ZIP unwittingly is used as an instrument of choice to achieve the misdeeds of a
band of disgruntled Central American undocumented people who desire to become
Americans
While not anti-American, this band of people want more than anything to become
sworn nationalized Americans. When governmental red tape prevents them, they
decide that no one should get to enjoy or take America for granted. Almost every
state in the union is named or subject to having their American way of life
interrupted
While on the way to becoming national heroes, the teenagers solidify a
brother/sister relationship, see an unexpected romance develop, help one find
his way in life, and see one come to understand and commit to the redevelopment
of the inner city.
All finding that they are proud to be an AMERICAN.
FADE IN
1 INT - INS OFFICE -LOS ANGELES - MORNING 1
As the pledge of allegiance is recited in an office of the Immigration and
Nationalization Service a small gathering of people stand with their right hands
in the air. The diversity of the group is noted as they are made up of different
national origins and wearing clothing of their region. An over-flowed audience
of proud and smiling relatives and friends stand along the walls and behind
those sitting. A television news crew is taping the ceremony
2 EXT -ZIP FLAGPOLE - PARKING LOT - L.A. - MORNING 2
As the Pledge continues a huge American flag is being raised in the front
parking area of ZIP'S. Vehicles with the ZIP logo exit the loading area to make
deliveries. As the drivers approach the flagpole they stop their vehicles, exit
and stand at attention for the rising flag.
3 EXT - STREET AT FLAG POLE SITE - MORNING 3
A motorcycle officer drives slowly towards the flagpole. Officer pauses to watch
the raising of the flag. The reflection of the flag bounces off of his
sunglasses. He salutes as the flag reaches the proper setting.
2A EXT - FLAP POLE SITE - PARKING LOT - MORNING 2A
A fire truck races approaches the flag pole with its emergency equipment on. As
the firefighters reach the swaying flag their faces beam with intensity. The
motorcycle officer waves to the firefighters who reciprocate his acknowledgement
1A INT - INS OFFICE -LOS ANGELES - MORNING 1A
The pledge of allegiance continues as MARIA, 22 years old, from a South American
country, stands with her right hand up. The television crew focuses on MARIA
with a close up. An elderly relative has her hands to her face beaming with
pride.
4 INT - SCHOOL CLASSROOM - MORNING 4
The pledge continues as a first grade teacher is facing the American flag. Her
students have their little right hand over their heart. The teacher is leading
her students as they near the end of the pledge.
3A EXT - STREET AT FLAG POLE SITE - MORNING 3A
As the flag waves proudly at its peak drivers reenter their vehicles and move
towards the street. Three children, first grade girls and a third grade boy are
late for school. They skip past the motorcycle officer. The children wave their
hands at the officer. The officer gives a thumb up to the children. Smiles
brighten the faces of the children.
2
1B INS OFFICE LOS ANGELES - MORNING 1B
Close up of MARIA as the recital of the pledge of allegiance ends. The host at
the front of the room walks to a podium to speak.
HOST
Families, friends and neighbors please
help me welcome the newest citizens
of these UNITED STATES OF AMERICA!
The crowd cheers, claps and yells with excitement. Newly sworn in American
citizens and observers wipe tears of joy from their eyes.
3B EXT - STREET AT FLAG POLE SITE - MORNING 3B
The three children reach the crosswalk with the flag in the background. The
school crossing guard motions for them to wait. A second fire truck approaches
the flagpole site. The children stand at the corner and give the firefighters a
thumb's up as the fire truck passes. The fire fighters smile at the children
whom nod their approval. The school crossing guard with her stop sign enters the
road to stop traffic. The children enter the crosswalk as the motorcycle officer
makes a U-turn to follow the fire truck. The motorcycle emergency lights are
flashing.
5 INT - TRAILER HOME - MORNING 5
Inside a small trailer home dirty dishes are piled high in the sink. Clothing is
scattered throughout the trailer. A white woman, mid-forties, lays hung over on
a sofa half-asleep. Her cigarette ashes mount. A fan nearby blows her hair
further in disarray. RANDY, 18, a bit overweight hair wet from the shower, walks
from his bedroom into the living room. He sneaks a peek at a clock as he walks
to his mother. He takes the cigarette from his mother smashing the piled ashes
out in an ashtray loaded with numerous cigarette butts.
RANDY
Mother you were supposed to wake me up.
You were suppose to get the car repaired
Now, I have to take the bus to my new job
RANDY grabs a nearby cereal box shaking its nearly empty contents. He takes a
hand full of it and puts it into a pocket. His mother rubs her eyes with a hand
and feels around for her cigarette with the other.
RANDY
If I complete my training and do good
maybe I can get a real job there.
For now, it's just for the summer.
Maybe I can help pay for your meds
and if I save enough maybe we can
take a little vacation, just you and me.
3
She leans forward on the sofa as she fumbles to remove another cigarette from an
almost empty package. She finally pulls one out successfully and begins to light
it with shaky hands.
RANDY'S MOTHER
Yeah...Whatever.
Pick up more cigarettes.
She falls back into a slumber turning her face away from RANDY. Moving to her
RANDY leans over and kisses her cheek. Her eyes closed she remains sitting
unresponsive. He leans into her ear and whispers.
RANDY
I love you mother. Someday somehow,
We're out of here. I'll make you proud.
He moves to the door. He turns to look at her dozed off. He notices a burning
cigarette in her hand and takes it. Putting it in an ashtray. He breaks into a
slight smile as he eats a handful of cereal.
6 EXT - BUS STOP CENTRAL - MORNING 6
Three black young adults walk together in their central Los Angeles
neighborhood. BEN, 18, well groomed with well-cared for hair.
KOOLAID and MADDOG, dressed sloppy with pants hanging low on their hips. All
three are wearing gang colors. They turn a corner where BEN stops to wait for a
bus.
BEN
This is my stop. Got to take the bus
to get me to my new gig. Gotta start
making paper with this summer job
and flip it for my mama. But now that
I've graduated, could lead to good things.
MADDOG
Hey I 'm doing good without school
BEN and KOOLAID glance at each other and start laughing.
BEN
Good for nothing! DOG, what you doing?
Getting minimum wage and no bennies!
KOOLAID
MADDOG is a fool. No one going to hire
him no how anyway. B...you different,
but it don't seem right you working.
People can be cold in the real world but
if you gots to work just don't forget
where you come from
4
BEN
You know I'm gonna represent
They bump fists as his friends depart. BEN becomes impatient so he begins to
pace while others waiting sit and ignore him. BEN moves to the roadway to look
out for the bus but sees nothing. As BEN moves back to his spot he approaches a
black male, mid-20's, well groomed who is passing through the bus stop area.
BEN
Hey brother, you got the time?
The male gives BEN and his gang colors a disgusted look as he glares at him
before speaking.
MALE
YOU... are NOT...my BROTHER
BEN is offended and shifts his position directly in front of the male.
BEN
FOOL, all I ask is the time and you
diss me. Brothers like you we don't need.
Choosing to ignore BEN the male maneuvers around him as the male deliberately
raises one arm to look at an expensive watch. After a pause, the male slowly
puts his arm down without saying a word. BEN gets in the face of the male and
points his finger at the man's chest.
BEN
WHAT! You think you better than me?
You better get back with that fake Cartier
BEN"S face is intense as he forms his hands into fists. The bus is pulling up to
the bus stop as other waiting passengers ready themselves for their ride. Some
passengers glance over shoulders to see the dispute as they shuffle to the
boarding area. The bus stops and door opens as those waiting hurriedly enter.
BEN refrains himself gliding from the male to enter the bus.
7 EXT - CHINATOWN STORE - MORNING 7
KIM LEE, 18, female, Asian American, is working at her father's store in
Chinatown. She finishes sweeping the floor and puts the broom away. Father is
working on the store's financial records and accounts using Chinese accounting
methods. KIM approaches her father's desk.
KIM LEE
Father, you must allow me to teach you
how to use a computer. This is the 21st
century. Get with it father.
5
KIM LEE'S FATHER
The Chinese method is almost fool proof.
Why would I risk a mouse and a virus?
KIM LEE'S FATHER
But even old China has allowed the
western world to enter the mainland.
KIM LEE admires her father working the Chinese math device
KIM LEE'S FATHER
This device is an old trusted friend.
You for one, need to find a friend
that you can trust and do things with
KIM LEE
A friend I can always get but a father
I only have you. I must leave now for
you would not want me to be tardy
Her father finally looks up from his books
KIM LEE'S FATHER
You are getting wise in your years
KIM LEE
Can you believe I got a job at ZIPS?
I hope I get computers and make friends
Bending to give him a kiss on the forehead. He touches her shoulder.
KIM LEE'S FATHER
One can go through life and assume.
Jobs and friends will come and depart.
Mistakes can be swept with a broom
Trust if there is room in your heart.
KIM LEE allows the wisdom of her father's words to seek in. She runs to the
door, stopping to look at her father working on his books.
8 INT - KITCHEN (TODD) - MORNING 8
Inside a well-kept modernized kitchen a family sits at a table. The news is on
the television. TODD, 18, with a clean-cut appearance, reads the wall street
journal. His father flips through the sports pages while sipping an orange
juice. The mother is at the counter buttering a bagel. TARA, 17, thin,
longhaired blond, finishes digesting her piece of toast before looking up at the
news.
6
TARA
Really, I still don't see what the big
fuss is about. These poor people have
to learn the pledge of allegiance AND
then say it out loud on T.V.... BIG DEAL!
Her family stops what they are doing to look at her. TARA shrugs her shoulders.
Her mother rolls her eyes in amazement. Father ignores it staying glued to the
sports. TODD drops the paper glaring at TARA.
TODD
Let's see, you're jealous because you
started learning the pledge in kindergarten
and just now you ALMOST have it down
TARA looks disgustedly at TODD as she pushes her food away.
TARA
Shows how much you know!
I knew the pledge by Jr. high
TODD returns to the wall street journal as mother at the sink turns her head to
look at TARA.
TARA
Why don't you get a life, find a girlfriend
instead of reading that weird paper.
TODD gets up from the table and reaches for his car keys.
TODD
We better get to ZIPS'. I wouldn't want
them to miss you while your at your best.
TARA jumps from the table as she motions to the maid with her cup.
TARA
Take this cup o off the mesa and clean o
them. Un do lay...gracias DELORES.
DELORES retrieves the cup. TARA returns her attention to her brother who makes a
face
TODD
Why bother with Spanish it's not going
to amount to anything the way you speak?
TARA
It can never hurt besides all that extra
time on my Spanish...
...It's just oozing out so easily now
7
9 EXT - ZIP PARKING LOT - MORNING 9
A late model car pulls into a parking space at ZIP. The door opens and out steps
JENNY. She is 18, beautiful Native American with long straight black hair. JENNY
closes the door and starts across the parking lot. She looks up and sees the
flag. Drivers and customers of ZIP'S in the parking lot gawk as she walks. JENNY
makes her way to the entrance of ZIP
10 INT - ZIP TRAINING ROOM- Los Angeles - MORNING 10
An American flag hangs on a wall in an empty training room. MR FENZEL, 40ish,
energetic and full of spirit is dressed in a ZIP uniform. After a brief pause
he places forms on his desk. Moving to a wall he straightens the ZIP motto "ZIP
ACROSS AMERICA". He casually turns to look at the rows of desks. Going to the
television set he turns it on to the morning news and leaves the room. The show
is running highlights of the INS swearing in ceremony.
9A EXT - ZIP PARKING LOT - MORNING 9A
RAUL, 18, is a Mexican-American from East Los Angeles. He steps out of his
friend's low rider. His attire consists of baggy pants hanging at the hips and
his shirt has one button over a white sleeveless tee shirt. He makes adjustments
to his sunglasses as he stands outside the car checking out the scene. He nods
to his friend very slowly. The friend looks to his left and then right before
pulling away leaving RAUL alone.
10A INT - TRAINING ROOM - MORNING 10A
A group of new employees enter the training room. Some stroll immediately to
vacate desks and sit. Others stand as RAUL walks in.
A low mummer in the room can be heard. BEN makes sure his hair is groomed
adjusting his colors as some of the others watch.
BEN
Man, I am tired of WAITING
My cuz didn't show, bus was late,
RANDY raises his hand to interject and to lighten the mood.
RANDY
Hey we got something in common
I was running late for the bus too...
...different reason
BEN gives RANDY an are you crazy look.
BEN
You and me we got nothing in common
Not now...Not ever!
8
MR. FENZEL walks briskly into the room. Those who are standing get to a vacate
desk. His towering presence is felt as everyone quiets as he makes his way to
the front of the room.
FENZEL
Welcome to your new home. ZIP hopes
you have a memorable experience.
Before we begin, let's place our desks
in a circle so we can learn about each other
The group gets off their seats ready for further direction
RANDY
This should be fun. Kind of like the
knights at the round table!
BEN
Yeah, but they didn't allow girls or
for that matter BROTHERS at the table.
FENZEL looks at BEN and his clothing. He moves near BEN.
FENZEL
They didn't wear colors either!
You're here to do a summer job.
You are not here to look cool
FENZEL'S movement closer to BEN is not loss upon the others who are anxiously
observing. He looks directly at BEN then at RAUL.
FENZEL
Each will be assigned to different areas
yet remain a group, a TEAM!
One thing you will learn here today is
that this is an ATTITUDE free work place.
FENZEL returns to his desk picking up a roster. Looking at it briefly before he
tosses it in the trashcan. He turns to face the group. TARA raises her herself
from her desk scanning the group as she speaks.
TARA
If we are a team then will we be
issued uniforms like in the military?
FENZEL
Since you have mentioned the military
Will anyone volunteer to inform us of
one of the sayings used in the military?
Group looks around for an answer. RAUL shouts out looking at TARA.
9
RAUL
Get down and give me ten
TARA rumbles through her purse before responding
TARA
Sorry don't have anything less than a twenty.
The group looks at her in disbelief while some giggle or laugh. TARA returns to
her desk sitting down sheepishly.
FENZEL
Anyone else want to give it a try?
RANDY bravely raises his hand.
RANDY
They say only two things come
from Texas...Steers and queers...
...And I'm not from Texas.
BEN
Don't have to be from Texas to be funny.
Lots of flakes and fruits in California
TARA
I just love fruits on my flakes
11 INT - RENTAL HOUSE LIVING ROOM - MORNING - 11
A small gathering of people are watching the news. They cheer as they see their
friend MARIA at the INS ceremony.
JOSE I
She finally becomes an American.
It has taken her years to get to this.
Yet, we from Central America, only
see the INS when they want to rid us
of jobs by raiding our work place.
JOSE I walks to the television and turns it off. ARMANDO speaks up.
ARMANDO
That's usually when it's a payday.
I am tired of the INS telling us we can
not be an American cause of red tape!
We work hard in this country.
We do the jobs others do not desire.
MIGUEL
It's more like being too lazy, spoiled.
10
JOSE II
This gringo I know was saying that
when he was growing up the best job
in America was a job at some place
called the Golden Arches. Now, he says
nobody wants to work there so our
primos, hermanos, tias have those jobs.
JOSE I
Plus, we pay taxes. We help this economy
when we buy food...clothes...appliances.
We in our hearts...we want only to be
welcomed as American too!
MIGUEL
Why do these people here take this beautiful
land, a place for opportunity, for granted?
10B INT - TRAINING ROOM - MORNING 10B
FENZEL
There's another saying. That is to never
VOLUNTEER for anything. But this is ZIP,
so we need a volunteer. How about TARA?
The group sits up after their attempt to hide from being called. TODD lets out a
huge smile as he shifts into a position more comfortable. TARA gently puts down
her makeup. She looks around until focusing on RAUL. She smiles and he tilts his
sunglasses looking at her intently.
FENZEL
You can take your time...
Please tell us a little about yourself
TARA slowly gets out of her chair to stand. She sees TODD glancing up at the
ceiling with hands in a prayer like position.
TARA
Hi, my name is TARA. I'M almost 18...
TODD
...You won't turn 18 for two months
Laughter from the group
TARA
That thing THERE I think is my brother!
I think he was adopted or they found him
I never could get the story straight.
11
BEN
Well that's a news flash
TARA
ANYWAY, I am trying to be Bi-lingual.
That's important when you go into fast
food restaurants. Plus where I live there is
a LOT of Spanish speaking people.
RAUL
Yeah, the hired help
More laughter as TODD covers his face with his hands and sinks back into the
seat. JENNY flashes a faint smile.
