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THERE'S SOMETHING OUT THERE WATCHING."
AKA "THE CRATE".
"WHERE A DAY AT THE PARK CAN BE MURDER"
WRITTEN BY
RAKEEM "J.H." LAWRENCE
Scared Stiff Prod.
508 w.140th street Apt#25
New York N.Y. 10031
ACROSS SCREEN - " HALLOWEEN NIGHT PRESENT DAY."
FADE IN:
EXT PARK - SUNDOWN
IT'S A FOGGY HALLOWEEN NIGHT WE OPEN ON A SHOT OF HARTFIELD PARK.
WE CRANE OVER TO A TOWN SIGN READING " WELCOME TO HARTFIELD LANE. "
INT.CAR-NIGHT
CINDY, MILES and JONES are driving down a long dark deserted road on
there way to Town Museum discussing starting trouble on this Halloween
night.
MILES
If you drive any faster we'll get there sometime
tonight?
JONES
Quit complaining and pass me one of the beers.
Miles passes Jones a beer.
Jones opens the beer and begins to sip from it.
MILES
Cindy's driving like one mile an hour.
CINDY
Will you two stop arguing ?
I can't afford a DWI.
My parents will flip this car was my graduation gift.
Some of us did go to school.
You two ever heard of it?
MILES
I was kicked out for fighting.
JONES
I was right behind you.
Remember Tim and those assholes?
MILES
who can forget I hated those kids.
Remember Samantha?
JONES
yea I remember Samantha
she was always the life of the party, She can drink her ass off, But she
dated that asshole Tim.
MILES
What ever happened to them ?
CINDY
I don't know but Tim was sure cute.
JONES
fuck you Cindy.
CINDY
Don't get mad he was..
But so are you.
JONES
Tim will never be on my level.
If I ever see him I'll kick his ass for old time sake.
CINDY
how far is that Museum anyway.
JONES
where almost there just keep driving.
MILES
Think those Town stories are true about the Crate.
JONES
I think its all ghost stories
made up to scare us.
CINDY
so what ever happened to those townspeople who went fishing and hunting
in the woods ten years ago?
JONES
Probably had to many beers fell in the lake and drowned.
CINDY
So why did all those people who worked at that power plant across the
lake quit,
most of them ended up in mental institutions, they claim they heard
something at night, Something weird and old man Lesinger mysteriously
disappeared.
JONES
beats the hell out of me.
CINDY
You think its true, Think your going to find that Crate?
JONES
Not only are we going to find it but we are going to steal it.
I'm tired of these ridiculous rumors and ghost stories.
Just stick with the plans.. just stick wit the plans..
We see Jones point at the MUSEUM.
JONES (CONT'D)
There it is and it's quiet too quiet this town is finally going to pay
for all the nights in jail I had to suffer and were about to become rich
from long awaited rumors and tales were about to see it for ourselves.
CINDY
I'm going to keep a watch out I got the gun.
JONES
where is it?
CINDY
Inside the glove compartment.
Jones pulls the gun out looking at it.
JONES
You always come through
Where did you get it?
CINDY
I took it from my father when he was sleep.
MILES
like he isn't going to notice it missing.
JONES
shut up ..
CINDY
will you two cut it out?
Dam give it a rest already.
Put the gun back.
JONES
In a minute.
Jones plays around with the gun.
JONES (CONT'D)
Is it even loaded?
Cindy takes the gun from Jones and places it back in the glove
compartment.
CINDY
Of course it's loaded Da..
I am anxiously awaiting that diamond you promised me Jones.
If I didn't love you I wouldn't be doing this shit.
MILES
What's the matter?
Scared your gonna break a nail?
CINDY
very funny Miles.
JONES
Why have one when you can have thousands? Pull up right over there..
CUT TO:
EXT. ROAD- NIGHT
A Car pulls up blinding us with Bright Headlights
Pulling up on a Road right next to the Town MUSEUM
EXT. CAR / ROAD - NIGHT
We see Three Teens exit the Car looking up at the MUSEUM. Planning to
pull a HALLOWEEN Prank by robbing the MUSEUM.
CUT TO:
EXT. MUSEUM - NIGHT
We see a shot of the foggy Creepy MUSEUM.
CUT BACK TO:
EXT. CAR- NIGHT
The three exit the car closing the doors behind them, Standing by the car
discussing vandalizing the MUSEUM.
JONES
I know your not backing out on me now?
Come on, the plan is full proof we planned this out for six months Where
going to go in there get the Crate and leave.
Miles
I don't know about this … we have been planning this for months
What if we get caught?
JONES (CONT'D)
Trust me pal, Where not going to get caught.
You have the Crowbar and the flashlights?
CINDY
Everything's in the bag baby.
JONES
Miles, let me find out my girlfriend has more heart than you.
Maybe you should keep watch and she should work get some balls.
Jones kisses his girlfriend Cindy, as Cindy hands Jones the bag.
JONES (CONT'D)
Hey keep a look out for anybody
Miles come on we got a job to do.
Jones and Miles begin to walk towards the creepy Museum.
EXT. MUSEUM NIGHT
Jones and Miles walk up to the Museum carrying bags with burglary tools
in them. There dressed in all black
carrying flashlights.
The two Thieves put black mask over their Faces to avoid being identified
by Cameras.
MILES
What if we get caught? I can not afford another
felony this
Is my last chance the judge said he never wants to see my
face in His Courtroom again..
Is this plan full proof?
JONES
Listen no plan is full Proof.
Listen, The hell wit the Judge, this is our chance to get rich
You want to stay in this pathetic town for the rest of your life?
Now we have to keep thinking positive, We can do this.
We can get In and out real fast.
EXT. PARK - NIGHT
A security guard Officer Rice is standing around the MUSEUM Eating a
Sandwich when a voice calls him on his Walkie Talkie.
WALKIE TALKIE VOICE (O.S)
You out there fucking around again..
Better keep your eyes out for the kids every year they try to pull
pranks on you.
SECURITY GUARD RICE [RESPONDING ON RADIO]
Relax its Halloween, Dam I can't even enjoy my Lunch.
There's nobody out here but me.
Hey! What's this some kind of punishment why don't I have a
partner out here wit Me ,and my Shift just started. It's mighty boring
out here and cold and for seven dollars an hour I don't think so.
WALKIE TALKIE VOICE (O.S)
Hey nobody volunteers but you for the Halloween Overtime Besides Stevens
and Daniels are guarding the Town Stores.
SECURITY GUARD RICE [RESPONDING ON RADIO]
Wow, I feel so honored
There's nothing going on out here.
I don't know why old Lady LESINGER wants this place guarded anyway, Its
just some dumb museum which nobody in this god forsaken town ever comes
to anyway what a waste of space. Remind me
to find another line of work with better hours.
EXT. ROAD - NIGHT
Cindy stands by her the Car outside the MUSEUM smoking a Cigarette
waiting for Jones and Miles to Return Cindy looks around in fear.
CINDY
Come on guy's It's Cold Out here.
We don't have all night..
CINDY looks at her watch then starts to look around.
CINDY (CONT'D)
why do I always let them talk me into this shit?
This is definitely the last time I'm doing this shit.
Cindy then begins to cross her arm in nervousness holding the lit
cigarette, Her hands constantly shake.
CUT TO:
INT. MUSEUM HALLWAY - NIGHT
Miles and Jones Walks Through the halls of the MUSEUM, The setting is
dark and creepy.
Both use flashlights to see were they are walking.
MILES
I don't know about this?
JONES
Shut up stop being a pussy..