TARA
I am leaning Spanish and getting
MULE BEEN
RAUL does a double take as TARA looks directly at him. She points at him asking
of him while flipping a finger onto her wrist.
TARA
Qi horro s (que hora es)
RAUL cocks his head to the side shaking it in amazement. TARA, without a clue,
looks proudly at the other members in the group
TARA
I just asked this young man over here
For those who don't know...
I asked him ...What time is it?
FENZEL quickly looks at his watch and motions for TARA to sit down.
FENZEL
Well that was quite informative.
We don't want to burn too many brain
cells in one day....so thank you TARA.
Next, how about you young lady?
TODD with a huge smile gloats at TARA as he shakes his head side to side. FENZEL
points at KIM LEE who dutifully stands with confidence.
KIM LEE
I am KIM LEE and I live in Chinatown.
My father owns and has runs a grocery
there for a long time. He works hard
and is very wise in his way. I hope to
learn computers and make friends.
12
She abruptly sits back down. The group stares waiting for more. FENZEL nods to
RANDY who springs to his feet waving. He
puts his hand down upon reaching BEN who sits staring him down.
RANDY
My name is RANDY. I live in a white
mobile home so I guess I'm what some
might call white trailer trash.
This here is my second real job. My first
was with IN AND OUT BURGERS. I was
let go cause they said I was eating profits.
The group giggles as RANDY sits down and waves again
5A INT - TRAILER HOME - MORNING 5A
RANDY'S mother is tending to a hard cough while lying on a sofa. She
reaches for her cigarette pack but discovers that it is empty. She looks to a
clock on the wall and her eyes sadden at the time.
10C INT - TRAINING ROOM - MORNING 10C
FENZEL moves to center circle and looks directly at BEN and RAUL.
FENZEL
By the way there are no gangs no me
at ZIP. There is only one color- Blue.
There is but one race - human
A long silence before BEN reluctantly removes his colors.
TARA
Good, those colors clashed with your
wardrobe and your hair is still nice
BEN glares but she ignores him as she turns towards RAUL who stands pulling up
his pants, buttoning his shirt and removing his sunglasses.
TARA
Sunglasses did nothing for your beautiful eyes
Silence than a roar of laughter at the flirtatious remark
FENZEL
Now that we have an understanding
let us continue with introductions
since you're standing, go on
RAUL
Just want to get this over with.
My name is RAUL from East L. A.
13
TARA
Oh, is that Cajun country?
What city in Louisiana would that be?
Anywhere near Lafayette?
The group laughs as TODD covers his face with his hands. RAUL looks at TARA
bewildered and sits down waving her off. JENNY slowly rises lady like from her
seat, the group stares at her beauty. She moves her head in a way that her long
straight hair swings side to side.
JENNY
My name is JENNY. I'm not from here
TODD flirts with her with a wide smile
TODD
I would say that you're not
BEN holding his hands in a prayer like position and looks skywards.
BEN
AMEN. You could have come from Venus
I don't care. Just send more like you.
JENNY
I am a Native American and recently
moved here for college. I come from my
reservation on the Arizona -California border.
She blushes as she sits down. TODD flashes her a sly grin. BEN stands
BEN
Ouch! Can I ZIP across to her reservation?
If she's just a sample you better send me
to all the Indian reservations.
TODD
First the beauty now the beast.
Laughter from the room as JENNY blushes even more.
BEN
They call me BEN from the heart of L. A.
It is the land of the young and the strong.
It is important to me that we grow from
within. In time I want to return to my
community as a successful businessman.
The group warms up to BEN as they listen intently to BEN'S intensity.
14
BEN
We might be poor, we might not have
a fancy house to go to but we are very
much A PROUD PEOPLE
I am from Central L. A. Callie if you will.
The group lets out a collective applause of their approval as BEN sits back
down. TARA looks puzzled and whispers
TARA
Callie...I thought L. A. was in California
FENZEL
Maybe this is a good time for a break
12 INT - ZIP BREAK ROOM - MORNING 12
The group of new employees enters the break room with some going to tables. TARA
heads straight to a soda machine inserts paper money. Pushing buttons
frantically but no soda dispenses. She kicks it before moving to her seat. TODD
smiles as he leans back in his chair.
TODD
Too complicated for you?
TARA
Do you think you can do something?
Would it be too much to be a gentleman?
TODD
You're my sister so how can I be a
gentleman? NO can do!
TARA turns her body so that her back is to TODD.
TODD
Oh yeah! I hope you didn't put a
twenty and expect change.
The group laughs until they see JENNY walk into the room and up to the soda
machine. She is having trouble with the soda machine. TODD gets up and
approaches her. TARA is stunned as she turns to look at the event. RAUL cops a
peak at TARA attempting to be disinterested.
TODD
Maybe I can help you there. After all,
WE are a team now and as a gentleman
I must aide one in such dire need.
JENNY
Really, do you think that you can help?
15
JENNY smiles at TODD who looks at TARA and smiles at his sister.
TODD
Oh yeah, a damsel in distress should
not be so ignored
TARA
Damsel nothing more like Pocahontas
Besides, who's dire need are you assisting?
TODD kicks the machine causing a soda to drop. JENNY slowly bends to reach for
it. BEN and RANDY rise off their seats to look at her.
13 INT - ZIP OPERATIONS ROOM - MORNING 13
FENZEL leads the group on a tour of the building. They arrive at the main
operations room. FENZEL motions for the group to gather.
FENZEL
We had your schools provide us with
vital info, on your background, character,
your work effort - WHY?
America counts on companies like ours
for reliable and safe parcel delivery.
We have decided to call your team...
the EAGLE group. I hope you like each
other or at least that you can all get along.
JENNY and TODD steal a glance at each other and smile.
14 INT - BUS - AFTERNOON 14
BEN sits alone in the bus deep in thought as he glances at the dilapidated
structures as he near his neighborhood along his route. He reaches inside a ZIP
bag hesitating before slowly pulling out his gang colors. He holds his colors as
the bus slows. BEN stands and walks to the exit. He slowly puts on his colors as
the bus comes to a halt. BEN exits the bus and looks around his surroundings
6A EXT - BUS STOP - AFTERNOON 6A
As the bus pulls away BEN sees his friends round the corner. The two members of
the gang walk up to him. They exchange handshakes.
MADDOG
B...my man you still working?
Ain't gone establishment on us homies?
Ain't got to good for us is you?
BEN
Dog I'm always going to be real.
16
MADDOG flashes a look of uncertainty towards KOOLAID, which is not unnoticed by
BEN
BEN
CHILL! My mama got the school to
get me that gig. I'm not fixin to make
my mama look bad for nobody.
MADDOG and KOOLAID lighten up and exchange shakes with BEN
KOOLAID
I hear you. My old lady she trying hard
to get my backside to do SOMETHING!
BEN glances over to KOOLAID'S rather obvious backside.
BEN
Think she just looking for more ROOM
in your crib.
BEN and MADDOG giggle and high five each other
KOOLAID
No B... that's off the hook.
MADDOG
At least that job ain't causing you to
take no colors off your back.
BEN looks at the window reflection of his colors.
BEN
I'm always going to be part of this
hood no matter what color...
15 INT - RENTAL HOUSE KITCHEN - Los Angeles. - NIGHT 15
One week later, the same Central American men sit around a kitchen table. They
are drinking beer and playing cards. Empty beer cans are laying about the
kitchen, in and out of the trashcan. They are angry.
JOSE II
Again they turned down my application.
They turned down all of us in here.
I don't understand how that is when I
went to the same attorney as MARIA.
MIGUEL
Maybe you're just not pretty enough
JOSE II extends his hand and flips his wrist down. Others laugh.
17
ARMANDO
Ah Fayo, I do know some people have
the market on the convenient gas station
and corner store and no one can even
understand a damn word they are saying.
MIGUEL
Some work at or even own cleaners,
hair places, car shops and restaurants
Hey even the maids have to be legal
JOSE II
That is so politicians do not get in trouble
ARMANDO smashes a beer can with his fist on the table swishing it off the table.
The can lands next to a person with brown steel-toed boots.
ARMANDO
If we can not enjoy AMERICA then
why should others!
JOSE I
Especially, those who do not appreciate
what they have been given by simply
being born here when many people risk
their lives to come to America
ARMANDO
You know, I think there is something
that can be done so that the American
people should not take for granted
what they have.
16 INT - ZIP DISPATCH ROOM - DAY 16
A monitor with lighted markings track ZIP vehicles while on delivery routes.
RAUL is at dispatch, dressed in a pressed work outfit, with his hair combed,
working the monitor to watch and track vehicles. . FENZEL watches from the outer
room. RAUL flips a switch and talks.
RAUL
ZIP 141 what is your 20?
Be advised that you are 22 minutes late!
Silence as RAUL and FENZEL strain to listen for a response until a male voice
with a strong Hispanic ascent responds.
ZIP 141
ZIP 141 here I can not help it. It is
just way too many frijoles this week
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RAUL covers the mike looking at FENZEL and both start to laugh.
RAUL
It's the new guy on probation. He's
suppose to be good on electronic devises.
RAUL turns back and flips on the microphone
RAUL
ZIP 141 - just make all your runs.
No response until a loud and continuos fart is heard over the radio.
ZIP 141
I don't think that will be a problem
17 INT - COMPUTER ROOM - MORNING 17
About thirty partitioned areas with workers at their computers fill the room.
KIM LEE is working diligently at her assigned computer KIM LEE stands up and
looks over her partition to her neighbor, KISHA, black female, 20, who is
laboring along with her duties.
KIM LEE
Excuse me, what am I suppose to do
once I finish these procurement orders?
KISHA stops working and looks up in wonder.
KISHA
What, done all ready? Most summer folks
can't catch on let alone be done so quick
KISHA stands as she lightly claps her hands in approval. KIM LEE blushes at the
attention that KISHA is causing. Other workers look on.
KIM LEE
I don't know what it is. I just feel at
ease on a Computer and I somehow
figure how to do it.
KISHA
Well girlfriend, you got the touch.
By the way, my name is KISHA
KIM LEE looks surprised and asks of her new friend
KIM LEE
And I am KIM LEE! Are you Chinese?
KISHA breaks up in laughter.
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KISHA
Girl, I am as much Chinese as a burnt
fortune cookie at a Kansas City barbecue.
KISHA extends her hand to KIM LEE who puts out her hand. They shake hands and
smile. KIM LEE goes back to her chair and whispers
KIM LEE
A new friend...she called me girlfriend.
Father will be so proud for me.
Computers and now a friend
KIM LEE pulls out a folder filled with documents, and graphs
18 INT - LOADING AREA - MORNING 18
A conveyor belt type machine moves packages to its designated areas. BEN fitted
in his ZIP outfit works intently in the tracking area watching a device to see
that packages get the applied stickers. Handling the control device he maneuvers
them to ensure proper tracking.
BEN
This is like some bad ass video game.
He flicks more buttons as lights flicker. BEN looks to see if anyone is watching
before spinning in a chair as he makes adjustments.
BEN
Air conditioning blasting, lights flashing
and I get paid for THIS!
RANDY passes driving a forklift. He sees BEN so he stops and dismounts. He walks
over to BEN'S work area.
RANDY
Hi BEN, how you doing out here?
This place looks like a disco!
BEN glances over a shoulder looking strangely at him. He resumes his activities
but lays off the controls as RANDY makes himself at home.
BEN
Fool! What you know about disco in
white trailer trashville?
RANDY pauses as he thinks for a moment.
RANDY
I've done watched Saturday Night
Fever probably five or six times.
I got all the moves down.
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BEN
Then maybe we should hook up
and go to the disco near my crib.
RANDY gets excited and makes some dancing moves for BEN.
RANDY stops his impromptu dance before speaking in a proud voice
RANDY
You're not JIVING me any are you?
BEN rolls his eyes and smiles.
BEN
Oh no, you my man, you fit right in
tighter than a glove on O.J.
RANDY smiles and turns to leave raising a fist in the air.
RANDY
HEY, I can be the BRO without the FRO!
BEN gives him stern looking over until BEN lets out a wide grin.
BEN
You are one crazy white boy! You sure
your mama didn't sue the doctor for
delivering you so damn ugly!
RANDY bends over in laughter
BEN
I can tell you right now that if you had
been delivered C.O.D. your mama
would have told them she moved.
RANDY continues laughing before regaining his composure to speak.
RANDY
Hey, How about doing lunch?
Just you and me, Brother
BEN
If I could I would but the bus fare is
denting my pockets. Plus I'm saving!
He empties his pockets and motions he is broke. RANDY removes a battered wallet
from his pocket and inspects the contents.
RANDY
No worries MON, I got you covered.
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BEN
If you for real...I'm there.
RANDY gives two thumbs up and smiles. He turns to leave as he performs more
dance moves on his way to his forklift. BEN smiles.
BEN
This don't make you no brother!
19 INT - ZIP CONFERENCE ROOM - MORNING 19
A moderate size conference room is filled with white shirt types. TODD, wearing
a shirt and tie, sits in the meeting with executives. As TODD takes notes and
fingers as wall street journal he notices JENNY walk pass the glass window. TODD
looks at his watch and tries to inconspicuously stand. No one bothers to look
over to TODD stepping away from his chair.
TODD
Excuse me, I need to go to my office
Ah... ah... I forgot something.
An executive waves TODD off as he deliberately makes his way to the door. TODD
rushes out the door in the direction of JENNY.
20 INT - HALLWAY - MORNING 20
JENNY turns a corner stopping as she sees TODD'S nameplate next to an office.
TODD comes from around the same corner almost running into JENNY whom has
started to walk away upon hearing his approach.
TODD
Sorry, hey you should have told me
you were coming to see me today!
JENNY stops and flips her long hair to one side as she looks quizzically at him.
TODD straightens his tie catching his breath.
JENNY
It's not what you think!
I didn't even know you work up here
TODD looks surprised and hurt as he puts his head down.
TODD
I ...I...I thought you knew. Didn't I tell
you just the other day? I'm sure that I did!
JENNY gives a puzzled look as she shrugs her shoulders. TODD looks directly at
her with sad eyes causing JENNY to break out in a smile
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JENNY
Of course, I knew where you worked.
I remember everything YOU tell me.
TODD lets out a sigh of relief and breaks into a smile.
TODD
I was hoping that you and I were....
JENNY steps closer putting her finger gently to his lips and whispers.
JENNY
Why don't you show me your office?
TODD shows surprised but delighted as he looks around before escorting her into
his office.
21 EXT - ZIP CAR POOL - AFTERNOON 21
In the car pool ZIP employees ready their vehicles for route assignments. TARA,
wearing tight shorts and an even tighter tee shirt, lumbers along driving a
golf cart with a soft drink dispenser. TARA rings a bell to let alert staff of
her presence
TARA
REFRESHMENTS, ...REFRESHMENTS...
Come get it while it's hot.
Employees stop their chores quickly turning to look at her. TARA smiles
sheepishly realizing her slip of the tongue.
TARA
I mean hot outside! Cold drinks!
How ever you like it!
She stops at a row of vehicles and steps out as sweaty but smiling employees
advance. One buff worker, clothes matted and body dripping in sweat approaches.
TARA reaches for a cold soda until she sees RAUL walk out of a nearby building.
She drops the soda ringing her bell as she agilely maneuvers her cart away
before others reach her. RAUL looks to see where the ringing is from. He sees
TARA waving and advancing swiftly. He looks around not seeing anyone else
nearby. She reaches him before she suddenly stops.
TARA
RAUL are you thirsty?
Would you like ANYTHING?
TARA nonchalantly flips her hair and straightens her uniform. RAUL 'S eyes
follow her every move as she steps off the bike.
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RAUL
OH hi SARA, I almost didn't recognize you.
TARA laughs at him. In the background, employees return to vehicles.
TARA
Oh you're always kidding around.
Pretending you forgot who I am.
RAUL shrugs his shoulders and speaks in a sensuous tone.
RAUL
Do you have anything I might want?
TARA blushes with embarrassed grin.
RAUL
You got a good job there keeping
the employees ....FRESH
TARA pauses to think to herself as she makes facial expressions.
TARA
Muy BEEN, wendo dios
Oh my! I just love being able to
speak two different languages.
RAUL
Yeah, you're really getting fluent in
two DIFERENT languages all right.
TARA is oblivious to the slight
TARA
You're so sweet and so nice to me
RAUL
Whatever
TARA
I better get going. I should take drinks
to those other workers, the sweaty
ones. See you later, A DIOS (adios)
22 EXT - PARK - AFTERNOON 22
The sky is clear with a beautiful blue color. A Hispanic group in the
park picnic as the women spread out food under a Ramada providing much needed
shade. Kids play while others fly kites. Men with coolers sit under a shade
tree as they drink and talk. One man stands up from the grass and glances around
the park as he takes a whiff of fresh air.
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JOSE II
Look at this place, a simple park, green
grass smells fresh. Families and friends
come here for free. Kids can play safely.
MIGUEL
Hey, Just lay on the grass and look at the sky.
Arroyo! When the sun settles in the west
the sky become a bright orange.
At night, lay and look at the stars,
the milky way, the LUNA.
ARMANDO
Oh stop, you're making me weep!
We know how easy the Americans have it.
They are the ones that don't know how
lucky they are.
JOSE I
It is not even luck mi amigo....
It is a PRIVILEGE that they do not realize.
A freedom to go with your family anywhere
AND do anything or nothing at all
An Hispanic boy, 10 years old, sits reading a book to a younger sister who looks
up at him in admiration.
JOSE II
This country kids can get a good education.
Can become someone. Yet, they drop
out of school for NADA, say it's boring!
If they want boring, try no food. No money!
Standing on a corner...
MIGUEL
"But not in Winslow, Arizona"
JOSE I
Try standing on a corner just hoping
someone drives up and offers work,
any job to help feed your familia.
JOSE II
It is sad but true they don't want to finish
school. It is NOT cool to quit school.
MIGUEL
Then they complain they do not want to
work certain jobs. It's beneath them.
We have to worry if they will even pay
us for ANY work we get to do that day
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ARMANDO
What would America do if they had no
privilege? If they no longer can take it for
granted. If something were to happen to
AMERICA as they have come to know it.
Brown steel-toed boots move slightly next to the cooler
17A INT -COMPUTER ROOM - MORNING 17A
KIM LEE is sitting at her computer cubicle working on a project. KISHA leaves
her work area as BEN happens upon the area on his way to the loading area. He
peaks over her partition to visit with KIM LEE.
BEN
KIM LEE, it's BEN what you doing?
KIM LEE is somewhat startled and hurriedly removes a graph from her computer
screen and shoves papers into her folder. This is not lost on BEN as he gets
curious of her stealth like behavior. KIM LEE brushes her hair with her hand as
she turns to greet BEN.
KIM LEE
Oh hi BEN you scared me
What are you doing in this area?
BEN is trying to peek at her folder and beyond her
BEN
Had to deliver some things. Heading
back to my area then I saw you.
Hey, is that some top-secret project
that your trying to hide?
KIM LEE looks around before she answers as she opens the folder
KIM LEE
Not really, it's something I tinker with
during my breaks, lunch, whenever
I can find a minute
BEN enters her cubicle and stares at the sticker like bar codes
BEN
Are they for your fathers' store?
KIM LEE
No, but do you promise not to laugh
at me if I show you?
BEN nods his head arousing his curiosity ever more.
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KIM LEE
I have been working on a different
type of tracking code with my computer.
Not only will it locate the location of a
package like now, but if it works right
it can determine distance traveled
and if the package goes off course.
The idea and concept begins to register with BEN
BEN
So I can attach it to any package and
find out if the package gets from point A
to point B without interruption?
Give me some and we'll experiment
18A INT - LOADING AREA - MORNING 18A
Packages pass along the conveyor belt as BEN randomly attaches a sticker from
KIM LEE. Suddenly an alarm sets off indicating that another package is jammed.
BEN pushes the stop button and goes to a small oblong package on the belt. He
turns the package and sees a fragile marking but he grabs it and shakes it. A
LOUD BANG
BEN is startled, ducks and hits the ground. He rises dusting off his uniform as
he looks around to see if anyone had seen his reaction.
BEN
Damn, thought I was back in the hood
BEN realizes the noise stems from a malfunctioning machine. Behind him he sees
an object on the ground that had fallen. He looks at the destination on the
package as he applies KIM LEE'S tracker sticker to the assigned vehicle - 141.
It is to "WATERWORLD, Denver, Colorado"
16A INT - DISPATCH ROOM - MORNING 16A
RAUL
141- you need to get the package for
WATERWORLD to the airport now.
141
Understood, hope I don't need to stop for...
RAUL
...I hope it's not Frijoles again.
141
No! It was those suicide chicken wings
I got hot flames shooting out my....
RAUL flips the switch off
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5B INT - TRAILER HOME - NIGHT 5B
RANDY sits at the kitchen table counting his money. He looks into an cereal box
and shakes it. His mother is at same table with a drink. She coughs as she
shakes an empty cigarette package. Her speech slurred.
RANDY'S MOTHER
Son, I truly hate to ask of you...
RANDY
...You don't have to repay me.
She displays a smirk.
RANDY'S MOTHER
What! You talking with Miss Cleo?
RANDY
No mother but what I make is for us to share.
Almost have enough for our first vacation.
Anywhere special you want to go to?
His mother answers with a smart aleck response
RANDY'S MOTHER
Surprise me!
Shouldn't you be out with friends your own
age and not watching over an old hag!
RANDY
Mom you're not OLD!
Doing a double take his mother looks over to RANDY.
RANDY'S MOTHER
Are you saying I'm a HAG? Son you
are a good boy but you need friends.
RANDY
Don't worry I'm making friends. I get
to have fun but you're still my mom!
RANDY reaches for his mother's hand as he gently holds it.
RANDY
Right now it's just us you and me.
We are family. You took care of me...
...Now I can help take care of YOU!
She lets out a slight smile. RANDY glows seeing her rare smile.
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RANDY'S MOTHER
I don't know what I did to deserve you.
RANDY is genuinely touched by her statement
23 INT - FOOD BANK - DAY 23
Homeless and those without wait patiently in line. Small children of all
nationalities play together and running around the small aisles. BEN wears a
grocer's apron as he sacks groceries. He places bags into a shopping cart for an
elderly woman.
ELDERLY WOMAN
Say boy, Are you a new volunteer?
BEN
I just started helping out this week.
I plan on being here every week
ELDERLY WOMAN
Help out nothing!
You in trouble with the law boy?
BEN
No madam, I ensure you I am not.
Just thought it was time to give back
She gives an are you out of your mind look. She stares at him as she reaching
into a purse and attempts to give BEN a tip
BEN
No thank you. It is not necessary.
ELDERLY WOMAN
Boy don't be a fool! Take this here money
BEN
Really, it is my pleasure
She looks at him from different angles studying his features
ELDERLY WOMAN
You not old STUARTS' boy is you?
BEN
Yes, that's my father. Did you know him?
ELDERLY WOMAN
He was a fine man, always helping in
the community. Got to say they did a
fine job of raising such a good boy
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BEN
My mama always says my pop never could
say no to helping out, helping someone.
ELDERLY WOMAN
This here was a fine neighborhood up till
the time your daddy got shot by a drug
addict. You were just a boy then.
This place done gone down hill ever since.
24 EXT - WATERWORLD (DENVER) - NOON 24
A teenage couple pose for a photograph before a WATERWORLD sign
in Hyland Hills, a suburb of Denver. An aerial view of the park's rides and
attractions show patrons exiting vehicles and city buses in different stages of
dress, including swimwear.
Parents with children attempting to cross a roadway wait for a ZIP van
approaching the delivery area. The van stops. A ZIP employee gets out with a
small oblong package. She makes her way to a park guide who gives her directions
and points to a sign marked "water treatment".
25 EXT - MALL OF AMERICA (MINNESOTA) - NOON 25
In Bloomington, Minnesota, customers heading to the Mall of America park
vehicles as a helicopter hovers over. Aerial views of the mall's exterior
display pedestrians passing each other as they enter or leave the mall. A
vehicle pauses in front of a Mall of AMERICA sign.
26 INT -MALL OF AMERICA -AFTERNOON 26
Patrons under the malls' glass roof mingle about the tree lined multi-storied
corridors. Some are attracted to water displays while others enjoy rides such as
the Ferris wheel located in Camp Snoopy. Patrons play miniature golf while
others go in and out of the various shops. Teenagers mingle in the food court
and along the railings.
MALL ANNOUCER
Ladies and gentlemen, kids of all ages,
welcome to the largest and greatest
Mall in America with over 520 stores
for your convenience.
At this time we will be closing the water
displays and attractions for maintenance
to make this a more pleasurable mall.
Patrons watch as the water displays slow to a trickle or simply stop flowing.
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27 INT - MALL MAINTENANCE SHOP - AFTERNOON 27
A maintenance man walls along the maintenance shop carrying a small oblong ZIP
package. At the water pumps he stops to open the package.
- SCREAMS are heard -
The startled maintenance man realizes the sounds are from nearby attractions. He
finishes installing a new part to the pumps.
28 EXT - DOLLY'S SPLASH COUNTRY - (Pigeon Forge, TN)- 28
In front of the Smokey Mountain's Water Park sign patrons with
cameras take photos. Customers stroll the grounds or stand in line to buy
tickets for admission. Children run around playing or being chased by a parent.
Inside the park vendors hawk souvenirs while other vendors serve food items.
Customers in swimwear line up for the Downbound float trip along the park's lazy
river while other watch people in the water float by on tubes.
29 INT - DOLLY SPLASH COUNTRY'S WATER TREATMENT 29
A maintenance man is busy installing parts to a pump in the water treatment
area. He throws the packaging in the trash that he passes. Inside the trashcan
those wrappings clearly display ZIP markings.
12A INT - ZIP BREAKROOM - AFTERNOON 12A
TODD and JENNY are feeding a bagel to each other. RAUL and TARA sit facing each
other with feet touching as they quietly eat their snacks. RANDY, BEN and KIM
LEE play cards. Mr. FENZEL enters the room
FENZEL
Can I have your attention please.
I just wanted to say that the execs
are very satisfied with everyone
of your performances thus far....
The group stand and high five each other. Some whistle at the news.
FENZEL
We are proud to have you with ZIP
as we cross AMERICA together
.
Mr. FENZEL leaves as the group claps with approval as the mood become festive
BEN
RANDY you watch the man
BEN turns on a radio as a hip-hop tune plays
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BEN dances smoothly and effortlessly as the group gets in the grove as they clap
or sway. BEN stops after a few seconds. RANDY tries the same moves with
different results, even stumbling. Laughter breaks out as RANDY tuns a bright
red at the ribbing from co-workers.
KIM LEE
Here I thought it was only the Chinese
that went right to left.
JENNY
If I had moves like that my tribe would
have never let me leave the reservation
RAUL
My Chihuahua dances better than that
and he died two years ago
The group converges around RANDY laughing.
24A EXT - WATERWORLD - MORNING 24A
Hordes of water lovers play in Thunder Bay, the wave pool. They laugh, giggle
and ready their floats as they anticipate the waves.
ANNOUCEMENT
30 seconds for the wave!
Fun seekers jump off lounge seats and blankets. Many enter
the wave zone with or without rafts. Sounds of the surging water echoes as the
waves of water are released. Blue water with white colored waves form to create
continuous waves. Those in the water try to keep their balance as they laugh or
run from the thunderous waves.
ANNOUNCER
Parents do you know where your kids are?
Water worshippers on rafts fight to maintain their balance from being knocked
about from the forceful water.
Suddenly water pouring in begins to turn a light PINKISH color. Those in the
water begin to notice the difference when the color turns a deeper pink. Some
stare at the water while other look to lifeguards for guidance. Lifeguards blow
whistles while some wave orange flags to create a semblance of safe passage out
of the tainted water.
LIFEGUARD
Please exit the water in an orderly fashion
Scared children run from the water into arms of rushing parents running into the
water to gather frightened kids. The frantic people exiting the pool bump into
each other. Empty rafts drift along the water and over the continuous waves.
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28A EXT - DOLLY'S SPLASH COUNTRY - MORNING 28A
People on inter tubes float lazily on the blue waterways that encircle an area
of the Water Park. Young teenage couples hold hands drifting by in their tubes.
Long lines form as those waiting at the entrance to the water try to secure a
tube. A teenage girl floating on her tub paddles with her hands looking at the
blue water in her hands. She passes the location where the water twinkles into
the water lanes. She becomes fascinated until she notices PINKISH colored water.
She scopes up a hand full of water and confirms the PINKISH water. She belts out
a loud scream that startle those around her.
TEENAGER
Get out of the water,
The water is turning PINK!
Tubers of all ages and shapes panic as they see the water changing. People yell
and scream as they try to quickly exit the water. Floaters fall out of their
tubes in their haste to leave the water. Parents carry their small children as
they exit the water. The younger kids cry out
seeing swimmers covered in a pinkish color scramble out of the water.
KIDS
MOMMY! DADDY! ...MOMMY!
26A INT - MALL OF AMERICA -MORNING 26A
Customers linger around the suspended water attractions.
ANNOUNCER
"Patrons in the largest and greatest
Mall of America may I have your attention.
Water displays will resume in one minute"
Activity at water attractions through out the mall is buzzing with excitement.
Patrons jockey for better viewing. At a water fountain a crowd gathers. The
crowds anticipate the imminent surging of water. Suddenly huge and high burst of
water shoot from their settings. Water blast out in a number of different
shapes, angles and heights.
The shows and displays are splendid as delightful faces break into cheers or
simply smile.
Suddenly, bubbles start to sprout into the air with the water. Bubbles lace
lagoons and water areas. The panicky viewers react by hurrying from the water
sites as they run into shops or to exits of the mall.
11A INT - RENTAL HOUSE LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 11A
Laughter is heard throughout the living room. The men listen to the news on the
radio as volume is increased to the listeners' delight.
A pair of brown steel-toed boots can be seen dancing as the person wearing them
celebrates.
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RADIO
"Reports keep coming in across nice
and sunny America. Water parks,
malls and water rides at amusement
parks have been vandalized or tampered
with ...Instead of nice clear blue water
we are seeing pinkish coloring or bubbles....
JOSE II turns the radio off and returns back to the group of friends
JOSE II
Hopefully this gets their attention. They are
fools the way they waste natural resources
MIGUEL
Maybe they will think about wasting water.
These Americans know not to pollute but
some still throw garbage into the waters
that they may have to drink later!
At the beach some even do pee pee...
...in the water!
The group shivers and groans at the thought.
JOSE II
The water is so bad even the fishes die
MIGUEL
From the pee pee?
JOSE II
No, the waste from factories dump
into the water, lakes, the ponds.
Worse are the foolish ones who water
grass with timers when it is rains.
ARMANDO
One wonders when are these AMERICANS
going to appreciate what they have?
30 EXT - CORNER CENTRAL Los Angeles. - NIGHT 30
BEN is watching his friends converse. They then address him.
KOOLAID
B... what ups with you lately?
MADDOG
Hell yeah, ever since you been working
you seem pre occupied when you with us.
You down with us or not?
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BEN
Just thinking about things happening
across the country. The news, the water!
KOOLAID
I hear that! That's just wrong!
But if you haven't noticed we don't have
no water parks in the hood
Besides no one does a dam thing when
something goes down in the hood.
BEN stares at the ground and then slowly at his surroundings as his friends
observe him before BEN turns his attention to them
BEN
SOMETHING has to begin here.
LOOK! Look around you.
All neighborhoods have to start caring.
Part of the problem is people thinking
we are due, they owe us. That's whack!
WE owe ourselves to give back
KOOLAIDE
Fool, you ain't running for office.
What those people feeding you?
BEN
No man, I' m for real. We got to take pride
with what you have to work with.
We got to stop thinking someone else
should be doing it and just do it for ourselves.
KOOLAID
You know what it's like with someone always
trying to keep the brother down
BEN
Fool, that SOMEONE is you!
Who was it that burned down the hood after
the Rodney King thang?
We just ended up hurting our own community
KOOLAID shakes his head as he tries to comprehend what BEN has said. MADDOG
pulls out a blunt from his pocket and lights it up.
MADDOG
All that stuff is twisted. Besides I
ain't no politician. I can't do a damn thing!
KOOLAID
Dog, give some to B. He be needing to chill.
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MADDOG offers BEN the joint. BEN denies the offer shaking his head
BEN
Can't, we have random drug tests at work
and weed stays in the system up to 45 days. .
KOOLAID
So what! You be falling off anyway
You know they be looking
for any reason to get rid of your behind.
BEN
NAW, it's not like that.
At work... we all different.
Strange thing is, we all get along.
MADDOG
Yeah but it's still just only for the summer
BEN
Can't be saying it JUST for this or just for that.
Maybe I got a chance to do something to lead
to something good for me. Everyone has got
to start somewhere. Just need a chance,
an opportunity!
MADDOG
A chance to leave THIS!