Miles and Jones continue to walk down the dark hallways of the museum
they suddenly hear a weird noise.
JONES (CONT'D)
you heard that ?
MILES
what the hell was that ?
JONES
Its probably was a cat or something, maybe they have guard dogs in here.
MILES
that didn't sound like no dog.
The Museum security officer begins to walk down the hall Miles and Jones
hide behind a wall as the Security officer passes them.
We see Security Officer Rice walk right pass Jones and Miles as they duck
behind a wall avoiding being seen.
JONES
There's your noise so come on over this way.
Jones and Miles then continue to walk down the hallway
Miles then notices Jones is not walking with him anymore, Miles then
looks around for Jones waving the flashlight around.
MILES
Jones, where are you?
Jones this isn't funny.
Alright Jones I'm outa here.
Jones suddenly comes from the ground in back of miles with the flashlight
to his face scaring Miles.
JONES
boo!!
Miles jumps.
MILES
you scared the fuck out of me stop fucking around.
JONES
Stop being a pussy..
MILES
that wasn't funny.
Jones and Miles begin to walk again reaching a door with a sign on it
reading" DO NOT ENTER".
Jones shines his flashlight on the door.
JONES
come on, this might be it.
Jones opens the door seeing a room full of artifacts , both walk inside
with caution.
INT. MYSTERIOUS ROOM - NIGHT
Miles and Jones looks around the room with the flashlights we see
paintings and a bunch of junk, along with black garbage bags tied.
MILES
The Crate has to be around here some where.
JONES
Look Miles, There it is.
We move up on an old dirty Crate infested wit Spider Webs and Dust.
The smell has the two Thieves covering their Noses gagging.
MILES
Something smells dead in here. (choking)
MILES AND JONES GO INSIDE THEIR BAGS PULLING OUT TOOLS.
JONES
We don't have all Night pass me the Crowbar.
Jones and Miles pry open the Crate, A cloud of smoke exits the crate.
Jones grabs the crate cutting his Hand.
JONES (CONT'D)
shit..
MILES
What happened.
JONES
I cut my fucking hand.
I must of cut it on a nail or something.
Inside the Crate are Sculls and some rotted Body Parts, Blood drips on
the bones as Jones looks at Miles unaware of the resurrection that is
taking place inside the Crate.
Blood drips from the wounded hand falling inside the Crate.
We see the blood dripping in (S.M.). We see
Jones standing by the Crate, Miles a little distance away.
Jones bends over looking inside the Crate.
JONES (CONT'D)
No fucking way.
You can't be kidding me we did all of this for
nothing.
A bunch of fucking bones, trick a fucking treat!
The tricks on me.
Out of know where something awakens in the CRATE grabbing Jones, grabbing
him by the throat breaking it then taking the Crowbar putting it through
his chest.
Blood exits from his mouth as the Creature throws Jones to the floor.
Jones is left bloody lying dead by the Crate.
As he is killed a scared miles looks on in terror.
MILES
Holy shit, Holy shit what the fuck.
Miles backs up in fear making a run for it out of the room.
INT. MUSEUM/HALLWAY -NIGHT
Miles runs down the dark halls reaching a stairway
INT. STAIRWAY - NIGHT
Miles runs down the stairs constantly looking behind him.
INT. MUSEUM/HALLWAY- NIGHT
Miles runs down the hall until he reaches the Museums entrance.
EXT. MUSEUM STAIRS - NIGHT
A scared Miles runs down the MUSEUM stairs leaving everything behind
screaming.
Miles
Oh God, help Somebody..
CUT TO:
EXT. PARK- NIGHT
The security Guard hears the Teens screams…
He then calls for help on the radio but only gets static.
SECURITY GUARD RICE
Officer Rice Requesting back up..
All he hears is static, Security Officer Rice pulls out his gun and runs
in the direction where he hears the trouble.
EXT. ROAD- NIGHT
Miles runs up to Cindy by the car telling her what happened..
Blood is all over Mile's cloths.
MILES
Oh god it got Jones! (crying in fear)
CINDY
What got Jones…
MILES
That thing in there it came out the Crate!
We have to get the fuck out of here its coming.
CINDY
stop it tell Jones to come on you two play to much.
MILES
Look at this blood all over my fucking cloths.
EXT. PARK - NIGHT
As the two teens talk we see something moving towards them
We hear the Terrifying growls….
EXT. ROAD - NIGHT
CINDY
oh shit.
beginning to panic Cindy starts grabbing miles cloths, Miles has the
robbery mask halfway over his face.
Cindy has a shock look on her face as the Creature comes up on them fast
dragging Miles up a hill, Cindy begins to scream. Miles gets his head
knocked off by the creature as the Head comes rolling down the hill by
Cindy and the Car.
A shocked Cindy Jumps inside the car.
CUT TO:
INT.CAR-NIGHT
A shocked CINDY quickly rolls up the window in fear desperately trying to
start up the car. The CAR refuses to start Cindy
glances through the rear view mirror seeing nothing, a scared CINDY goes
into the glove compartment pulling out a gun hands shaking from
nervousness rolls the window down a little has the creatures hand grabs
CINDY by her hair in surprise. Cindy takes a
wild shot out the CAR window missing the CREATURE.
The Creature then disappears, We crane up seeing the creatures figure on
top of the car, Cindy looks around for the creature holding the gun in
her hand. Then Cindy is then dragged through the
window as it closes on Cindy's neck blood pours out her mouth as her neck
is broken.
Blood exits her mouth down the car door as the car horn and alarm goes
off.
EXT. ROAD - NIGHT
We see the car sitting on the road with CINDY'S lifeless body hanging out
as the car horn and alarm continuously goes off.
EXT. ROAD - NIGHT
Security Officer Rice walks over to the car with his flashlights seeing
Cindy's body hanging out with her Brains exposed, Officer Rice puts the
flashlight on the wound getting sick covering his mouth backing away in
surprise
Security Officer Rice hears growling a little distance away up the road
and walks towards that direction , Security Officer Rice finds a figure
kneeling over a dead body the Creatures back is turned to Officer Rice.
SECURITY OFFICER RICE
what the hell are you doing your trespassing this is private property.
The Creature turns around eating organs from the dead body.
The creature stand revealing its horrific form.
The Camera moves in on the Creatures face.
SECURITY GUARD RICE
What the fuck..
Officer Rice fires his gun in fear at the Creature.
The Creature then begins to give chase as Officer rice runs off the road
into the woods.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODS - NIGHT
Officer Rice is running for his life through the woods trying to escape
the Creatures clutches. The camera is in the (P.O.V) of the Creature
chasing the Security officer RICE.
Officer rice trips over a brick getting back back up losing the
flashlight and the gun.
SECURITY OFFICER RICE
What kind of sick shit is this.
OFFICER RICE looks around the Foggy woods with his flashlight in extreme
fear then Out of know where the Creature attacks Officer Rice coming up
behind him through a cloud of fog, then we.
JUMP TO BLACK SCREEN.
"TITLE SEQUENCE"
OVER A BLACK SCREEN IN RED LETTERS WE READ "SOMETHING'S OUT THERE
WATCHING."
CREDITS ROLE OVER DIFFERENT SHOT'S OF THE PARK.
SHOT 1- PLAYGROUND SWINGS AND TREES MOVE WITH THE WIND.
SHOT 2- JOGGER'S PATHS
SHOT 3 - THE TOMB
SHOT 4 - PATHS
SHOT 5 - THE BRIDGE OVER LOOKING VIEW.
SHOT 6 - HARTFIELD LANES TOWN STORES.