MADDOG waves an arm referencing the neighborhood
BEN
It don't mean it's all wrong as long you
don't forget where you come from.
For me! I want to stay and help the community.
KOOLAID
What's up with that! This community don't
care nothing about you. Haven't you noticed?
Not many brothers have a job around here.
BEN
That's just wrong! It's time to do good for
this community so that businesses come
back. Then there will be jobs. Look at what
Magic done did with his movie theaters.
MADDOG
Fool, you ain't Magic, you got no magic.
I think you going out of this hood has
caused you to go temporary whack on us
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BEN
Stepping out has opened my eyes.
That it don't have to be this way.
Look at Harlem, businesses are starting
to return. It's getting it's vitality back
KOOLAID and MADDOG look dumbfounded at each other
KOOLAID
Vital a who? Dick Vitale the rock dude?
MADDOG
Let's boogie, let GHANDI be!
KOOLAID
Yeah, peace out!
MADDOG and KOOLAID walk away laughing. BEN watches them give low fives then he
slowly turns his head to view his neighborhood
31 INT - CAFé - NIGHT 31
KIM LEE
Wasn't that movie the bomb?
It's been so much fun talking to you.
I just want to say thank you for inviting...
KISHA smiles and holds out her hand to stop KIM LEE from finishing.
KISHA
GIRL! There's no need to thank me.
You are special and I was hoping we
could be friends.
I still can't get it done like you do.
Maybe I can learn something or have
some of what you have rub off.
KIM LEE blushes and then smiles back.
KIM LEE
I would very much like to be your friend.
Please tell me about your family.
KISHA
My daddy died when I was eight.
I can still remember when he played
with me after work. He was DOG tired,
hungry but he always made time for me,
he would play with me then read to me
KIM LEE reaches for KISHA'S hand to hold
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KIM LEE
I am so sorry for you. My own father
is SO busy with his store. He is elderly
and stubborn, do you know he knows
nothing about computers?
He still uses old Chinese Math devices
yet he is a wise man. I cherish every
moment that I have with him...
KIM LEE gently lowers her head before she looks back at KISHA
KIM LEE
...I do wish I could be closer to him.
KISHA pick ups her soda and proposes a toast
KISHA
To the fathers of the world...
KIM LEE
...May you kiss your daughters good night
The women touch glasses and gently nod their head.
5C INT - TRAILER HOME - NIGHT 5C
RANDY sneaks up on his mother who is coughing at the kitchen table. He empties a
cereal box full of cash on the table. Her eyes widen at the sight of the money
falling out onto the table.
RANDY
Look, I got enough for our vacation.
The travel agency is finishing the plans
MOTHER places her hands to her face in happiness and surprise.
RANDY'S MOTHER
Son, maybe I think I could try to enjoy....
RANDY moves to put his arms around his mother's shoulders. She
puts out her cigarette as RANDY smiles. She grabs his hands and holds them
tightly across her body.
RANDY
Oh mom, you will just love it!
His mother seems genuinely happy about the plans
RANDY'S MOTHER
Tell me where...I can't wait
Do I need to get my hair done?
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She releases her tight grip placing her hands over his as she lays her head
against his arm. He is touched by her emotional response. He whispers as his
eyes moist.
RANDY
You'll see. Things are going to get better
32 EXT - WHITE PARK SOCCER FIELD -DAY - (Concord, N. H.) 32
In Concord, New Hampshire, a soccer league tournament is being played. Bleachers
are filled with fans, some seated some jumping up and down but all with their
faces full of anxiety. The game is tied with minutes to play. Players jockey for
position on a clear sunny day. Suddenly sprinklers on the lush green grass
automatically turn on at a high volume. Players halt upon being drenched with
water. The soccer ball roll gingerly along the playing field as players run to
the sidelines. Spectators and coaches search for their kids as the umpire yells
loudly
UMPIRE
Can anyone stop these things?
A maintenance vehicle races to the main controls. A worker jumps out and sprints
to the controls. He works feverishly but is stumped. The UMPIRE looks at the
field as it becomes saturated with pools of water.
33 EXT - WALNUT CREEK SOFTBALL FIELD - (Raleigh, N.C.) 33
Teammates celebrate as a player touches home plate after hitting a home run in a
girl's tournament being played in Raleigh, North Carolina, not far from North
Carolina State University. Fans watching in the red seated stadium cheer and
glance at the scoreboard in left center field. In the midst of the celebration
sprinklers on the field unexpectedly turn on. Players scream and scatter at the
sudden bursts of water soaks the field. A Coach yells out.
COACH
Off the field before someone gets hurt
Players sprint off the field but one runs to the COACH. She pleads
PLAYER
Coach, they have to let us finish?
COACH
Our motto says trees, trees and PhDs!
But unless someone gets a clue and
turns off these sprinklers the field will
be too soaked and it won't be playable.
The players put their head down and walk away. The COACH watches
as he comments to another coach.
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COACH
What's this world coming to when we
can't play a simple game of softball
without some annoying hindrance?
Players stand on the sidelines or in the dugout waiting to play as parents
wonder if their children will be able to resume their game under safe conditions
31A EXT - WHITE PARK SOCCER FIELD - DAY (Concord, N.H.) 31A
The maintenance man continues working at the water controls
MAINTENANCE MAN
It won't shut off or even slow down.
I don't understand it. New parts were
just installed. The timer is not suppose
to work this way and the manual won't
function properly.
UMPIRE
You have any instructions on it?
The worker pauses looking at the nearby trash can. He nods.
MAINTENANCE MAN
Check that trash can, I believe the box
might still be in there. You better hurry!
The UMPIRE and a parent who is standing nearby run to the trash and begin
scattering items. The UMPIRE picks up a soaked box and turns it around. He
inspects the package and wrappings and finds no instructions. The UMPIRE looks
out at the field and the sprinklers continued assault on the field. He then
faces the crowd.
UMPIRE
Folks, we must postpone the conclusion
of this championship game. I apologize
for any inconvenience to your family.
Let's get these kids home safe.
Turning the package once more the labels from ZIP are evident.
11B INT - RENTAL HOUSE LIVING ROOM - AFTERNOON 11B
Men sit in the living room talking, laughing, as they listen to the
radio.
.
RADIO
"...First it was water and amusement
parks. Now believe it or not,
it's soccer and softball fields..."
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A couple of the men raise their cups in mock salute.
RADIO
"...Across the country there are reports
of water systems that have been tampered.
Malfunctioning and irregular sprinklers
soaking the fields to a point resulting in flooded
fields left too slick or with water pools too
dangerous to play. This has resulted in
postponement of youth league championships...
Such an annoyance and inconvenience to the
youth of this nation..."
The person in the brown steel-toed boot turns the radio off.
JOSE I
It is good to have familia who used to
work at a water part place. You, mi compadre
knows what to do to annoy the know it all
Americans in the heartland.
JOSE II
Mi Primo at ZIPS gets these parts to and
from so that the deed gets done before
delivery to the right place. No one knows
until it's way too late
JOSE I
Yeah, the packages get dropped off, parts
are altered so they mess up the games
for those little unappreciative snotty kids
ARMANDO
Are the Americans still taking their way
of life for granted? I don't think SO!
The group of men claps hands while other slap-high fives.
5B INT - TRAINING ROOM -AFTERNOON 5B
A grim face serious looking Mr. FENZEL enters the room.
He moves to the front of the room as he taps on the desk.
FENZEL
Attention please, I don't know if you...
Stopping mid sentence to ensure he has the room's attention.
FENZEL
.... Have heard about the water mishaps
across the country.
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TARA
Yeah, I did hear about how the water turned
red. Oh no, I bet it ruined lots of new hairdos.
TARA turns to RAUL with a bright smile.
TARA
Aqua priety (prieta), ajo.
MR. FENZEL displays a frown as RAUL tries to inconspicuously shake his head no
as to quiet TARA.
MR. FENZEL
I am here now for a reason.
We at ZIPS are very concerned for we
have learned that most if not all mishaps
are associated with ZIP.
Eagle members are startled and surprised at the news
JENNY
That's can't be. People here are good.
Nothing like that can happen here with us.
Is it somebody on the outside trying some
major type extortion on ZIP?
RANDY
Don't even tell me it's some media seeking
want to be international terrorists
TODD
Do you think it could be some type of inside
trading scandal to increase the market
KIMLEE
Maybe someone is trying sabotage to make
a political statement
JENNY
But why get ZIP involved?
TODD
It could be just a means to their madness
FENZEL
At this point I wish we had all of the fact but
Someone is using ZIP as the delivery mode for
the affected parts. Somehow, somebody has
placed ZIP in the middle. It is too early for us
to really know the reasoning for any of this.
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RAUL
Any ideas of who or whom is involved?
FENZEL moves to his desk and leans against it.
FENZEL
I would hope it is not an American with
an off the wall attitude or philosophy.
But that is why ZIP and America counts
on EAGLE group to keep an eye open so
that the American way of life is no longer
harassed by thugs, these people who may
think they are pranksters.
TODD stands up in front of the group
RANDY
I wouldn't call them pranksters because
there is nothing funny about making it
tough on the kids of this nation.
BEN
No matter how it might seem, it is STILL
one nation, OUR nation!
The group members begin to slowly rise to their feet as FENZEL watches with
great interest.
TODD
Despite my sister, we, EAGLE group stands
like the rest of America, UNITED as one!
RANDY immediately puts his hand over his heart. BEN extends his fists to RANDY
and they bump fists. RAUL moves closer to TARA grabbing her hand creating a
pleasant surprise. She throws a proud smile at TODD. KIMLEE smiles proudly at
her friends. JENNY straightens her clothes as TODD walks over to her looking her
in the eyes.
FENZEL
I knew this group was special.
Young adults like you make me so proud
to be American. Just to know that young
men and women of this nation, the very
fiber that holds this great country together,
will someday continue the traditions and
way of life as we now know it
I just want to thank you.
RANDY moves to the flag as BEN walks over to RANDY putting his arm around his
shoulder. RANDY speaks to the flag.
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RANDY
Whomever is doing this I, we, want you to
know that for now you may think you have
taken our comfort zone from us...
RANDY glances over his shoulder to ensure his back is covered. The other members
stand firm behind him and at his side.
RANDY
...BUT you really only have awoken me, us,
our American spirit
BEN
Them fools just don't know whom
they dealing with. I got no water park
in my hood. I don't even swim.
But them fools are messing with my
brothers and sisters. We all the same
when anyone messes with our way of life.
RAUL leaves TARA moving slowly over to BEN with a slight sense of tension in the
air. They stand facing each other until simultaneously they bump fists out of
mutual respect.
RAUL
At a time like this, no gangs no colors.
This turf, this country, belongs to all of us.
It's not really a good idea to piss off...
...us Americans
The others join BEN, RANDY and RAUL as they interlock shoulders
KIM LEE
I just have to say that I told my father
that I hoped I would find new friends....
I have found not only friends but family.
JENNY steps closer to TODD as she watches RANDY stare at the flag. RANDY begins
to whisper to himself with pride and excitement,
RANDY
USA! USA!
The rest pick up on this. Soon the room is filled with chants and claps
EAGLE GROUP
USA! USA! USA!
TARA wipes moist eyes moving to TODD as they cuddle and embrace. TARA admires
her brother, smiles as she gently puts her head on his shoulder. TODD softly
moves the tears from her eyes.
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23A INT - FOOD BANK - DAY 23A
BEN is busy stocking items for the food bank when the elderly woman he met
before approaches. She admires his hair, clothes then speaks
ELDERLY WOMAN
All this time has passed and you're still here!
BEN turns to see her and smiles as he stops to chat.
BEN
Can't get rid of me that easy.
ELDERLY WOMAN
I thought you would be in jail by now.
BEN
We're not all bad
ELDERLY WOMAN
Well I can appreciate that.
BEN watches as she abruptly turns and leaves his area. He rubs an itch in his
eye area.
34 EXT - FENWAY PARK - BOSTON - DAY 34
A young fan rubs his eyes as he stands in awe of the Green monster, the 37-foot
high hard plastic left field wall in FENWAY Park. The Anaheim Angels are in
position. An advertisement for GAMEDOGS is displayed prominently around the
stadium with the motto "we will have you running for more". The young boy next
to his dad continues to stare at the left field wall as he enjoys a hot dog.
FATHER
Son, did you know behind that scoreboard
there is a room covered with signatures
from players who have played here?
The son's eyes widen at the thought.
FATHER
And did you know that I was almost your
age when I first had a GAMEDOG at this
very park. By the way how did you like
your first GAMEDOG?
The son enthusiastically chews on his last bite nodding his
approval.
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35 EXT - COMMISKY PARK FIELD - CHICAGO - DAY 35
Hot dog vendors make their way through the throng of fans. A line of fans buys
GAMEDOGS from a vendor. The vendor franticly attempts to keep up with the
seemingly never-ending line.
VENDOR
Get your GAMEDOGS here
Eat them while they're HOT!
Vendor tosses a hot one to a dad for his daughter. Her father looks at the
massive colorful scoreboard at White Sox Park. The Chicago White Sox are on the
playing field. The daughter sitting in the box seats bites into her GAMEDOG. She
notices that fans are leaving their seats with great haste so she points this
out to her dad while chewing.
DAD
I don't have a clue. It does seem strange
the way they are zooming up the stairs.
Maybe they are giving something away
The daughter stands to get a better look holding her half-eaten dog.
DAD
Maybe they ate too many GAMEDOGS!
They laugh until she sits back down until almost immediately she begins to
squirm. She looks around anxiously as she exerts a long and audible fart. Fan
glancing over his scorecard behind her hears it. DAD tries to ignore it until
the smell causes him to fan the air. A player peaks out from the dugout holding
his nose. The person behind starts twigging his nose.
FAN ONE
My, My, does the game stink that bad
or are we that close to the stockyards?
FAN TWO
Yeah, who let the cows out?
Moo...moo moo... moo MOO!
Hearing these comments DAD and his daughter sink into their seats
36 INT - GAMEDOG FACTORY - Los Angeles - DAY 36
Interior tour of hot dog factory starting with phrase one ends with the
packaging of GAMEDOGS. Worker with brown steel-toed boots moves from the batch
area to an isolated spot. He looks around prior to pulling a bottle out from
under his clothes. He looks at the bottle then shakes it to confirm its
contents.
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34A INT - FENWAY PARK - DAY 34A
A fan enters the interior of the stadium looking for the restroom. Upon seeing
the sign he hurriedly make his way. Reaching the restroom he rushes to the
entrance. A biker type stops him by motioning that the line is behind him. The
fans look to see that a long line has formed outside the restroom. As he makes
his way to the end of the line fans in line keep motioning to him that the line
ends further back. He reaches the end of the line behind two other fans that are
talking.
PERSON IN LINE ONE
Come on will you, hurry it up in there
You're not baking a cake in there are you?
PERSON IN LINE TWO
Don't smell like no cake to me...
PERSON IN LINE ONE
You haven't smelled my ex-wife's baking
Laughter from the line, some do "the dance" in attempt to try to
wait
PERSON IN LINE TWO
I know the angels are on the field.
But even the man upstairs couldn't
tolerate this smell.
PERSON IN LINE ONE
I know one thing there's more runs in
these restrooms than on the field.
36A INT - GAMEDOG FACTORY- DAY 36A
Inside the factory a lunch horn sounds. Workers leave their assignments and head
for lunch. In the batch area the man wearing brown steel-toed boots lingers
around a trashcan. Quickly removing the bottle from his back pocket he shakes it
to ensure it is empty. Concealing the bottle against his side he moves to
another trashcan. He looks around before tossing the bottle into it.
From around the corner a janitor approaches with a cart collecting garbage. The
worker watches the janitor goes to the first trash can and open the lid. In
plain view are the wrappings with ZIP packaging. The janitor simply dumps the
trashcan into the cart. He heads for the second trashcan that has the bottle.
Another janitor approaches the first janitor and speaks to him.
JANITOR II
Hey, hurry the card game is about
to start. Just leave it for later, we
have plenty to do after lunch.
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JANITOR I
I just need to empty a couple of more
JANITOR I places his cart next to the second trashcan as the worker watches with
great interests. The janitor is about to look into the can when the other
janitor diverts his attention.
JANITOR II
Come on already. Forget about it!
The first janitor changes direction as he heads for the card game. The worker
nonchantantly moves to the trashcan and looks in. The label on the bottle inside
is clearly visible.