SHOT 7 - WE SEE A CARVED PUNKIN WITH A LIT CANDLES
ON A PORCH.
SHOT 8 - WE GET SHOTS OF SEVERAL HOUSES.
SHOT 9 - THE CREEPY WOODS OF HARTFIELDLANE.
OVER A DARK SCREEN THE WORDS APPEAR " THE NEXT MORNING "..
EXT. PARK - DAY
It is the next Morning, The park is foggy and damp..
WE SEE A QUIET PARK.
EXT. WOODS- DAY
WE SEE THE CREATURE SLOWLY WALKING DEEP INTO THE WOODS AS WE
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. PARK- DAY
A JOGGER RUNS DOWN A PATH IN THE PARK UNKNOWING HE IS BEING WATCHED BY A
VICIOUS CREATURE, WE CRANE OVER THE PATH THAT THE JOGGER IS RUNNING DOWN.
THE CREATURE LOOKS ON IN HUNGER, BUT ALL WE HEARS THE HORRIBLE GROWLS AS
THE CREATURE PLOTS ON ITS NEXT MEAL.
EXT. PATH - DAY
WE GET A CU. SHOT OF THE JOGGER RUNNING GASPING FOR BREATH, THE JOGGER
STOPS BY SOME TREES AND BUSHES TRYING TO CATCH HIS BREATH.
CUT TO:
EXT.TREE- SAME
FROM BEHIND A TREE THE CAMERA IS IN THE [P.O.V] OF THE CREATURE LOOKING
ON AT THE TIRED JOGGER. AS THE CREATURE BEGINS TO GROWL THE JOGGER IN
CURIOSITY WALKS OVER TOWARDS THE TREE THINKING SOMEONE MUST HAVE LEFT
THERE DOG IN THE PARK.
WHEN THE JOGGER STEPS CLOSE ENOUGH THE CREATURE ATTACKS HIM RIPPING HIM
APART.
THE JOGGER LET'S OFF A SERIES OF SCREAMS OF PAIN, THE JOGGER TRIES TO
CRAWL AWAY BLOODY BADLY RIPPED OPEN BUT THE CREATURE FINISHES HIM OFF.
Jogger
AUHhhhhhhh!!!!! [Screaming]
EXT. TRAIL - DAY
We see a second Jogger running towards the Direction, where the first
Jogger was killed as the Jogger passes, The second jogger notices the
dead joggers bloody leg mangled and hanging out of the bushes.
The Jogger slowly walks over seeing the other Joggers dead body lying in
the bushes. The dead jogger was mutilated beyond repair., Skin missing ,
Blood pouring out of this mouth on the ground.
The second jogger touches the dead Joggers leg examining it with his
hands.
The second Jogger then begins to back up.
JOGGER # 2
I have to get help!
THE JOGGER THEN BEGINS TO HOLD HIS MOUTH IN DISCUSS TRYING NOT TO GET
SICK.
The Jogger drops to his knees throwing up holding his Stomach, the
horrible sight and smell makes him sick.
The Creature runs up on the Jogger attacking him.
JOGGER # 2 (CONTINUED)
Holy shit, what the…
WE THEN FADE TO BLACK.
EXT. HARTFIELD PARK- DAY
A teenager rides his bike through the park wearing eyeglasses
The teen rides by from a distance.
AFTER RIDING FOR A FEW MINUTES THE CREATURE ATTACKS THE TEEN, KNOCKING
HIM OFF THE BIKE TO THE GROUND, WE SEE THE BACK WHEEL SPINNING AS WE HEAR
THE SCREAMS OF THE TEEN AND THE CREATURE GROWLING BLOOD FLIES OVER THE
BIKE.
EXT. SAME- DAY
The creature rips off the Teens head from his body, The head rolls on the
ground.
Next to the head is the teens Glasses, and bloody bike and remains.
EXT. HARTFIELD PARK CRIME SCENE - NIGHT
THE SCENE OPENS WITH PARAMEDICS AND DETECTIVES STANDING AROUND AMBULANCE
SIRENS PLAY THE SCENE, DETECTIVES SQUAD CARS, LIGHTS REFLECT OFF THE
SCENE.
THE SCENE IS INFESTED WITH ONLOOKERS, DETECTIVES AND CORONERS.
CUT TO:
EXT. SAME - NIGHT
THE CAMERA IS ON SEVERAL BODIES ON THE GROUND COVERED WITH WHITE SHEETS.
THE LIGHTS FROM THE SQUAD CARS REFLECT OFF THE VICTIMS BLOOD DRENCH THE
SHEETS.
CUT TO:
EXT. SAME - NIGHT
Two Detectives assigned to the case stand by the victims discussing the
mysterious murders in Hartfield Park.
Detective Frank is slowly sipping from his coffee.
DETECTIVE FRANK
It's Three O' clock in the Fucking morning.
What do we have Detective Ron?
DETECTIVE RON
I'm going to put this as simple as I can.
The captains daughter and her car was reported missing since yesterday
some of our men found these victims on a manhunt in the park,
This road and the woods.
It seems some rowdy teens broke into the MUSEUM.
Which all the teens call the Tomb And stole an Ancient Artifact out of a
Crate
During the duration of the last two hours we found several body parts and
dead bodies..
DETECTIVE FRANK
What a sick Halloween joke !!
DETECTIVE RON
Every Halloween the teens of Hartfield park.
Make plans to break into the Museum
Unfortunately somebody murdered these people.
Now who or What ever did this tore these victims apart.
Most of these bodies can't even be identified.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Do you mind if I take a look?
DETECTIVE RON
Not at all be my guess..
With the examining Gloves Detective Ron lifts the sheets to show his
partner the victims. We see bloody body
parts, And Rotted Corpses of Miles and the Joggers.
In extreme discussed they cover the bodies back with the sheets.
We see both Detectives Standing Again, The sirens Lights Reflect In the
scene.
DETECTIVE FRANK
shit !! Jesus Christ.. What happened to his head?.
WE SEE DETECTIVE RON PUT ONE OF THE VICTIMS EYEGLASSES IN AN EVIDENCE BAG
ALONG WITH A VICTIMS DECAPITATED HEAD.
DETECTIVE RON
This is the severed heads of one of the victims.
A Black Male around Seventeen to Twenty years of age.
We better get some samples of the blood.
And this is just some Bodies they found one on the road and it was Cindy
the captains missing daughter
a few feet from the MUSEUM hanging out of her car, One inside the MUSEUM.
That wasn't a pretty sight.
Lying beside the stolen artifacts That victim was identified as Timothy
Jones and his stooge John Miles both convicted Felons, troubled kids,
They probably tried to break into the MUSEUM and was murdered, pour Cindy
got mixed up with those assholes.
The two detectives walk over to the Cindy's car as forensics takes
pictures.
DETECTIVE RON (CONT'D)
Track marks were also discovered in the road.
You Know what, No Eyewitnesses, Somebody had to see something.
The Security Guard is missing got some men combing the area.
DETECTIVE FRANK
This isn't your average homicide case
It's more like a mutilation.
Hey Ron how long do you suppose these victims have been here?
SIPPING ON HIS COFFEE.
DETECTIVE RON
Are you listening to any of this?
Why did you become a cop you always had a short attention Span.
DETECTIVE FRANK
I'm listening I'm listening
DETECTIVE RON
Well by the looks of the decomposition I would say a matter of Hours, we
have to get some samples of this green shit. This green gooey substance
was found all over the Victims bodies. It's hard to distinguish what
stage of decomposition the bodies are in at this point.
DETECTIVE FRANKS
You should have stayed in Med School
You're a pro at this a real natural genius.
DETECTIVE RON
I think the force is better for me.
I feel I made the right choice.
117 cases solved under my belt.
When this is said and done this will be 118…
DETECTIVE FRANK
No harm done man I'm just saying you seem to enjoy this Medical thing!
Your good ! Your good !
DETECTIVE RON
Well I enjoy being a cop to!
In the end I chose to be one of the boys in blue HartfieldLanes Finest
but not a uniformed officer.
A Detective I get to catch the bad guys all hours of the night
I am always home beside my wife and kids before they wake up
In the Morning, Can you ask for something better.
Suddenly Detective Frank's cell phone rings It's the boss. Detective
Frank answers.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Detective Frank homicide Yes Sarge, We'll have this mess
cleaned up in an hour [pause] yes Detective Ron is present.
Where almost finished out here there are no eyewitnesses to get
statements
Okay one hour, I got it..
Detective Frank hangs up the phone.
DETECTIVE RON
What Happened? The Sargent is busting your balls again?
DETECTIVE FRANK
Yea, he's sore wit us..
Just thinking about all this dam
The flesh ripped apart like they were attacked by some kind
Of wild dog with Rabies, maybe we shouldn't be here.
Maybe the A.S.P.C.A should be here instead.
DETECTIVE RON
I very serious doubt a dog did this..
But if one did it must not have ate in years.
(pause)we have to get these bodies to the town morgue for further
examination . Maybe and just maybe after the autopsy's the coroners could
tell us more
I hope it's a wild dog, because if it's not we have a serious problem on
our hands.
ONE OF THE CORONERS WALKS OVER TO THE TWO DETECTIVES.
CORONER
I think there's something you need to see.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODS - NIGHT
The Coroner walks the two detectives Ron and Frank through the woods.
When they arrive at the gruesome sight the coroner points.
CORONER
Two of my men found this….
THE THREE MEN SEE A TORN UNIFORM OF A SLAIN PARK PATROL OFFICER
WE SEE THE REMAINS OF SECURITY OFFICER RICE
DETECTIVE RON AND FRANK LOOK ON IN SHOCK. DETECTIVE FRANK BEGINS TO HOLD
HIS MOUTH TRYING NOT TO VOMIT.
DETECTIVE RON
Well there's your Security Guard
DISSOLVE TO:
OVER A BLACK SCREEN READS IN RED WRITING " THE REUNION ".
FADE IN ON :
EXT. TOWN OF HARTFIELD LANE - DAY
WE SEE DIFFERENT SHOTS OF THE HOUSES IN HARTFIELD LANES, HOUSES.
EXT. BUS STOP- DAY
We open with Samantha getting off a bus with a shoulder bag and a
suitcase, The bus drives by, When the bus pulls off we see Samantha
standing a road holding her bags. Samantha looks around.
CUT TO:
EXT. OVER PATH - DAY
SAMANTHA WALKS OVER THE OVER PATH
REACHING THE OTHER SIDE CONSTANTLY LOOKING AROUND HAPPY TO BE HOME.
EXT. STREET - DAY
Samantha is walking down the street carrying her bags passing several
houses.
CUT TO:
EXT. STREET - DAY
WE SEE STEVE, DEAN, MIKE AND SHAWN WALKING DOWN THE STREET.
CUT TO:
EXT. STREET - DAY
Samantha walking up the block notices an old friend walking up the block
Tim Reeves.
SAMANTHA
Tim!!
TIM AT THIS POINT TURNS AND NOTICES SAMANTHA WALKING OVER TO HIM.
TIM
Oh my God I don't believe this
Sam is that you?
THE TWO IN HAPPINESS HUG DROPPING THERE BAGS
SAM
It's me in the flesh..
It's been a long time !!
TIM
Five years to be exact
Gosh, We haven't seen each other since High School.
I left the next day for College after Graduation.
SAMANTHA
Yea.. Wow it's been that long !!
You could have called or wrote me !!
Give me another hug.
THE TWO HUG AGAIN
TIM
So Sam have you heard from the others. ?
What's going on with the rest of the gang?
SAM
Not since I left for College.
I haven't seen or heard from them.
TIM
It's a shame
We all grew up together in the same town as kids.
All of us were high school buddies.
When we left for college we should have stayed in contact
You know along time ago somebody did invent something called a pen.
I'm really surprised I ran into you.
SAM
Everyone went there separate ways
You know it's a part of life.
It's to bad things turned out the way they did.
We had a lot of good times in the past
Like high School, Summer camp
Hartfield park.. I miss it all.
TIM
Say yea. (Tim shaking his head)
Come on Sam. Let's Walk.
THE TWO PICK UP THEIR BAGS STARTING TO WALK DOWN THE STREET.
CUT TO:
EXT. STREET - DAY
THE CAMERA SHOWS THE TWO HALFWAY DOWN THE BLOCK WALKING.
CUT TO:
EXT. STREET-DAY
Mike, Shawn, Steve and Dean walk up the street
laughing joking about old times.
The four see old friends Tim and Samantha
MIKE
Sally Berkley
Steve
How could I forget her mike you to was practically married in high
school.
DEAN
Boy mike was you in love with that girl.
MIKE
Okay, so it's pick on mike right now guys?
You guys had your high school loves too.
Don't stand hare and act like I was the only one.
Who did you have Steve?
What was her name (In Thought)
I do believe if my memory serves me correctly it was Cindy Crawford!
Remember Cindy Steve?
STEVE
Yea, Yea, Yea,
Okay were going low now, beyond low
The others laugh at Steve.
STEVE (CONT'D)
How could I forget it !
Hello likes it's been years already and your such the greatest Friends in
the world to keep reminding me.
Any way despite what happened with me and Cindy we kept in contact.
She wrote me a couple of times at College, until she started dating Jones
the asshole. Who knows, something may come out of this again.. Speaking
of that asshole. I Wonder what
ever happened to him. Probably out causing problems or either spreading
his rumors.
DEAN
Probably locked up from knocking off a store or something..
What the hell did Cindy see in him..
He was the high school bully I had a couple of run-ins with him myself.
He had a real dislike for you Steve, but I told him if he wanted to fight
one of us he had to fight all of us..
STEVE
Well now that I'm back home I just might give Cindy a call.
I'll bet she'll be happy to see me.
MIKE
What ever happened with her?
Did You? ….
You didn't.
STEVE
You see I know what a woman wants [shows hand gestures]
Two Things,
One is to be treated with respect.
MIKE
And what's the other?
STEVE
To be understood and never kiss and tell
That's why we saw eye to eye.
MIKE
First of all Steve that's three things
And what are you saying you did it with her ?
STEVE
No I didn't say that I'm saying if I did it wouldn't be right to talk
about it.
MIKE
So did you or didn't you..
Where your best friends Steve you could tell us !!.
STEVE
You are missing the whole point Mike.
MIKE
And what makes you such an expert on woman ?
STEVE
Passed Experience.
DEAN
The girls was boring up at college
I wished I had one of my passed experiences with me Two bad it took me
three years to find a woman on campus who had the same interests as me
Sex, Sex and more
sex…….
The four walk down the street.
SHAWN
Anybody have a match?
SHAWN PUTS A CIGARETTE TO HIS MOUTH. WE SEE DEAN GIVE SHAWN A BOOK OF
MATCHES.
DEAN
Here you go..
SHAWN
Thanks..
WE SEE SHAWN SMOKING THE CIGARETTE AS THE FOUR FRIENDS PROCEED TO WALK.