QUICK LAXATIVE
"When you know you ought to go"
Steel-toed worker reaches in burying the bottle further into the
trash
37 INT -MORGANTOWN MALL - West Virginia - AFTERNOON 37
In the Morgantown Mall, located off exit 152 and Interstate 79, a crowd
leisurely strolls along shops The song "West Virginia" is being played over the
malls' sound system. The song ends and the malls' radio system pipes out it the
voices of a DJ. Patrons continue on their way window-shopping, some carry
purchases.
RADIO VOICE MALE
"Don't forget that the Macon-Dixon
Festival at Riverfront Park is coming"
RADIO VOICE FEMALE
"Isn't it great to live in the
"Best Small City in the East"
and home to West Virginia University?"
RADIO VOICE MALE
"The early eighties Mountainers teams
only got to go to little bowls. I can't
recall what year but I remember the
Blue Bonnet Bowl where the kid from
some little town in Arizona. The big
home, Casa Grande, ended up at
quarterback for us. He had a great game"
RADIO VOICE FEMALE
I think the name was KEVIN something
I heard that he went on to law school.
RADIO VOICE MALE
Are we talking about the same KEVIN?
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RADIO VOICE FEMALE
RIGHT!
RADIO VOICE MALE
Moving on, I do declare it's time for news.
On your drive home from work think
of this...The latest of the strange things
happening across America....there are
reports of long lines outside of restrooms
.... it seems that the fans at ballparks won't
have to worry about running out of gas...
RADIO VOICE FEMALE
Now would that be unleaded or premium?
Laughter from the crowd as a passing mom with a baby listens
RADIO VOICE MALE
What ever happened to regular?
RADIO VOICE FEMALE
I don't think there is anything regular
left in this country when a dad or a
mom can't even take their kid to a
baseball game...order peanuts,
crackerjacks, and a hot dog.
RADIO VOICE MALE
Not the all mighty GAMEDOG!
RADIO VOICE FEMALE
Well, wait, it has not been confirmed
that anything has been contaminated,
RADIO VOICE MALE
Well reports say that the common
denominator appears to be that after
eating hot dogs that the supply and
demand for a position on the CROWN
increased big time...
RADIO VOICE FEMALE
...We are not trying to make light of
the situation BUTT! ...
Customers start laughing while others giggle
RADIO VOICE MALE
With that I think we better run...
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10D INT - TRAINING ROOM - AFTERNOON 10D
Eagle group is waiting for FENZEL. In one area TODD and JENNY sit alone
whispering to each other. RAUL and TARA stand giggling and laughing with each
other. BEN sits with RANDY and KIM LEE.
BEN
This meeting better be worth delaying
my fourth of July weekend.
My homies and me have places to be
RANDY
I know what you mean jellybean
FENZEL enters the room as the chattering group notices that he is not his jovial
self. He makes his way to the front of the room
FENZEL
This meeting is about GAMEDOGS.
RAUL
What's the line on the GAMEDOGS?
Don't tell me ZIP was involved.
KIM LEE
Excuse me but what does GAMEDOGS
have to do with us. We don't make them!
JENNY
And I know we don't deliver them
FENZEL
That is true BUT our packaging was
found near a discarded bottle of laxative
in a trash can near a GAMEDOG process
machine. What we don't know is how
it got there and why
TODD
First it was the water and now hot dogs!
Is it known if they are indeed related?
What is it that we can do to help?
FENZEL
During your holiday weekend we will
be investigating leads.
Upon your return it will take a team
effort to clear and restore our name.
More importantly, we must do what
we can to stop further attempts of anyone
interfering with the American way of life
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RANDY nods his head and swipes his face with his hand
RANDY
Could I just work through the holiday?
My mom is occupied this weekend.
I don't need to be paid I...
FENZEL moves to his desk and sits on top of it. Pausing he looks at the hanging
American flag then he addresses the group.
FENZEL
STOP! The company wants you to
enjoy this special weekend. It's for
all of our independence, that which
others made the ultimate sacrifice
and for which we must understand
and appreciate to make sure your
children have the same freedoms.
Remember we have men and women
stationed all over this world for us
to ensure that privilege.
BEN
I got a brother in the Air Force.
He's out at some town in Germany
called Bitburg. It's a part of
Spangdalem Air Force Base.
FENZEL
It's not only the men and woman
in the military. We have intelligence,
civilian workers, and agents scattered
around the world. The ethnic, color,
and nationality matters not as all efforts
ensure we can enjoy our being American.
BEN walks to RANDY and stands next to him as BEN changes plans
BEN
I got no one to hang with so let's you
and me check out some things together.
FENZEL
Let's call it a wrap and see you later.
He walks out of the room. RANDY extends his arms to hug BEN but the situation is
awkward.
BEN
HEY NOW, you ain't from Texas are you?
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9B EXT - PARKING LOT - AFTERNOON 9B
TODD is driving through the parking lot and sees JENNY having car trouble. He
pulls into the parking space next to her. She speaks to him
JENNY
I was heading back to my reservation
My car won't start and now I'm stranded.
TODD
Is there anything I can do?
I can't fix it but I can give you a lift
JENNY
To my apartment?
TODD
Anywhere, I always wanted to see a real life
Indian reservation, especially if it means we
could spend some time together.
JENNY
Do you think that would be a good idea?
TODD
I can't think of anything better, can you?
JENNY smiles shyly but nods her approval as TODD shuts the hood. TODD opens the
door for JENNY as she enters his vehicle. On the other side of the parking lot
RAUL walks with TARA to her car.
RAUL
Well I hope you have a good weekend
It seems like it will be a long time...
TARA
...It doesn't have to be that way.
TARA moves closer causing RAUL to smile
TARA
Are you trying to get fresh with me?
RAUL
No way!
TARA
SI WAY!
RAUL and TARA look at each other each with a knowing grin.
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TARA
I was thinking maybe if you wanted to
you might consider spending time together.
RAUL
Well, ...I don't know. Let me think about it
TARA 's smile disappears and is replaced with wide eyes of amazement as she
places her hands on her hips.
TARA
I promise I won't practice my Spanish!
RAUL puts her finger to his lip as if thinking. TARA smiles and reaches for his
finger gently holding it as she puts his hand down while maintaining her grip.
RAUL
If that's the case, I think I can fit you in.
But you have to let me help you with
your Spanish.
7A INT - CHINATOWN - AFTERNOON 7A
KIM LEE is pacing at the door twirling the keys to lock up. FATHER is at his
desk and closes his finance books.
KIM LEE
FATHER you know it's the fourth of July.
We must go soon or we will be late.
Her FATHER rises from his chair and moves to the door
KIM LEES' FATHER
Are you sure you prefer not to be with
your friends rather than an old man
KIM LEE moves to her father and grabs him by the arm
KIM LEE
It has been for years, a tradition, that you
and I spend this day together.
I can think not of a better way to spend such
an important day than to be with my father
KIM LEES' FATHER
I see a wise man as taught you well
KIM LEE and FATHER smile as they hurry out the door.
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38 EXT - MANNS CHINESE THEATER - AFTERNOON 38
TARA and RAUL stand near one another as they look at different hand and feet
impressions. RAUL is dressed in a nice shirt and pressed slacks. RAUL is excited
at the names that he is discovering.
RAUL
I can't believe all of these people were
right here where I stand or that they walked
along a red carpet there for movie premieres
TARA
You act as if is your first time...
RAUL
This is my FIRST time ever.
I can't believe I live in a city where I don't
visit the sites that millions travel hundreds
of miles to see.
RAUL excitedly scampers about quickly among the approximately 160 signatures,
hand and footprints encased in concrete in the entry court. TARA watches and
walks up to RAUL, as she looks him in the eye.
TARA
You're so sweet,
Let me show you something else over
by the entrance
TARA grabs him by the hand heading towards the theater entrance
She stops between two tall columns.
TARA
I believe these are the two authentic columns
that propped up a MING DYHASTY temple.
Hey let's check out some other places.
TARA leads him away as RAUL keeps looking back at the impressions on the ground.
Tourists in the crowd take photos.
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30A EXT - CORNER (LA) - AFTERNOON 30A
BEN stands on the corner with MADDOG and KOOLAID pondering plans for the
holiday.
MADDOG
What you mean you got plans?
MADDOG flashes BEN a menacing frown
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BEN
DOG, I ain't got no issue with you.
Just that I promised this guy from ZIP
that we could hang and watch the works
KOOLAID
At least tell me he's a brother
BEN
I don't need to justify a thing to you.
But for you 411, he's a white man
MADDOG
You falling off... real bad...BAD!
BEN
Things are cool. I'm still rooted
KOOLAID
Let's you and me boogie. I don't need
a sign to tell me when I'm not needed.
BEN'S friends move on down the street leaving him alone.
BEN
Good, you can't read anyway
39 EXT - CRIT RESERVATION MUSEUM - DAY 39
JENNY leads TODD into the Indian museum directly to the pottery and basket
weaving displays. Other tribal members look at them together.
JENNY acknowledges their presence as TODD quickly scans a leaflet.
JENNY looks around and gently pulls TODD away.
JENNY
Oh TODD, look at this. It is pottery and
weaving by members of my family
TODD
They're impressive. I understand that
your reservation is made up of four
different Indian tribes.
JENNY is taken aback of TODD'S knowledge
JENNY
I'm impressed, you have been doing your
homework. And yes, there is Mohave tribe
of which I am one. The other three tribes
are Navajo, Hopi and Chemehuevis.
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TODD
How can four tribes coexist?
JENNY
Just like off the rez. We can have differences
but in the end we all have to get along
TODD
On television the different tribes always fight
JENNY in her best British impression
JENNY
Can't always believe everything you read
or see on the telly can you now?
TODD bowls over in laughter then rising up with his nose sniffing in the air. He
turns to JENNY
TODD
What is that great smell?
JENNY
Every Fourth of July ALL tribal members
have a giant barbecue. The elders are
recognized. Later we will go down to
the Casino area for the fireworks.
TODD
I didn't realize that reservations were so
independent and advanced.
JENNY
Most reservations have their own laws,
police, courts. Many non-Indians work here
and on all reservations across the country
it has been so even before the casinos.
40 HOLLYWOOD BOWL - TWI-NIGHT 40
Hordes of people make their way into the bowl. BEN is standing outside looking
at his watch at the front entrance. He is admiring his slick dress clothes when
he hears his name being called out BEN...BEN.
BEN looks to the sound and sees the head of RANDY
BEN
I thought you got lost
RANDY comes out from around the crowd with one arm behind him. HE is dressed in
outdated disco attire. BEN stops in his tracks
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RANDY
I'm sorry I was running late.
Mom was coughing and getting sick
But she went out anyway.
I thought you wouldn't wait any longer.
You think I look all right for disco?
BEN just stares at RANDY as RANDY models his clothing and from behind his back
pulls out a curly haired wig he sets on his head.
BEN
Oh yeah, you look sharp, real sharp
For this I would have waited days.
BEN places his hand over his eyes for a moment then shakes his head.
BEN walks to RANDY and lets out a smile. RANDY stands modeling his gaudy clothes
as BEN walks around him. RANDY lets out a wide grin
believing that BEN is impressed with his get up.
BEN
Hey, we better get in to get good seats
41 EXT - DODGER STADIUM - NIGHT 41
KIM LEE and her FATHER reach their aisle. People stand as her FATHER passes
nodding his head to each person. A small black boy holds out a small American
flag for KIM LEE'S FATHER. He stops and looks at the flag and then at the boy
and the boy's father. The boy and his father both nod. KIM LEE'S FATHER looks at
her who smiles an approval. The boy gleams as he still holds out the flag. KIM
LEE'S FATHER somewhat uncertain slowly reaches for it. He grabs the flag when
his hand inadvertently touching the young boy's hand momentarily.
KIM LEE'S FATHER
I shall keep this flag forever, thank you
He brings the flag closer to his face staring at it. The boy breaks out in a
brighter smile as his father puts his arm on his son's shoulder. KIM LEE'S
FATHER moves to and sits at his seat staring at the flag. He looks up after a
moment and sees a hot dog vendor.
KIM LEE'S FATHER
I see hot dog man, would you like?
KIM LEE notices the vendor's label - GAMEDOG
KIM LEE
Father, I think I will pass on that.
Would you like for me to run for Chinese?
Her FATHER rises and waves the small American flag. His spirits
lifting.
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KIM LEE'S FATHER
This is American baseball on the 4th of July.
People eat hot dog, See firework.
Enjoy flag. Be with family, one you love.
KIM LEE
Father, you are so right,
A daughter with her father on such a day.
You can not ask for much more
KIM LEE hugs her father. Her eyes moisten as she admires him.
She understands now why she loves him so.
42 INT - CAR ON RODEO DRIVE - NIGHT 42
TARA slowly creeps along pleasantly lid Beverly Hills famous Rodeo Drive. Along
the drive people walk or window-shop at well renowned businesses. Some folks
simply people watch as many stand on street corners taking photos. Inside the
car she and RAUL are immersed in conversation and laughter as they pass well lid
luxurious shops.
43 EXT - CRIT BLUE WATER CASINO - NIGHT 43
JENNY and TODD sit outside the Colorado River Indian Tribes
Blue Water Casino as they look out at the boat docks. Boats with lighted
displays slowly pass along the river as others dock. Sparklers light up the
darkness along the water and from boats. People and children, some carrying lawn
chairs, hurriedly pass the couple on their way to wait to the firework display.
TODD
I had no idea your casino is so beautiful.
The waterslides inside, multi-level pools,
Then there's the exercise room.
My room is spacious and nice and has a
baloney that overlooks the water
JENNY moves closer to TODD and glances into his eyes
JENNY
My family liked you very much
that is important to me.
TODD reaches for JENNY'S hand as he stares into her eyes.
TODD
It is important to me that YOU
like me. I think of you all the time,
at work, at home...
JENNY stops TODD with her finger to his mouth.
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JENNY
...I too think of you. Let's enjoy tonight.
Things will work out for themselves if
they are meant to be.
TODD
Not only are you beautiful you're so smart.
JENNY moves to front and center to TODD
JENNY
Sometimes one just needs to enjoy what
they have in front of them...
TODD gently pulls her closer to within inches of him
TODD
...To capture and live the moment for as
long as possible.
When you're with me your beauty make
me look so much better.
TODD puts his arms across her shoulders and around her neck. He kisses her
softly. She withdraws momentarily before she allows his kiss to continue by
leaning towards him.
The fireworks explode nearby into the dark skies.
40A EXT - HOLLYWOOD BOWL - NIGHT 40A
Fireworks explosions and displays on the ground continue. A huge lighted
American flag is displayed to the thunderous roar of the crowd. BEN doesn't
attempt to mask his excitement with the buzz in the air and the huge display of
fireworks.
BEN
THIS is something else!
RANDY looks out open-mouthed watching in awe at the colors displayed on the flag
until he sees a disabled veteran wearing a military cap with his hand on his
heart. RANDY closes his mouth and stares at the man while maintaining a look of
pride and utmost respect towards the man.
RANDY
That's what THIS is all about
RANDY and BEN both look over at the disabled veteran whose deep-rooted pride is
not mistaken.
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41A EXT - DODGER STADIUM - NIGHT 41A
Fireworks continue to explode and light the dark skies causing a delightful
response. KIM LEE looks at her father's grin as he eats a GAMEDOG watching the
fireworks and waving his American flag high in the air. She smiles aware her
father is enjoying their time together.
44 EXT - SANTA MONICA PIER - NIGHT 44
The lights of the amusement rides and shops along the Santa Monica pier provide
a backdrop as TARA and RAUL walk along the wooden planks. They hold hands as
they jointly carry a balloon. She munches on cotton candy as he eats on a
charro. They stop along a railing look across the ocean as they put their arms
around each other.
In the distance, along the shoreline fireworks can be seen pounding the sky with
each colorful explosion.
22A EXT - PARK - NIGHT 22A
Sparklers flash as Hispanic kids run in circles. Hispanic adult males watch
fireworks in the distance, miles away. Hispanic women tend to the picnic table
cleaning off the table
JOSE I
The fourth of July ...what a wonderful
day for the American people.
A day of picnics, families, kids playing,
JOSE II
A day to be proud not only to be American.
But a day to be happy just to be IN America.
living in America. I just wish I, like MARIA,
could stand proud as an American
Reaching into a cooler JOSE I pulls out a Corona beer. He starts to hand out
beers to the other males
MIGUEL
I think of this day, when this country
celebrates its independence. The people
of America should be able to enjoy their
country, their free time, their families.
JOSE I
I am starting to have regrets
The males become silent and put their beer down. They lower their heads with the
sight of exploding fireworks in the distance.
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10C INT - TRAINING ROOM - MORNING 10C
Eagle group members stand around exchanging pleasantries. Some make their way to
their seats and sit down to wait. FENZEL enters the room like a man on a
mission. The group looks at him and they become quiet knowing that they are
there for a reason.
FENZEL
Welcome back to ZIP. I trust you all
had a good and memorable time.
A chorus of yeah, it was great
FENZEL
The last time we met it was our concern
that someone, perhaps somebody at ZIP
was using us as a method to their madness,
as a way for them to place an obstruction
in the path of the American way of life.
RANDY
Did you get results?
An obvious exasperated supervisor answers
FENZEL
While you were away the company tried to
find answers. We could not pinpoint it.
Each of you will be asked to be on the look out.
We need to find who is misusing ZIP.
We have a chance to prevent or maybe stop
further misdeeds. Are you with me?
Eagle member stand one by one and hold hands in unison.
16B INT - DISPATCH ROOM - MORNING 16B
RAUL piles boxes and files of paperwork near his desk. He stops to fold up his
shirtsleeves. Sweat pours from his forehead as he wipes his face with a towel.
TARA walks in and smiles until realizing that RAUL has not noticed her yet.
TARA
Mi amor, will you be ready for lunch?
RAUL looks up and sees her at the doorway. He smiles.
RAUL
I'm sorry I have a lead I'm working on.
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TARA
Look I can have a pizza delivered and
I can help you if you tell me what to do.
RAUL
O.k. Order pizza THEN get to work...PLEASE
17B INT - COMPUTER ROOM - MORNING 17B
KIM LEE is consumed with work on the computer as she rapidly pounds the
keyboard. The screen displays charts, graphs and routes. KISHA comes into KIM
LEE'S space and looks over her shoulder.
KISHA
You got to eat something. I know I can't
pry you away from that thing so I will run
out for some sandwiches. Is roast beef ok?
KIM LEE doesn't look up or pause as she keeps at her keyboard
typing.
KISHA flips a pen on a pad of paper waiting for an acknowledgement.
Finally, KIM LEE, without missing a beat, responds.
KIM LEE
I think I am getting close to finding out
some important information. No mayo!
KISHA walks away laughing and shaking her head.
26A INT - MALL OF AMERICA - NIGHT 26A
A staggered crowd mingles in the mall as some customers shop while others just
walk around or just wait around for their companion. A smaller crowd gathers at
a department store audio display.
RADIO
...Some good news for America...
There have been no further reports of any
type of interruptions in the American way
of life. Soccer teams have completed games.
Malls are back to normal except for those
reports of humans with blue spiked hair...
Slight laughter from the crowd as the crowd looks at a young couple with blue
spiked colored hair.
RADIO
...Washington D.C. has offered a reward
for information leading to the arrest of
those responsible for the recent disruptions
across this fine land of ours...
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45 INT - BEN'S HOUSE - NIGHT 45
BEN closes his door after entering his house. He turns to see his mother lying
on the living room floor. She is almost motionless. BEN rushes to her side
immediately checking her pulse then her heart. He is shaken at the sight of this
unresponsive strong woman.
BEN
Mama, what's wrong?
You're not sounding too good
The fear in BEN"S face obvious he eases away from his mother and rushes to the
phone and dials 911. The phone simply rings. RING...RING...RING. He hangs up and
dials another number.
BEN
Where are you Uncle BILLY?
Dam it! Don't be getting high again
BEN slams down the phone. He runs his hands across his face.
BEN'S MOTHER
BEN...BEN is that you boy
BEN turns and sees his mother having difficulty breathing on the floor. He
rushes to her side and helps her lean against a sofa. BEN urgently speaks to his
mother
BEN
I tried to call Uncle Billy for a ride to
the hospital but no one answered
BEN'S MOTHER
He's a bum. You are a good son.
This place needs men like you.
BEN
I think you should go to the hospital
cause it could be something bad
BEN'S MOTHER
Don't worry about me none, I'm just an
old lady. Besides we got no car and no
ambulance dares to come in this area.
BEN thinks for a moment and runs to his room. Moments later he returns with a
piece of paper. He runs to the phone with the paper.
He dials. RING... RING...Sound of phone being picked up
BEN
It's BEN...I need your help, mama's ill
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BEN stands with the phone in his hand as he turns to his mother.
BEN
He's on his way. He will be right over.
He's on his way, my friend... RANDY
46 INT - HOSPITAL - NIGHT 46
Hospital waiting area in jammed with people, mostly of color of all races and
nationalities. Entrance doors to the emergency room open KIM LEE and KISHA race
inside. They rush to a corner in the waiting room. TODD and JENNY hover around a
sitting but anxious RANDY.
RANDY
I didn't mean for all of you to interrupt your
night. I just was sitting here thinking of my
mom and I just needed to talk so I called.
BEN is still back there with his mom.
KIM LEE soothes the concerned mind of RANDY
KIM LEE
You did the right thing by calling.
I'm just sorry I couldn't be here earlier.
KISHA and I got here as soon as we heard.
TODD
She's right no one should have to go through
this alone when you know there are people
who cares about what happens.
JENNY
We're a team remember. Nothing is that
important that we couldn't be here for BEN
AND for you.
From around a corner, doors open. BEN exits into the waiting area.
His face is riddled with pain but does a double take when he sees the group.
Suddenly all move to converge on BEN who talks to RANDY.
BEN
Thank you, I mean it... thank you!
BEN and RANDY break their handshake as BEN addresses the group.
BEN
The doctors said it we had waited much
longer that mama most likely would not
have made it. RANDY came through
when I needed him most. He's the MAN.
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47 INT - FEDERAL BUILDING - Washington D.C. - MORNING 47
In a darkened room an agitated supervisor points to a slide on a screen that
shows the ZIP packaging. At a large table a group of men and women dressed in
suits are sitting as they listen attentively.
SUPERVISOR
Per series of events across the country
affecting water, our investigation uncovered
incidents at the Mall of America, playing fields
and amusement parks WITH this package...ZIP!
A slim black haired, young looking woman agent speaks up.
AGENT NORWOOD
Isn't that the common denominator in all of
these water cases? Some type of ZIP package.
The lights go on with all agents wearing dark sunglasses.
SUPERVISOR
Yes, that is correct agent NORWOOD.
Agents at the table review notes diligently. The SUPERVISOR strolls to front and
center.
SUPERVISOR
I don't know if someone doesn't trust the
U.S. postal service for prompt delivery or
maybe just has a discount with ZIPS, but
besides the water venues, there is the matter
of the ballparks also having plumbing problems.
We need to find out if there is a connection,
Perhaps even an inside job.
AGENT NORWOOD
Why don't we insert a plant?
Start at the ZIP location in Los Angeles.
10F INT - ZIP TRAINING ROOM - DAY 10F
Eagle members, minus BEN, converse among themselves. The door opens and FENZEL
walks in with a slim young looking blonde haired female. The undercover agent is
wearing a mini skirt with a tight halter-top. The group becomes silent as they
stare at her.
FENZEL
Attention Eagle members, management has
insisted on a temporary replacement for BEN
while he tends to his mother's needs.
This is SALLY. Please welcome her.
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SALLY waves hello. The men in the group try to divert any interests they may
have at her appearance. The females in the group take a glimpse at SALLY before
staring straight at their male interests to ensure eyes don't wander. SALLY
speaks in a bad valley girl tone
SALLY
Like hello to all of you. Let me be the first
to say how sad it is to hear about BEN'S
mother. Please don't feel that I'm a threat.
SALLY scans the group to determine which person she will focus on
FENZEL
Do I have a volunteer who can show
SALLY around so she doesn't get lost?
Eyes are riveted upon each other and their respective interests. Only RANDY is
brave enough to raise his hand. FENZEL recognizes the situation and speaks up.
FENZEL
KIM LEE thank you for volunteering
The males in the group let out an audible sound of relief. The interested
females simply smile. RANDY looks around confused as he lowers his hand to his
side.
16C INT - DISPATCH ROOM - AFTERNOON 16C
TARA gathers her personals along with a couple of pizza boxes. RAUL is reviewing
a bundle of papers. The door opens with KIM LEE and SALLY entering the room as
SALLY flips her long hair to the side.
KIM LEE
Sorry I hope we're not interrupting anything?
SALLY this is RAUL and TARA.
TARA, upon seeing SALLY, with sleuth like moves positions herself next to RAUL
in an obviously he's taken posture. A buzzer sounds.
SALLY
Oh what does that nice little sound mean?
TARA with her hands on her hips responds
TARA
It means that lunch is over and employees
need to get to their assigned duties.
SALLY, her attention focused on RAUL, runs her hand through her hair and flips
her hair to the side again in an apparent flirtatious mode.
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SALLY
Well then, shouldn't you be on you way?
I don't have any duties YET
KIM LEE'S rolls her eyes at the sound of the catfight. TARA leans over blowing a
kiss to RAUL. He realizes that he better catch it quickly and responds
accordingly. He lets out a sly grin. TARA moves to the door with the pizza boxes
as SALLY smiles.
SALLY
Eating pizza can make you FAT...TER!
KIM LEE lets out a sound of surprise before speaking to cover TARA
KIM LEE
Oh on certain days TARA goes to each
duty station with a box of pizza during lunch
hour when we get too busy. Just like today
RAUL seeing that TARA'S eyes are moistening stands up. SALLY responds by
straightening herself while displaying a broad smile. RAUL ignores SALLY as he
pushes his papers aside and walks over to TARA. He kisses her lips long and hard
as KIM LEE lets out a knowing smile. SALLY pouts as TARA proudly exits the room.
46A INT - HOSPITAL ROOM - AFTERNOON 46A
BEN sits next to his mother admiring her courage as she fights her illness. She
opens her eyes and turns her head to see him.
BEN'S MOTHER
Aren't you supposed to be somewhere else?
BEN jumps out of his seat and hugs his mother.
BEN
A son gotta take care of his mama.
Besides I'm not going no where until
I make sure you're gonna be fine
BEN'S MOTHER
Well I'm fine so you're just wasting your
time sitting here tidying your thumbs.
BEN
But mama....
BEN'S MOTHER
But mama nothing, I'm an old grown woman.
The doctor says I'm fine, I feel fine and I am
a looking fine.
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BEN breaks his first smile in awhile time knowing now his mother is going to be
medically cured.
BEN
You sure are sounding like your good mama
BEN'S MOTHER
You need to get back to your job son.
Do what is right for you. Don't you worry
about me none. I'm like one of those ships
at Pearl Harbor, I can take a beating but
nobody is gonna sink me until I'm a ready
BEN presents her with flowers inserted into a vase.
BEN
These have been sitting here for you.
They're from my friends at work.
Her huge smile begins to wade as she suddenly gets serious.
BEN'S MOTHER
Son, I just have to ask you.
Was I a dreaming or something cause the
last thing I remember was seeing someone
helping you get me off the floor...
...A big clumsy white boy
17C INT - COMPUTER ROOM - AFTERNOON 17C
RANDY approaches the cubicle where KIM LEE is busy working on her tracker code
project. She motions for him to come to her.
KIM LEE
Any word when BEN is coming back?
RANDY
It might be real soon since he says his mama
told him to get back to work.
He wants back saying you have a lead
KIM LEE
Good! I need to know if he did his part.
RANDY
Hey, is this something I should know about?
KISHA peeks from behind her partition
KISHA
It's on a need to know basis, sorry!
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RANDY
What! Everyone knows except me.
Does blondie know?
KIM LEE
The jury is still out on her because there
is something fake about her. For now Mr.
FENZEL is training her so that I can get
back to my duties
21A EXT - ZIP CAR POOL - MORNING 21A
The car pool area is busy with employees doing their chores. TARA rounds a
corner in her golf car with refreshments. She stops nearby where two Hispanic
males appear to be conversing in a somewhat animated manner. They pause and walk
to her cart where they talk in Spanish. TARA waits for them to request an item.
141
Da nada (it's nothing), she's gringa
Meda, hey GORDITA!
TARA lets them believe that she doesn't understand but her attention is now
riveted to this conversation
141
(Spanish)
Someone from ZIP has to get the packages
from here, to the alterations and back on route.
141 smiles puffing his chest out. Both look at TARA but ignore her.
141
(Spanish)
It's a local operation, grass roots.
TARA acts busy and hides her Spanish knowledge learned from her time with RAUL.
Finally 141 turns to TARA as he speaks in English
141
What are you waiting for?
Take our order and make yourself useful
I'll take a cold drink.
141 turns back to his co worker and speaks in English
141
Just people who are trying to be American
but get turned down on red tape so they
are fed up with the American way of life
and those who take it for granted.
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TARA provides his drink as 141 continues to talk
141
I'm going to quit this gig soon enough
TARA jumps back into the cart racing off.
12B INT - BREAK ROOM - MORNING 12B
TODD and JENNY sit close together eating a snack and sharing a beverage. RANDY,
KIM LEE and RAUL are playing cards when TARA rushes in frantically and in an
excited tone calls out
TARA
I think I got something!
TARA goes to TODD whom seems very concerned at her anxiety. The group all
gathers around her.
TARA
There's this guy out in the car pool talking
about ZIP and the interruption with the
American way of life. He seemed to be
bragging like if everybody only knew
what he knows.
JENNY
Are you sure you heard him acurately?
TARA
Well he was talking mostly Spanish
RANDY
That's right you used to work at the
United Nations interpreting
TODD
NO! She actually IS getting pretty good
with all the time she is spending with RAUL
TODD looks over at RAUL like a big brother does while everyone else smiles at
the situation.
RAUL
WHAT!
KIM LEE
What gives?
RAUL
Come on, we're just friends!
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The group gives a knowing look that there's more to the story.
RAUL
She shows me around and I help her
with her Spanish. She is really good...
WHAT! ...At understanding...It
47A INT - FEDERAL BUILDING - NIGHT 47A
A long blonde wig is thrown on the table surrounded by agents. A female agent
stands walking to the podium.
AGENT NORWOOD
All of these people have summer jobs
with no promise of anything permanent
AGENT NORWOOD flips to a slide show displaying RANDY
AGENT NORWOOD
They are a tight group called Eagle.
For some reason they are reluctant
to let me into their circle.
The agents at the table all nod.
AGENT NORWOOD
This first slide is of RANDY.
He works in the loading area running a fork lift.
What I can gather, he lives in a rather
dilapidated mobile home with an alcoholic mother
The next slide shows BEN
AGENT NORWOOD
This is BEN, on its face he would seem to
be a threat, a black male...
The agents glance at agent NORWOOD over their dark sunglasses
AGENT NORWOOD
...and he comes from the inner city...
Interests from other agents perk up as their mouths savor the
thought
AGENT NORWOOD
...But he seems to be conforming, he's been
at his mother's bedside throughout an illness.
He wants out of the wayward world of gangs.
He's been assisting in the community getting
much kudos for his volunteer work.
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Agents at table let out a collective sigh of sorrow. TARA'S slide is next
AGENT NORWOOD
She's TARA, both she and her brother TODD
work at ZIP. He is solid, an all American
executive type. She on the other hand is a
walking advertisement for what's wrong with
blondes. Cute but dumb.
AGENT NORWOOD turns off the slide to a white screen
AGENT NORWOOD
Of interests is that she toys with the Spanish
language AND seems to have a close relation
with RUAL, a co-worker, and of Hispanic descent.
SUPERVISOR
She could be a sympathizer to some third
world cause. Perhaps we should pay closer
attention to them without blowing cover.
AGENT NORWOOD
One other thing, there is a rumor that Eagle
group may have a lead and perhaps even a
leg up on solving this crisis
SUPERVISOR
Well then, chop-chop, let's make sure some
young summer interns don't outsmart U.S.
intelligence. Some federal agencies have
already put us back ten-fold.
10G INT - TRAINING ROOM - MORNING 10G
The group is sitting together with SALLY seated alone. MR. FENZEL enters the
room and is about to speak.
MR. FENZEL
Eagle group, and SALLY, I would like
to introduce you to an old friend.
MR. FENZEL extends his arm towards the door. The group mutters with
anticipation. Finally through the door enters BEN with a giant smile. SALLY
observes as the group mobs and hugs BEN. RANDY has stayed back watching until
BEN realizes that RANDY is missing. BEN
moves to RANDY and attempts an awkward hug that fails
BEN
Thanks to you, mama is going to be fine
The group cheers causing RANDY to blush. SALLY takes note.