DEAN
No problem
MIKE
College was ruff...
SHAWN
Your not kidding about that..
DEAN
All the wild late night parties wore me out.
I'm surprised I made it out of school .
Out of a hundred percent I spent a good seventy-five partying
It was a lot of wild dorm parties.
STEVE
I have never been so happy to be back home.
DEAN
The same here..
SHAWN
Back in the days way back when it was just the six of us!! we had good
times and fun nights out on the town.
At this point in the film all six friends are bought together they
haven't seen each other in five years!!
MIKE
The plot thickens..
You guys aren't going to believe this.
DEAN
What?
MIKE
Look.
MIKE points up the block.
CUT TO:
EXT. SAME - DAY
WE SEE TIM AND SAM WALKING UP THE BLOCK.
EXT. STREET- DAY
We are back on the four, Mike calls Tim and Sam up the street.
MIKE
Sam, Tim Up here!! [yelling loudly ]
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EXT. STREET-DAY
Sam and Tim hear mike and the others and walks up the block to join them.
SAM
Look Tim it's the guys
This is to good to be true..
TIM
Let's walk up there….
Old friends reunite Sam and Tim walk up to the others.
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EXT. STREET-DAY
The six are together now happy to see each other, they exchange hugs and
handshakes.
SAM
How have you guys been?
DEAN
I was just talking about you and Tim.
TIM
Mike what's up see you haven't changed a bit since I last saw you.
MIKE
I'm still the same old Mike!
TIM
When did you guys get back in town ?
MIKE
About an hour ago ..
SAM
Shawn I see you developed a new habit
Samantha is referring to Shawn's new smoking addiction.
SHAWN
Massive stress I started this habit at college.
College stress is the worst stress of all.
MIKE
I thought it was not getting none..
SHAWN
The stress that school can give you can even change a saint.
All that late night , last minute test cramming.
SAM
Yea I know.
DEAN
What you guys say about of doing like old
Times getting a couple of brews and kicking back.
We have a lot of catching up to do five years worth.
SAM
Sounds good I have time to kill.
TIM
It's all right with me…
SAM
Hey do I or do I not still hold the record
For drinking the most Brews, which makes me the champions
Yes I'm still a lush…
MIKE
Let's go you can keep your crown Sam..
I'm still not much of a drinker.
STEVE
Well I am Heinekens it is..
CUT TO:
EXT. STREET- DAY
THE SIX WALK DOWN THE STREET UNTIL WE FADE OUT JOKING CARRYING THERE
BAGS.
CUT TO:
EXT. PARK BENCH - DAY
The six are sitting on a Bench in the park Drinking Beer each Person with
there own Beers.
The six hold There Beer bottles up to make a toss.
TIM
This is To a New Beginning.
ALL TOGETHER
To a New Beginning.
THE BEER BOTTLES ARE TOASTED.
MIKE
Now this is a fucking beer…
EXT. PARK BENCH - DAY
We are at the bench as Mike tells his friends about what he heard about
the murders in the park. As they discuss the murders as they drink the
several beers. Shawn smokes his cigarettes with Steve.
SAM
The place looks good It's good to be here again
There was no beer on my college campus
In fact the nearest bar was six hundred miles away.
DEAN
You must have went to a very strict school.
SAM
I didn't recall seeing any stores on my way there or back.
STEVE
Say guys you know I was thinking about?
On my way over here. I see us as Meeting up again
like
This as fate.
It was weird we all came back home to Hartfield Park at the Same time,
maybe it was fate.. This was meant to happen
I dreamt this very thing two nights ago we was all Reunited sitting in
this park Talking.
MIKE
You want to talk about something weird or strange
I heard on the bus on the radio when I was driving back down
Why we was away at college authorities found several dead bodies
Inside here, our own Hartfield Park.
The details are too gruesome to discuss
Body parts was scattered all over the park, heads arms legs..
They even found a Kids head lying on one of these paths.
STEVE
Halloween is over Mike It was just some scary story to scare The people
in our town…
SAM
Yea Mike You can't take all that stuff seriously.
MIKE
Maybe your right guys.
After all were in here now and it's quiet.
TIM
I could imagine who told you about this Incident?
MIKE
Well for one the news, the Papers, and Jimmy Bower.
Your demented neighbor Tim.
He should be in a mental ward the Boys psycho.
TIM
Be for real guys, we can't believe nothing he says.
Like that time when we was young remember when he told
Sam if she kisses me her hair would turn blue and fall out.
He's a chronic liar , he was born to lie and yes He's Definitely mental.
SAM
I Want to drink to crazy Jimmy get a clue Jimmy.
You Moron full of shit asshole.
SAM DOWNS HER ENTIRE BEER IN JIMMY'S NAME.
DEAN
Tim's right nothing happens here were we live Hartfield Lane is a very
boring town.
MIKE
I don't know I think it happened deep down inside
You guys just don't want to believe it.
[Drinking from his beer] They didn't even catch the son of a bitch who
responsible.
A Quiet comes amongst the six.
SAM
Okay, well that was certainly a conversation killer.
MIKE
I have to get home guys my moms gonna flip.
TIM
Good idea..
The six gather up their bags…
SAM
Tim walk me home.
TIM
See you guys later…
MIKE
Later man..
DEAN
I'll call you…
SHAWN
Later welcome home ..
STEVE
Catch up with you later…
EVERYBODY IN THE GROUP WALKS OFF THERE SEPARATE WAYS.
EXT. STREET-DAY
SAM AND TIM ARE WALKING DOWN THE STREET CONVERSING
THE CAMERA IS UP ON THE TWO NOW.
PEOPLE WALK PASS THEM DOWN THE STREET.
WE SEE TIM AND SAM PASS SEVERAL HOUSES.
SAM
We could have been something Tim? We had something that was special
We was the best couple in high school and the senior Prom, but I haven't
seen you in years , I don't know if you're the same person if you
changed or what. Or
TIM
Or what?
SAM
Or we have a flame hot enough to spark our love passion again.
TIM
Sam I still love and I always will, no matter what happens..
Listen. I'll tell you what lets allow time to figure this out for us.
Maybe it's still there and maybe it's not.
Listen why don't we go to
my house like old times and watch some flicks.
It could be a start right?
SAM
It could be a start…
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EXT. OUTSIDE SAM'S HOUSE - DAY
TIM
I really missed you Samantha..
SAM
Same here Tim.
Well I have to go in now my moms waiting
TIM
Eight o'clock is good.
SAM
Make it nine..
Sam and Tim kiss Samantha opens the door and walks inside her house.
Tim stands there a minute with a smile on his face.
Nodding yes with his head.
TIM
This can work this can definitely work.
EXT. HARTFIELD LANE POLICE HEADQUARTERS - DAY
Detective Ron and Detective Frank Are looking into Some Paper work.
DETECTIVE FRANK
What are we at the bottom of the barrow?
DETECTIVE RON
Why do you say that?
DETECTIVE FRANK
Well, Everybody else seemed to go home and were stuck here with paper
work.
DETECTIVE RON
Were working on a very important case here… Any leads?
DETECTIVE FRANK
Not One, Did any one report any missing dogs?
DETECTIVE RON
You think a strange dog did this?
DETECTIVE FRANK
I don't know this is odd..
Detective Franks looks at paper work..
DETECTIVE FRANK (CONT'D)
I did notice when that MUSEUM was robbed strange things Started
happening?
Who owns the place.?
DETECTIVE RON
I looked into two of the Town residents…
Mr.& Mrs Lesinger.
They were the towns MUSEUMS Historians
They collected ancient artifacts.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Let's pay them a visit.
CUT TO:
EXT. OUTSIDE THE LESINGER HOUSE - DAY
We see the two Detectives Walking up To the house.
DETECTIVE FRANK
This is it 1115 reed street…
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EXT. LESINGER HOUSE/ PORCH - DAY
DETECTIVE FRANK TAKES OFF HIS SUN GLASSES AN OPENS THE SCREEN DOOR .
Detective Ron knocks.
VOICE [O.S]
Yes..
DETECTIVE FRANK
Mrs Lesinger this is Detective Frank And Detective Ron
We need to speak to you about some property you own..
Is your husband home ?
MRS. LESINGER OPENS THE DOOR AND PEEKS OUT
DETECTIVE RON
We need to have a few words with you..
THE DETECTIVES SHOW MRS LESINGER THERE BADGES.
MRS LESINGER
My husbands dead…
DETECTIVE FRANK
Can we come in.
MRS LESINGER
Why, Have I did anything wrong..
DETECTIVE FRANK
No.. We just need to ask you a few things.
MRS LESINGER COMES OUT TO THE PORCH JOINING THE TWO DETECTIVES.
DETECTIVE RON
So you say your husbands Dead.
MRS. LESINGER
I just assumed so one day he never came home.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Did you file a missing persons Report?
MRS LESINGER
No I figured he ran off with that Secretary he had at the Museum working
for him.
My husband was verbally abusive and a son of a bitch.
Is this about those missing people at Hartfield Park?
DETECTIVE RON
Yes…
There was several murders as well .
MRS LESINGER..
I have been trying to sell that property for along time.
I knew it was trouble I heard some kids broke into it on Halloween.
No one wanted to buy it so I hired private security firm to watch the
place in shifts.
Then they started hearing strange noises in the halls and got scared and
quit.
DETECTIVE RON
When exactly was the last time you saw or heard from your Husband ?
MRS LESINGER
About five year ago.. He came home from work one night drunk babbling
Talking about some crate he and a couple of his drinking buddies found
washed up
By the old lake it was covered in dirt, They took the crate to the Museum
and put it inside an old storage room.
CUT TO:
MONTAGE BEGINS:
INT. MUSEUM/HALLWAY - NIGHT
we see a door closing with a sign on it reading" DO NOT ENTER".
CUT BACK TO:
EXT. PORCH/HOUSE - DAY
MRS LESINGER (O.C.)
That next day they saw a strange light in the woods when they Went on a
hunting expedition, they kept hearing growls .
They went back to the MUSEUM swearing they saw something all of my
husband's friends were committed in a Mental Institution until they died.
That next day my husband went back to the museum and I never saw him
again.
INT. MUSEUM/HALLWAY - NIGHT
we see Mr. Lesinger looking around in the museum hallway in fear.
We hear the Creatures growls as it drags the legs of Mr.Lesinger away
leaving a trail of blood.
MONTAGE ENDS:
CUT BACK TO:
INT PORCH/HOUSE - NIGHT
MRS LESINGER..
He had this cold harsh look in his face, whatever they found by that lake
was trouble.
I thought he ran off with miss hot pants.
Would you like some lemonade?
DETECTIVE FRANK
It's okay thank for your help we have to go!!
The two Detectives get up out the chairs on the porch leaving.
As Mrs Lesinger watches on as the two Detectives get inside there cars.
We move up on mrs. Lesingers face.
MRS LESINGER
Anytime I can assist you
The pleasure was all mines
You need to stay away from that park.
A lot of people don't come back.
INT.CAR-NIGHT
Before driving off Detective Ron and Detective Frank sit inside the car
discussing the case.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Are you buying any of what Mrs. Lesinger said?
DETECTIVE RON
I wouldn't think she would make that up.
DETECTIVE FRANK
so don't you think we should check out that Museum and look for any
insight on this?
DETECTIVE RON
forensics and our homicide unit covered the entire perimeter good and we
still couldn't come up with anything.
DETECTIVE FRANK
So what about the Coroners reports?
DETECTIVE RON
Those victims were tore apart like if they were attacked by some kind of
animal.
That green stuff was some type of chemical waste.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Shit, shit.
why didn't I think of this before?
DETECTIVE RON
What?
DETECTIVE FRANK
Remember that report the Hartfield lane did a couple of years ago on that
old power plant across the lake?
DETECTIVE RON
Oh, OK something about the chemicals leaking into the lake, Some kind of
biohazard scare.
People who worked in that power plant staring getting sick, Some dying
some still missing.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Remember Hartfieldlane was in a frenzy when the mayor thought the waste
leaked into the water supply?
DETECTIVE RON
If only we can get our hands on those files and new paper articles maybe
we can figure out what the hell is going on around here.
DETECTIVE FRANK
We can get the articles from the files of the Hartfieldlane press, And we
can go to that reporter at the channel 56 news possibly look at some old
footage..
DETECTIVE RON
It's worth a shot.
DETECTIVE FRANK
We are going to have to go get some permission from the town mayor to get
some men out there by that lake to get some samples.
DETECTIVE RON
you know how that asshole is he'll do anything to make himself look like
a hero.
So after we can get this information it may help the case greatly.
For the sake of our citizens in this town I hope we can put an end to
this once and for all.
INT. HARTFIELD LANE NEWS CENTER
We open up a room full of reporters busy at work covering the towns
stories as detectives Ron and frank walk through the door looking around,
Finally walking up to one of the workers.
DETECTIVE RON
Hartfieldlane police. I'm Detective Ron from the homicide squad, who's in
charge around here?
Flashing badges.
DESK WORKER
That will her right over there.(pointing)
We move with the two detectives as they approach the person in charge.
DETECTIVE RON
Detectives Ron and Frank we need on your help on something.
MALE REPORTER
Oh hi I'm Jim
Shaking hands with the two Detectives
MALE REPORTER (CONT'D)
can I offer you some coffee or something.
It's a busy day today with all the hysteria going on with the murders and
all.
Is this what the visits about?
DETECTIVE FRANK
It absolutely is.
MALE REPORTER
So how can I help you?
DETECTIVE FRANK
I need and old news report tape from a couple of years back it will help
this whole case greatly , You know the one about the power plant across
the lake of Hartfield park?
MALE REPORTER
Oh, I see well we have it, it's in the vault.
Looks like today's your lucky day.
Hey Christina do me a favor love can you bring me something out of the
storage room.
We see a young shiny petite worker walk into frame.
CHRISTINA
yes, What do you need?
MALE REPORTER
we need the broadcast tapes out of the storage room of the Hartfield lake
tragedy.
CHRISTINA
okay.
Christina walks out of frame to go get the tape.
MALE REPORTER
So it looks like you guys have your hands full.
I always had a great respect for cops.
Allot of News reporters in our town don't like you guys because of your
macho attitudes but you two aren't bad.
Christina walks back into frame with the tape.
MALE REPORTER (CONT'D)
Thank you so much Christina.
The male Reporter hands the tape to Detective Frank.
DETECTIVE FRANK
We really appreciate this.
MALE REPORTER
well have to get back to work I'm so happy I was able to help you.
EXT. STREET- DAY
The two Detectives stand outside the room.
DETECTIVE FRANK
That guy was a big help.
DETECTIVE RON
he was to fucking happy though.
Come on we have to call the town Mayor and the Hartfieldlane press to get
everything we need.
INT. HARTFIELD LANE POLICE HEADQUARTERS- DAY
Detective Frank is on the phone with the town Mayor trying to convince
him to grant them permission to get some men out by the lake to get some
samples.