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18B INT - LOADING AREA - AFTERNOON 18B
BEN is busy watching his tracking and loading machines. KIM LEE enters his work
area surprising him.
KIM LEE
Welcome back, have you been updated?
BEN
Yeah, RANDY let me in on what's going on
What's with the new girl?
KIM LEE
She was suppose to be a temp for you but
now I hear she may stay on a bit longer.
BEN
She looks hot but is she cool?
KIM LEE
She's different, like she's not real,
maybe she's a policewoman
BEN
No she's not five O. She's not local.
Maybe she's CIA, or FBI
Hey, how's your tracking code working?
KIM LEE
That's why I'm here, I couldn't track
without knowing which codes you attached
to which packages.
I needed the numbers and only you knew.
BEN goes to a filing cabinet and unlocks it. He pulls out a logbook.
BEN
It's time for a meeting of Eagle group.
21B EXT - CAR POOL - AFTERNOON 21B
SALLY is walking alone in the car pool area. She notices a group of Hispancic
workers gathering. They seem to encircle one worker. SALLY decides to
inconspicuously try to get close enough to listen. She notes that the worker
surrounded is worker 141. The gathering breaks upon noticing SALLY'S proximity
to them. Worker 141 walks in SALLY'S direction and asks in a rather stern manner
141
You were looking for something lady?
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SALLY feigns confusion and embarrassment
SALLY
I was told that the refreshment girl
was out here refreshing the staff
and I thought I would get refreshed
141
She's not here. She takes a break
about this time of the day
12C INT - BREAK ROOM - AFTERNOON 12C
RANDY closes the door to the break room. Members of Eagle group hover around one
of the tables. BEN begins to brief his cohorts.
BEN
As most of you know KIM LEE is one
smart cookie, she has created and
developed a new tracking device for
packages. The problem is IS that ZIP
is not aware of this. We have attached
a couple of her tracking codes on a few
packages of two route drivers.
JENNY
Was this at random?
BEN
No, RAUL, in dispatch had mentioned that
he was wondering if perhaps some drivers
had been assigned too many packages on
certain routes since there were a couple of
drivers whom seemed to be lost, off course
and or late on deliveries.
KIM LEE
BEN has told me about this but the computer
couldn't pin point anything with the present
tracking method. At the same time I was
experimenting with a tracking project in my
spare time. We put two and two together.
TODD anxiously wants to know
TODD
Does it work or not?
KIM LEE
We couldn't actually test it because BEN was
gone and I needed certain numbers to input.
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RANDY
Well we're back as a team so as those
Frenchies say- "one for all, all for one,
or whatever those famous words are.
Everyone stops and stares at RANDY
JENNY
I believe he's saying that with BEN back
we are again a team, united as one.
TODD
Don't forget my sister overheard someone
in the car pool talking about the American
way of life. Can there be a connection?
11C INT - RENTAL HOUSE KITCHEN - NIGHT 11C
At the kitchen table a group of men are playing cards. A man wearing brown
steel-toed boots walks up to the kitchen table and smacks JOSE II on the back of
the head.
JOSE ll
Hey, mi amigo why are you hitting me?
The voice of the person wearing the brown steel-toed boots speaks
STEEL-TOED PERSON
I hear through the grapevine that your
primo at ZIP is doing a lot of talking,
bragging about knowing things
ARMANDO
I hear the same thing that people say
he speaks like a woman, gossiping.
JOSE II
Don't worry! No one will know about the
deliveries to you or of your skills.
STEEL-TOED PERSON
Yeah, I hear that the government may have
agents infiltrating ZIP trying to solve this case.
ARMANDO
JOSE says he's been told that the only new
people at ZIP are the summer kids and some
confused blonde lady.
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12D INT - BREAK ROOM - LUNCH 12D
BEN and RANDY are at a table. BEN is showing RANDY some papers. Mr. FENZEL walks
in heading for the soda machine. BEN motions for him to come to their table
while other Eagle member gather.
BEN
I, well KIM LEE, and I have an idea how
someone might have been able to use
ZIP without being detected under the
present tracking system
RANDY stands and shows the piles of paperwork
RANDY
They've been working on this idea and
I believe they know what happened.
FENZEL picks up his soda and opens it, taking a drink.
FENZEL
I didn't expect such results so fast
On the other hand you guys are special.
TODD
Well the legalities of their tracking device
may be dubious since it was not authorized
but hey, we're in a national crisis and the
reputation of ZIP is at issue
JENNY
Not to mention our reputation, there is a
rumor that there was never a problem until
Eagle group was hired this summer.
Thus the innuendo is that we might be using
ZIP to interrupt the American way of life.
FENZEL knowing that the group needs reassuring stands to speak.
FENZEL
Such innuendo is incredulous. Look, I have
known this group over the summer. I have
watched you closely. I can honestly say
that I have never known a more dedicated
group of young men and women as you all
have demonstrated day in and day out.
I will stake my job, my reputation and the
farm on you that no one in this group is
involved in interrupting the American way of life.
FENZEL pauses for a moment to clear his throat
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FENZEL
I believe in the youth of America and
I do believe in each one of you.
9C EXT - ZIP PARKING LOT - LATE AFTERNOON 9C
RAUL is wearing sunglasses as he sits at the wheel of his friend's low rider.
BEN sits next to him as TARA and RANDY accompanies them in the back seat. TARA
points out two males walking towards their car.
VOICE
You have got to sample these frijoles
that the espousal of my primo makes
TARA
Ok that's him! That 's the one I
heard talking in Spanish
RAUL
That's 141, I recognize the voice and
the story about the beans.
BEN
Let's follow that sucker, he be making
ZIP look bad to the world. Hey, ain't
he one of the ones that...
RAUL
...FENZEL says that 141 is on probation
And he IS one of the ones.
RANDY
Why don't we follow him? He might lead us
to some vital information.
They watch as 141 enters a car and begins to exit the parking lot. They pull out
of their spot to follow. They fail to notice a large dark sedan pull out being
driven by a large male sitting next to agent NORWOOD without the blonde wig.
17D INT - COMPUTER ROOM - TWI-LIGHT 17D
KIM LEE glances at the displayed graphs on her screen. The graph shows two lines
with starting points in the loading area where her tracking code was attached by
BEN. One line of the graph is interrupted at an unspecified location in East Los
Angeles. The interrupted line then continues to LAX, the international airport
of Los Angeles. The second line shows the direct route from ZIP to LAX.
KISHA approaches her cubicle as KIM LEE acknowledges her.
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KISHA
Gonna work late again.
KIM LEE
That will be good since I don't know
how much longer I will be working...
KISHA
GIRL STOP! You ain't going nowhere.
They're not about to let go a computer whiz.
KIM LEE rushes back to her graphic and inserts a different code number for a
separate package. Again the lines form the same pattern of interruption and then
to the airport. She repeats this procedure a third time with the same results.
31 INT - CAFé - NIGHT 31
TODD and JENNY sit close to each other in a booth inside a café. As JENNY sips
her lemonade, TODD puts out his cell phone and dials.
The phone rings RING, RING until the phone is answered
TODD
Say, what are you doing tonight?
JENNY and I are kicking back and
I was wondering where you were?
VOICE OF TARA
It's exciting, we are following 141.
TODD
WHY? And who's with you?
VOICE OF TARA
It's me, RAUL, BEN and RANDY.
RAUL says we're in East L.A.,
wherever that is!
TODD
You guys need back up?
Call me if there is a problem
Where's KIM LEE?
17E INT - COMPUTER ROOM - NIGHT 17E
KIM LEE reviews her notes and her graphs. She compares the route driver and her
expression of surprise is revealing at the match.
The screen begins flashing numbers of all of the comparisons. The janitor has
entered the room so before she can ascertain which route driver KIM LEE pushes
her print out button for all the graphs.
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48 EXT - EAST LOS ANGELES COLLEGE- NIGHT 48
RAUL notices that a dark sedan has been following him. He observes that the
white occupants are misplaced in this area of town. At the same time RAUL sees
141 turn down a darkened side street off of Avienda Cesar Chavez, near East Los
Angeles College. The car is slowing down. RAUL catches a glimpse of the street
name while he chooses to maneuver and lose the sedan following him.
BEN
Hey he turns that away and you
are going this way, what's up?
RAUL consistent observation of the rear view mirror says it all. As the other
occupants coyly glance back to observe the sedan. In the sedan, agent NORWOOD is
visibly upset. She smacks her notepad.
AGENT NORWOOD
Damn it! They made us.
After a few maneuvers and side streets RAUL is able to lose his tail. The sedan
comes to a sudden halt.
AGENT NORWOOD
Let's recap, you let them make us.
Then you lost the lead vehicle
And now you lost the kids.
49 EXT - EAST LOS ANGELES NEIGHBORHOOD - NIGHT
RAUL pulls to a stop at the intersection where he last saw 141 turn on and slow.
Dimming his headlights he drives slowly down the same street. A number of cars
are parked in the driveway and on the street in front of a residence. RANDY
notices the vehicle that 141 drove.
RANDY
Look there it is in the driveway.
TARA with a frightened look on her face sticks her head up long enough to write
down the address to the residence. People in and around the area take note of
the darkened slow moving vehicle.
BEN
We better get going, they may be
thinking this is a drive by or something.
RAUL drives a short distance before turning on the headlights. He
speeds off before turning at the corner.
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11D INT - RENTAL HOUSE LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 11D
The house is crowded with folks listening to Mexican music. Next to a coffee
table sits worker 141. He is in a joyful mood as he enjoys the sights and sounds
around him. The person with brown steel-toed boots enters the room and goes
directly to the coffee table and stands.
141
Hey you're blocking my view.
STEEL-TOED PERSON
Where I stand is not important.
I understand it is you who works at ZIP?
141
Yes, how do you know that?
STEEL-TOED PERSON leans over to prevent eavesdropping.
STEEL-TOED PERSON
I hear and see many things that concern me
141
How is it that I concern you?
Perhaps you didn't receive the package
you were suppose to?
The person with the steel-toed boots bends closer to whisper
STEEL-TOED PERSON
I did receive the packages that you drop off
141
So that's who you are, what's the big secret
that I couldn't meet you before?
STEEL-TOED PERSON
I can see why they say you talk too much.
You had better hope that no one at ZIP
has a clue of what has happened.
141 now realizes the severity of the matter and what it is that the person with
the steel-toed boots is concerned with. His expression switches from joyful to
that of fright.
141
Don't worry mi amigo, nothing has changed
over the summer. They use the same old
tracking method as before. They have no
idea where I go. I just tell them off route
and I stop for frijoles.
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STEEL-TOED PERSON
No one better find out about me because
we have another idea to work out before
the American people get too comfortable
12E INT - BREAK ROOM - MORNING 12E
Eagle group members sit collectively as BEN speaks.
BEN
Our investigation has uncovered one of
our probationary ZIP employees may be
involved in the interruption of the American
way of life what is happening across America.
We followed him from work to some residence
in East Los Angeles. RAUL says that the area
is a haven for undocumented workers.
TARA in her excited state volunteers
TARA
It really felt like being in another country
with clothes hanging outside, I guess their
dryer was broken.
THEN there was that car following us until
RAUL was able to shake them like the movies.
THEN we creep along some dark street with
no headlights on. People just looking at us
like we're about to do a drive by!
JENNY
You guys could have got hurt!
TODD
Yeah, and we would end up with more
temps like SALLY
RAUL
You know, there was a female in the car
following us and she had a resemblance...
KIM LEE
...I might as well interject now. Using my
codes that BEN attached I was able to
track movements of packages that ended
up being compromised. These are those
that BEN had placed my tracker codes on.
RANDY
Where you able to find out anything?
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KIM LEE opens a manila envelope and spreads out computer print outs. She then
points to the entry labeled route driver number.
TODD
They all say 141
BEN
I knew it was that fool!
KIM LEE
Not only that but look at this.
My graphs show that the intended route
was diverted from with an alternate route.
It was interrupted, each time, into East
Los Angeles before heading directly to LAX.
RAUL
Can you pin point the street with that?
KIM LEE
I am working on a grid to increase the
probability of locating the exact street.
Right now Avienda Cesar Chavez is the
closest I can get, near East L.A. College
RANDY
I pretty sure that I can think of a street.
RANDY looks at his cohorts whom were in the car with him. They all acquiescence
by nodding their head.
5D INT - MOBILE HOME - NIGHT 5D
RANDY is hurrying around gathering items he sticks in a backpack. His mother
watches nervously. RANDY ceases his movement to talk.
RANDY
I almost forgot to tell you that the tickets
came in for our vacation.
I can't tell you where yet but I can tell you
that I soon as this job is over we're out of here.
MOTHER
This has been difficult! You making me
stop my drinking.
RANDY
Doctors who told you about your liver
and what could happen. But I am very proud
of you cause I know it's hard for you.
Just think of the trip. It won't be too long.
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MOTHER
I can't believe it that I am actually excited
about you and me spending time together.
Are you sure that you can afford it?
RANDY is delighted as a broad smile flashes across his face.
RANDY
I can't afford NOT to.
Hey, I got to run I'm meeting the guys
11E INT - RENTED HOME LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 11E
Around the living room the group of males, including 141, sit with looks of
disappointment.
JOSE I
The steel-toed one told me he is leaving
the country right away.
141
How can that be? He just told me that
there were plans for something to do cause
it has been too calm for the Americans.
JOSE II
Can anything be done, to do something
to get their attention without him?
ARMANDO
He only has the skills to rig the water parts,
then his work had them running at the ballparks.
I have an idea that I'm thinking about.
141
We need to change the drop off point cause
I get this feeling that someone is watching us.
49A EXT - EAST LOS ANGELES NEIGHBORHOOD - NIGHT 49A
A nondescript paneled van is parked a few houses down from the safe harbor
residence. Inside AGENT NORWOOD has night goggles has she keeps the house under
surveillance.
48A EXT - EAST LOS ANGELES COLLEGE - NIGHT 48A
RAUL is parked out in front of the East Los Angeles College along Avienda Cesar
Chavez with TARA, BEN, and RANDY.
RAUL
We doubled checked and 141 is there again.
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BEN
I don't think all those cars are there for bingo.
And I dam sure don't see no Tupperware lady.
RANDY
We have to tell someone, the police.
BEN
I ain't telling no five-o nothing.
Don't you watch the news?
TARA
TODD says we should call the Feds since this
is a national matter affecting all Americans.
RAUL
He's right. We have all of the information.
The surveillance, tracking codes, an insider.
But we can't make the bust alone so who can,
who do we trust?
12F INT - BREAK ROOM - MORNING 12F
Eagle group members huddle around a table. SALLY enters the room as all eyes
turn to her.
SALLY
I hear that you guys have a lead on
an insider. I think I can help.
RAUL looks at her closely, especially her blonde hair.
RAUL
I knew you weren't a real blonde.
You're too smart.
TODD starts laughing as he looks at TARA
TODD
Yeah, I know a real blonde
RAUL
So how did you know that?
You don't have a big black sedan do you?
SALLY/AGENT NORWOOD
Look, I work for the federal government
concerned with national security.
The group rises from their seats. Each member stands to look at her.
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RANDY
You mean you're the FBI? CIA?
SALLY removes her blonde wig to expose her natural black hair.
RAUL
It was you that was following us.
SALLY/AGENT NORWOOD
My name is AGENT NORWOOD.
Summer is almost over and we need help.
Initially we were concerned that RAUL...
TARA immediately asserts herself to the front of the group.
TARA
NO WAY! RAUL is one of the most kindest
person of anybody anywhere.
BEN stands next to TARA and nods his head back and forth.
BEN
She's right, he's one of US!
SALLY/AGENT NORWOOD
Yes, we know. After you evaded our surveillance
we have been back to the area and located 141
and the residence he often frequents.
We know RAUL and all of you are GOOD.
KIM LEE
Well then, if that's the case, than maybe we
can show you other information that we have.
They slowly agree to KIM LEE'S proposal by raising their thumb up. After all are
in agreement they escort AGENT NORWOOD to their table.
7B INT - CHINATOWN STORE - NIGHT 7B
KIM LEE watches her father working hard on the books. His American flag from the
ballpark sits on his desk. She approaches cautiously so as not to frighten him.
Without looking up from his duties he speaks.
KIM LEE'S FATHER
What is it KIM LEE?
She stops in her tracks shocked he is aware of her presence. He lifts his head
and turns to face her.
KIM LEE
You appear to be busy, is this a bad time?
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KIM LEE'S FATHER
Come, I am not so unapproachable.
A father should always have time for
his children. These books are going
nowhere and it is you that will be
leaving the nest soon enough.