Detective Frank is on the phone sitting at his desk which is piled up
with paperwork, feet kicked up relaxing.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Yes, This is Detective Frank from the homicide Squad, Mayor I just wanted
to get your permission to have some men go down by the lake surrounded by
Hartfield park to get some samples.
A slight pause.
DETECTIVE FRANK (CONT'D)
I think it would help this case out allot mayor, I mean this is all
linked together something in that park probably came out of the lake, you
want to meet us down there around five.
Detective Frank looks at his watch as he sits at his desk talking to the
Mayor winters.
Detective Ron walks over to his partners desk sipping from a cup of
coffee.
DETECTIVE FRANK (CONT'D)
Alright mayor will do.
Detective Frank hangs up the phone.
DETECTIVE RON
So what did he say?
DETECTIVE FRANK
He gave us the green light to do it.
Things is really looking up we just might land that promotion.
DETECTIVE RON
If we can stay alive long enough to see it.
DETECTIVE FRANK
We have to get everything ready by five, The mayors gonna meet us down
there by the lake, We might need a few men down there to keep the media
back.
EXT.LAKESIDE- DAY
We open on several men in biohazard suits taking samples from the
shoreline of the lake.
Several officers hold back the Channel 56 news crews from passing yellow
tape the mayor winters arrives walking over to Detective Frank.
DETECTIVE FRANK
I think we are on to something here Mayor
Something big.
MAYOR WINTERS
For the sake of this town and the hundreds of citizens I really hope we
figure out something.
DETECTIVE RON
Nothing to really worry about mayor we have the best doctors and
scientist to help us out.
Doctor feebes and his men are over there getting sample of the lake right
now.
MAYOR WINTERS
I want a report on my desk by tomorrow morning.
DETECTIVE RON
No problem Mayor.
The female News Reporters and her Cameraman walks over to the two
Detectives and the Mayor
NEWS REPORTER
This is the channel 56 new we are here at the lake with our town Mayor
and the HartfieldLane police force we want to know what are you doing
down here and is this investigation linked to the murders that has been
occurring
Mayor can you tell us whats going on down here by the lake.
MAYOR WINTERS
WE can tell you we are doing a very intensive investigation.
I have no answers at this time, So please back off of me, There's allot
of work to be done down here.
OFFICER
You heard the Mayor please turn the Camera off and leave the premises.
NEWS REPORTER
The people of Hartfieldlane has the rights to know what's going on you
can't keep us in the closet like this.
MAYOR WINTERS
You Media people are nothing but instigators, now leave or get arrested.
The News Crew backs off and heads back to there van.
EXT. NEWS VAN- DAY
The News reporter and her cameraman discuss what the Mayor is trying to
hide.
NEWS REPORTER
The Mayor gives us the cold shoulder once again.
I don't know there's something very crazy going on out here and I'm sure
it will make a terrific story and I'm going to find out.
Tonight we are going to come back here and stick around for a couple of
hours see what we can get on film.
CAMERAMAN
Not a bad idea and expose the mayor and the asshole police force of a
conspiracy cover up.
NEWS REPORTER
I will finally get my big break and will be able to move out of this town
to bigger and better things.
The Reporter looks over some of her notes as the Cameraman loads the
camera inside the van, Both now get inside the van starting it up driving
off.
EXT. LAKESIDE- SUNDOWN
We are back on the men wearing the biohazard suits picking up sample
placing them in biohazard bags to take down to the lab.
DETECTIVE RON
It's starting to get dark, lets get those samples down to the lab and get
these men out of here, this place isn't safe after dark.
DETECTIVE FRANK
alright let's get this cleaned up and get out of here.
DETECTIVE RON
We have to get back to the office to let the sarge no we finished out
here.
The Detectives duck under the police line tape walking over to there car,
Getting inside driving off.
We are back on a tight shot of one of the scientist holding up a sample
close to the mask on his suit.
SCIENTIST
What the fuck.
The scientist see's some green substance.
VOICE (O.S.)
Hey doctors Feebes you better get over here A.S.A.P to look at this.
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EXT. WOODS- NIGHT
One of the scientist leads doctor feebes into the woods showing him piles
of the green substance.
DOCTOR FEEBES
Get some samples of this..
Doctor feebes men bend down taking samples of the green substance
suddenly hearing growls.
Sound. Growling
DOCTOR FEEBES (CONT'D)
What was that?
Looking around in extreme fear.
SCIENTIST
I don't know sounds like a dog or wolf or something.
Suddenly the growling gets louder as the two turn around seeing the
Creature rapidly approaching them.
SCIENTIST (CONT'D)
oh shit...
The Creature attacks the scientist eating him alive as doctor feebes
begins to run.
Doctor Feebes runs for his life through the woods in the (p.o.v) of the
Creature the camera moves up on the Doctor fast as he screams for his
life as the creature kills him we cut to a black screen.
DOCTOR FEEBES (O.S.)
auhhhhhhhhhhh!!
Ext. Street- Night
TIM WALKS DRESSED UP TO SAM'S HOUSE CARRYING FLOWERS.
CUT TO:
EXT. SAM'S HOUSE - NIGHT
TIM ARRIVES AT SAM'S HOUSE STANDING OUTSIDE HER FRONT DOOR THINKING WHAT
TO SAY TO HER HOLDING THE FLOWERS , FIXING HIS HAIR.
TIM [TALKING TO HIMSELF]
Sam you look nice tonight..
Sam you look really great!!
Sam how do I look?
Auh what the Hell !!
TIM DECIDES TO RING THE DOORBELL.
SAM STEPS OUT CLOSING THE DOOR BEHIND HER
SAMANTHA
Hi Tim !!!
SAM GIVES TIM A KISS.
TIM
These are for you..
TIM HANDS SAM THE FLOWERS.
SAM
Oh, there so beautiful…
Where are you taking me ?
TIM
It's a surprise… Somewhere very special..
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EXT. BRIDGE WITH A VIEW- NIGHT
Tim takes Samantha To the bridge where they first decided to start
dating.
SAM
This is Where..
TIM
Where I asked you out
This was our first official Place we stood officially as a couple.
That's why I bought you here.
SAM
Tim That's sweet
SAM GIVES TIM A KISS
Tim holds Sam as they look at the view over the bridge.
SAM(CONT'D)
Listen Tim
This may not be the right time to tell you this but my
Mother want's to move out of this town.
TIM
Why ?
SAM
My mother saw the reports about the missing people and the murders.
That mike was talking about.
TIM
This can't be, you can't let some town ghost stories take control of your
life.
Nothing is going on, Its go up the block right now, I'll prove it
Let's go to Hartfield Park right now.
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EXT.HARTFIELD PARK-NIGHT
WE SEE TIM AND SAM WALKING THROUGH THE PARK HOLDING HANDS, IT IS COLD AND
QUIET
TIM
You see, What did I tell you it's quiet
It was all just Halloween ghost stories.
A DRUNK MAN STARTLES TIM AND SAM OUT OF NOWHERE SAM LET'S OFF A SCREAM.
SAM
Auhh!! (screams)
DRUNK MAN
You kids shouldn't be in here at Night.
There's something out here some evil abomination.
There's something out there watching I seen it I hear it at night
It dwells in this very park. And it's hungry…
THE DRUNK MAN TAKES A SWIG OF HIS BOOS.
TIM
Get out of hear you drunk !!
Your scaring my girl.
DRUNK MAN
It's this Park Its haunted…. I see weird things here at
night.
THE DRUNK MAN RUNS OFF INTO THE WOODS.