KIM LEE
So many things are happening around me,
at work, my computer, I need the wisdom
of a wise man, a father's advise.
He removes his eyeglasses gently placing them on his desk.
KIM LEE'S FATHER
I see you are wise yourself to seek help.
KIM LEE
Well, let me start, I invented this new
tracking method and BEN...
45A INT - BEN'S HOUSE - NIGHT 45A
BEN enters his house and picks up the mail. A certified letter conspicuously
sticks out. He tosses it on the table and yells out
BEN
MAMA, are you home?
Listening for but receiving no response he retrieves the certified letter. He
sits on a sofa and opens it. He reads out loud.
BEN
"Since you are reading this letter this
means that I have passed on. You may only
remember me as the needy elderly woman
at the food bank week after week.
I remember you as the gentleman
who knows his place in this community.
Recently I won in the lotto but my health
was fading. I wanted to make sure that my
luck is shared with someone who cares.
I have seen and have heard that you
are well groomed. Perhaps a hair saloon for
gentlemen would serve this community well.
To that end I have left you a building and
a bit of start up funds.
Please accept my offerings knowing
that you have made a difference, contact
will be made.
...an elderly friend."
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A deeply touched BEN carefully folds the letter and inserts it back into the
envelope. His hand gently glides along his facial features. His eyes
begin to become moist.
5E INT - MOBILE HOME - NIGHT 5E
Moisten eyes of RANDY turn into tears as he stands stunned at the entrance of
his mobile home. Across the room the vacation tickets showing Hawaii are laid on
the table. His mother's motionless hand is next to them. He moves closer bending
as he looks at the slight grin on her still face. When he is sure he stands
erect and gently strokes her face with his hand knowing that she has peacefully
passed on.
21C EXT - ZIP CAR POOL - MORNING 21C
Zip employee 141 is tending to his duties as federal agents lead by AGENT
NORWOOD take positions near his location effectively cutting off any chance of
escape. Suddenly they spring into action upon AGENT NORWOOD signal. 141 is taken
into custody as MR FENZEL watches from a distance. Eagle members rush to his
spot to join him.
They begin to celebrate by jumping and clapping.
BEN
Hey, MR. FENZEL where's RANDY?
Anybody seen him?
The group shakes their collective heads side to side. FENZEL speaks
as the federal agents escort their prisoner past them
MR. FENZEL
Listen gather around here.
I have some sad news to relay.
Celebration stops as a look of extreme anxiety is plastered on faces.
MR. FENZEL
RANDY'S mother passed away last night
BEN
Oh no! He needs US
Eagle group members weep gently for RANDY.
49B EXT - RENTED HOUSE (East LA neighborhood) - MORNING 49B
Federal agents surround the residence. AGENT NORWOOD leads agents into the home
through the batted down busted door. On the street, neighbors' scatter believing
this is an INS raid. Agents reappear as they remove the group of males. All are
handcuffed as JOSE I and JOSE II are brought out first. MIGUEL is escorted by
other agents.
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NEIGHBOR MALE
Let them be, Gringo go home
ARMANDO is silent as he is lead out with his head down. Onlookers' creep up for
a closer look realizing this is not an INS raid.
FEMALE NEIGHBOR
Listen word is these are the scum responsible
for the problems at the water parks, the malls
and the ballparks all across America.
The crowd of onlookers and neighbors are non-responsive until the informed
neighbor starts clapping at the arrest. Other join in and react by shouts of
scum, trader. Some simply raise fists in anger.
At the street the arrested group are seated into the waiting patrol units. The
responding media gathers as the onlookers congratulate the agents. Cheers of USA
gently fills the air as the media capture the moment of an unlikely neighborhood
caught up in the euphoria.
50 INT - ARIZONA MILLS MALL - TEMPE - AFTERNOON 85
A siren within the mall sounds as an announcement is about to be aired to the
wandering patrons.
MALL ANNOUNCER
Please turn your attention to the monitors
located throughout the Arizona Mills Mall
for breaking news of national interest
from Washington D.C.
Customer hangs clothing while others begin exiting stores searching for the
closest monitor.
NEWS ON MONITOR
Ladies and gentleman, it is safe to go
back into the water. Federal authorities
earlier today have apprehended suspects
alleged to be involved in the interruption
of this summer's, in America's way of life.
More details as we get them.
The mall explodes in happiness. Patrons express cheers of joy, even tears of
relief. Kids are hugged as other dance.
47B INT - FEDERAL BUILDING - AFTERNOON 47B
A horde of media types cluster around a podium waiting on a brief conference
regarding the details of the arrest.
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10H INT - ZIP TRAINING ROOM - AFTERNOON 10H
Eagle members including RANDY wearing sunglasses gather together
in anticipation of the news conference. TARA, JENNY, and KIM LEE
tend to RANDY pain.
JENNY
Are you sure you're going to be all right
RANDY
I had to be here...SHE would have wanted...
TODD
...Hold on, something is happening
Silence falls as they all focus on the television screen as door
open
47C INT - FEDERAL BUILDING - AFTEROON 47C
From the opened door out steps AGENT NORWOOD who walks directly to the podium.
AGENT NORWOOD
My name is AGENT NORWOOD. I am the
federal agent assigned to investigate this
summer's events that hindered the joys
of Americas' way of life.
This nations' water parks, malls, youth
fields, and ballparks across this great
country were affected.
In that capacity I went undercover within
ZIP, the parcel delivery company, since we
knew that packages processed there were
somehow delivered compromised.
FEMALE REPORTER
Can you tell us about the arrests?
Are these terrorists involved?
AGENT NORWOOD
We have arrested four men in connection
with this summers events. More arrest are
anticipated.
Those arrested are NOT terrorists.
They are without any terrorist alliances.
FEMALE REPORTER
What type of evidence do you have.
AGENT NORWOOD looks over papers then at the reporter
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AGENT NORWOOD
I can't go into detail but I can ensure you
that we have prints from the packages, some
of the parts, bottles, and we have detailed
tracking data of the compromised packages.
FEMALE REPORTER
ZIP was cooperative and not a suspect?
AGENT NORWOOD
ZIP was never a knowing suspect nor participant.
ZIP was more so a victim itself. This case could
not have been solved without the loyalty, unity
and creativity of certain members of the ZIP family.
AGENT NORWOOD turns directly into a television camera and smiles.
AGENT NORWOOD
YOU know who you are!
10I INT - ZIP TRAINING ROOM - AFTERNOON 10I
Eagle members jump up in joyous pleasure at hearing AGENT NORWOOD'S reference to
them. FENZEL glances out of a window.
9D EXT - ZIP PARKING LOT - AFTERNOON 9D
In the parking lot racing media vehicles make their way into any available
parking space. Reporters leap out of moving vehicles.
10J INT - ZIP TRAINING ROOM - AFTERNOON 10J
MR. FENZEL turns back to the celebrating group. He claps his hands to get their
attention. He allows them to gather themselves.
MR. FENZEL
In a few minutes your worlds will change.
Frankly I can't think of any better or finer
young people that deserve all that is about
to bestowed upon you.
They look at him like if he's weird. RAUL chuckles at the thought
RAUL
MR. FENZEL what in the world are you
talking about?
The door is burst open as security officers lead an inquiring pack of reporters
into the room. Eagle members stand frozen with shocked or surprised looks as the
media descends upon them.
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47D INT - FEDERAL BUILDING - AFTERNOON 47D
AGENT NORWOOD is wrapping up her briefing.
AGENT NORWOOD
The motive of these men appears to be one
of desperation. These men have been in the
United States for a number of years.
They have tried unsuccessfully to become
naturalized citizens of this country.
One media member looks proudly at the American flag.
AGENT NORWOOD
What they could not understand of the
Americans that were born here, how is it
that they did not appear to appreciate this
country, a county that those arrested simply
wanted to live legally within...
26D INT - MALL OF AMERICA - AFTERNOON 26D
Patrons watching the new conference on monitors in the mall, in stores are glued
to every word. Water displays burst high in the air. Patrons feel a realization
that they may have under appreciated America
AGENT NORWOOD
They come from areas where they may be
lucky to earn the equivalent of four U.S.
dollars per day. Where their children would
not have had the option of a quality education...
35A INT - COMMISKEY PARK - AFTERNOON 35A
Corridors of the ballpark have fans huddled around hanging monitors.
AGENT NORWOOD
Neither physical harm nor injury was intended.
It was determined that the best way to get
attention to their plight was to interrupt the
American way of life without resorting to violence.
24B EXT - WATERWORLD - AFTERNOON 24B
Parents, children, teenagers, watch the screens around the Water Park
AGENT NORWOOD
They felt around the world, in this country,
There was an excessive abuse of the water
From misuse, waste, to contamination.
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33A INT - WALNUT CREEK SOFTBALL FIELD - AFTERNOON 33A
The softball field is empty. Players, families, and coaches are gathered around
televisions scattered about the stands and dugouts listening.
AGENT NORWOOD
They felt that when the youth of this nation
truly appreciates the manicured soccer and
softball fields, the ability to share a caring
relationship with parents and siblings, the
willingness to read a book rather than play
video games, then this could really be the
greatest country.
10K INT - ZIP TRAINING ROOM - AFTERNOON 10K
The chatter has ceased, the room is relatively calm as most in attendance,
especially eagle members, observe the television.
AGENT NORWOOD
Last, the real heroes in breaking this case
Were the young adults, doing a summer job
With ZIP. One in particular, a computer whiz...
7C INT - CHINATOWN STORE - AFTERNOON 7C
Those last words of AGENT NORWOOD keens KIM LEE'S Father interest as he casually
passes a television. He stops to listen.
AGENT NORWOOD
...She created a tracking code that allowed
us to pinpoint and confirm vital information
gathered by her fellow co-workers and by
our intelligence necessary in the location
and apprehension of those arrested
Thank you I have nothing further.
KIM LEE'S Father is overcome with pride.
10L INT - TRAINING ROOM - AFTERNOON 10L
The television is muted as the media commences interviews. The phone in the room
rings. RING, RING. MR. FENZEL answers the phone.
FENZEL
This is FENZEL. What can I do for you?
FEMALE VOICE
This is the White House, the PRESIDENT
OF THE UNITED STATES wishes to
congratulate eagle members, are they there?
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FENZEL
Yes they are
FEMALE VOICE
Please hold
MR. FENZEL waves his hand frantically to eagle members to come to the phone.
They signal each other so that they all get to the phone. The speakerphone is
turned on as all wait.
PRESIDENT
Hello this is the PRESIDENT OF THE
UNITED STATES, Eagle members
are you there?
Eagle members giggle at the thought but manage to respond yes.
PRESIDENT
Let me say that on behalf of the citizens,
especially the youth of this fine nation,
that we all thank you for your courage
and unselfishness of ridding this country
of those who choose to attempt to undermine
the freedoms that we cherish.
Eagle members high five each other as the media capture it on film.
PRESIDENT
Many folks were reluctant to visit the malls,
play at the water parks and even attend the
American pastime-baseball games. Each of
you made it possible for us to regain and
restore faith in the young people of America
from the farming communities, rural areas,
the suburbs to the inner cities
The media photographs capture the members deep in thought.
PRESIDENT
This summers' events have taught us to
reflect what it is that we have. That there
are those who are envious and can take
extreme measures to interfere with are
chosen way of life.
I personally invite you and your families
to visit the White House but first the country
will have a little parade to honor you
Thank you.
The phone goes silent. The room explodes in further celebration.
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51 EXT - NEW JERSEY - NIGHT 51
Unmarked law enforcement vehicles are strategically parked. Plainclothes agents
stand nearby. In the background the skyline of New York City can be seen from
across the Hudson River. Along the walkway AGENT NORWOOD walks with JENNY, TODD,
RAUL, KIM LEE, and TARA. They walk pass BEN and RANDY whom are conversing along
the railings bordering the water. They wave to each other as the others walk.
BEN
I don't think they thought that you and I
could overcome our differences
RANDY
You mean me being good looking and
you not being so
BEN
Yeah something like that
They both look across at the skyline of lower Manhattan and admire the powerful
effect of the two blue lights at ground zero piercing the dark skies above
RANDY
Look at those lights, it's kinda like us.
I lost my mother and you almost lost your.
As long as those light shine then we all
have the ability to move forward yet
remember those lost without hindering
our progress.
BEN appears stunned at the words.
52 EXT - NEW YORK CITY PARADE - MORNING 52
Thousands of spectators line the parade route as marching bands perform. The
mood is festive as many wave American flags high in the air. Confetti from
taller buildings floats harmlessly upon those below.
53 EXT - PARADE REVIEW STAND - MORNING 53
Aprons depicting American flag colors decorate the parade-reviewing stand. In
the second row sits the parents of TARA and TODD, JENNY, and RAUL. In front of
them sits MR. FENZEL and BEN'S mother. Next to them is KIM LEE'S father waving
his small American flag. Next to him is a vacate seat reserved for RANDY'S
mother.
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54 EXT - FLOAT - MORNING 54
A beautiful parade float carries eagle members. RAUL and TARA are in one corner
waving to the crowd.
TARA
I almost forgot to tell you.
My mother told me this morning that
I was accepted at UCLA. I don't have
to leave state after all.
RAUL is happy for her but after a moment he lowers his head
RAUL
I decided to not go to junior college.
TARA
Oh no, what happened?
WHY NOT?
RAUL raises his head so that his eyes meet hers.
RAUL
I was accepted to UCLA too
TARA jumps up and down at the news.
KIM LEE is next to them but is on a cell phone.
KIM LEE
OH KISHA I wish you were here with me.
Everyone is so happy but look,
after the parade we meet with patent
lawyers and then intellectual properties
attorneys about marketing...
TODD and JENNY in another corner acknowledge the cheering crowd until TODD turns
to JENNY
TODD
I was invited to accept a position in ZIPS'
Executive management division
JENNY
What about your offer out of state?
TODD
I told them I would only accept if it meant
that I could be closer everyday to a certain
college student that I fell in love with
JENNY immediately smothers TODD with hugs and kisses.
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BEN and RANDY are in another corner of the float waving to the crowd.
RANDY
With my mother gone, I decided that I can
best serve this country by joining the military.
BEN
I got to respect that since my brother's in
RANDY
I'm going Army Rangers, like that Arizona
Cardinal, Pat Tillman, who left the NFL and
millions of dollars to serve his country
KIM LEE still on the phone to KISHA
KIM LEE
GIRLFRIEND I am not taking no for an answer.
You are going to be my managing partner.
We are going to donate to agencies that focus
with daughters without fathers.
53A EXT - PARADE REVIEWING STAND - MORNING 53A
BEN'S mother is assisted in her efforts to stand to better watch the float
carrying her son. As she stands she begins to gently wave.
54A EXT - FLOAT - MORNING 54A
BEN points out to the upcoming reviewing stand.
BEN
My mama is watching and she wanted me
to thank you for her with a hug FOR HER
BEN makes an effort to hug RANDY but it is awkward as they half-heartedly
embrace as the float reaches the beginning of the review stand where is mother
watches.
53B EXT - PARADE REVIEW STAND - MORNING 53B
Everyone on the review stand rises to his or her feet to join former Mayor of
New York City RUDY GIUILLIANI. The seat for RANDY'S mother remains vacate.
54C EXT - FLOAT - MORNING 54C
As the float reach front and center of the review stand eagle members continue
to respond to the boisterous crowd. BEN and RANDY talk as the float comes to a
stop. The confetti comes down dense in volumes.
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BEN
I have to tell you I know that you have
done what you could to be my friend.
Knowing all you wanted was to become
my friend.
But what you did was become my BROTHER.
RANDY stands there with his mouth open feeling emotional as he staggers to the
center of the float
BEN
Before that was from mama but this
here is from me.
BEN sincerely embraces RANDY in a meaningful hug. The other eagle member watch
in appreciation.
53C EXT - PARADE REVIEW STAND - MORNING 53C
The warm feeling that permeates the air touches everyone on the review stand.
The parents look proudly at their children. BEN'S mother has a tear swelling
before it slowly falls from an eye.
54D EXT - FLOAT - MORNING 54D
BEN and RANDY release their mutual embrace. Simultaneously they raise an
interlocked hand into the falling confetti. RAUL moves to them joining his hand
onto theirs. This recital is followed by KIM LEE, Then by JENNY.
TARA and TODD stroll hand in hand to the others jointly laying their hands on
top of the other hands. As the float resumes its procession among the elated
crowd the groups' hands remain interlocked among the floating confetti as they
stand united.
THE END
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