SAMANTHA
Take me home Tim..
TIM HUGS SAM COMFORTING HER.
EXT. HARTFIELD PARK-NIGHT
THE DRUNK MAN WALKS OFF INTO THE DARK WOODS.
Drinking mumbling nonsense about the town.
DRUNK MAN
Dam kids need to stay the hell out these parts..
Screw this town..
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODS- NIGHT
WE SEE SOMETHING MOVING THROUGH THE WOODS VERY QUICKLY.
CUT TO:
EXT. WOODS- NIGHT
WE SEE THE DRUNK MAN SITTING AGAINST A TREE SIPPING FROM HIS BOTTLE..
THE CREATURE MOVES UP ON THE DRUNK MAN KILLING HIM , THE SCENE IS VERY
BLOODY.
WE SEE A SURPRISE LOOK ON HIS FACE AS HE IS BEING EATEN ALIVE.
DRUNK MAN
Oh , What do you want ?
Cut To:
EXT. SAME - NIGHT
WE SEE THE DRUNK MAN'S BODY BEING DRAGGED AS WE HERE THE CREATURES
GROWLS.
EXT. WOODS / CRIME SCENE- DAY
THE TWO DETECTIVES FRANK AND RON STAND AT THE CRIME SCENE WITH THE
CORONERS. A BADLY CHEWED BODY
LIES IN THE WOODS. THE CORONER THROWS A WHITE SHEET OVER THE BODY.
YELLOW TAPE COVERS THE SCENE.
DETECTIVE RON
This is getting Out of hand.. A jogger discovered this one..
DETECTIVE FRANK WEARING EXAMINING GLOVES PICKS UP THE BLOODY LIQUOR
BOTTLE THROWING IT INSIDE
AN EVIDENCE BAG.
DETECTIVE FRANK.
How many does That make now..
DETECTIVE RON
Twelve maybe , Not including body parts..
DETECTIVE FRANK REACHES DOWN AGAIN PICKING UP A RIPPED UP BLOODY SHIRT.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Look it's mayor wise ass coming this way….
MAYOR WINTERS
Who's in charge over here?
DETECTIVE RON
We are sir Of this case that is..
MAYOR WINTERS
What's going on in my town…
Where dropping off like flies here..
I don't want no more of this to get out
To the town..
THE HARTFEILD LANE NEWS CREW ARRIVES.
DETECTIVE RON
To Late-
Mayor the park is officially closed.
MAYOR WINTERS
Get them out of here.
I thought I told you to I want those reports on my desk.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Sir, Doctor feebes and his men are missing.
The Coroner interrupts the mayor and the detectives
CORONER
There not missing we found them take a look.
The Mayor and the Two Detectives walk over lifting sheets looking at the
dead scientists.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Shit.
CORONER
We do have those samples though they were found in the woods by the
scientists remains.
MAYOR WINTERS
This is really getting out of hand.
That thing or whatever it is must have attacked those men by the lake.
CORONER
The men was found in the woods.
MAYOR WINTERS
I want this kept a secret don't let this get out to the media or the
people in town understand.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Yes sir.
MAYOR WINTERS
Because I'm telling you to if I go out I'm taking your whole police force
down with me.
Got it?
DETECTIVE FRANK
got it.
MAYOR WINTERS
There goes the media again get them out of here.
EXT. CRIME SCENE-DAY
THE NEWS CREW REPORTERS BROADCAST LIVE FROM HARTFIELD PARK.
NEWS REPORTER
We interrupt the following to bring you this very special report
We Reporting live from Hartfield Park A Large Neighborhood Community Park
Were a new victim was discovered by a Jogger early this morning.
THE NEWS REPORTER INTERVIEWS THE WITNESS JOGGER.
NEWS REPORTER (CONT'D)
In your own words tell us what you saw..
JOGGER WITNESS
It was to gruesome to talk about around 9:30 this morning.
I was coming up this path and I smelled something terrible I went over
and found this badly chewed body. Oh it was so nasty, the skin was ripped
of the body.
That's when I notified the Authorities.
NEWS REPORTER
Thank you.
You heard it yourself..
Excuse me detectives may we have a word with you.
DETECTIVE FRANK
We have no comments for you at this time.
Please cut the camera off.
This is a crime scene not a talk show.
Next time I catch you anywhere near here I'll arrest you.
Now get out of here.
NEWS REPORTER
They refuse to comment, we will find out more information
And keep you updated.
This is channel 56 News signing out ..
THE MAYOR BLOCKING THE NEWS CAMERA.
MAYOR WINTERS
Get the hell out of here.
NEWS REPORTER
okay, I get it.
The New reporter and the Cameraman walks away.
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EXT. PARK - NIGHT
NEWS REPORTER
so how did it come out ?
CAMERAMAN
Not bad at all I say our ratings is going to go off the roof. I mean you
gotta think about it inside an actual crime scene. Who voted for winters
that guy is a real asshole.
NEWS REPORTER
Tell me about it. I feel sorry for the guy when the next town election
comes good work..
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INT. TIM'S HOUSE - NIGHT
TIM IS WATCHING THE NEWS REPORTS ON HIS TELEVISION.
TIM CUTS OFF THE TELEVISION PICKING UP THE PHONE CALLING HIS FRIENDS.
TIM
This can't be happening.
Shit, You guys saw it.
Come to my house tomorrow…
INT. DETECTIVES CAR - NIGHT
DETECTIVES RON AND FRANK ARE DOING A SURVEILLANCE STAKEOUT BY THE
ENTRANCE OF THE PARK WATCHING AND LISTENING FOR SOMETHING SUSPICIOUS
THE TWO ARE SITTING IN THEIR CAR EATING DONUTS AND DRINKING COFFEE.
WE SEE THE SIRENS ON THE CAR FLASHING BRIGHTLY.
DETECTIVE FRANK
God dam media, they make us look bad
Like we weren't on the job or something.
[EATING AND DRINKING]
DETECTIVE RON
Dam Frank that last one.. Shit
Horrible sight, When you really think about it no
Human being can rip someone apart like that I swear I saw teeth marks in
the victims.
The captain want's us to call down to the station to okay the Coroner for
the results of the Autopsy's , the bodies are all mangled up.
Maybe a wild dog did do this.
One who didn't get fed in a while.
DETECTIVE FRANK
You see.
We have to catch the son of a bitch in the act, Parents need to keep
their dam kids the hell away from this park. , On the other side of the
park is and old highway.
The captain posted a couple of men over that way too.
CONTINUES TO EAT AND DRINK
DETECTIVE RON
How could you eat at a time like this.
Your messing up the car, I just got it cleaned.
DETECTIVE FRANK
there's another undercover car on the other side of the park.
DETECTIVE RON
Who? I hope not Johnson and steel
Because of them we didn't get our promotion.
Soon we'll be on desk duty.
The only action well get is a pile of paper work.
DETECTIVE FRANK
Don't worry about it they will get what's coming to them.
Molone and Helmers unit is by that highway.
All we have to do is sit here and keep watch
Drink some coffee and scratch our fucking balls.
Just keep watch old buddy, just keep watch.
THE TWO DETECTIVES BEGIN TO PLACE THEIR GUNS ON THE DASH BOARD SLOWLY
LOADING THEM.
DETECTIVE RON
You Know sometimes I feel I should have stayed in Med school
We have been on the force longer than any of those assholes and
What do we get our promotions Snatched right from under us.
By a bunch of rookies.
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INT. TIM'S LIVING ROOM- DAY
TIM IS HAVING A MEETING TO REVEAL HIS MASTER PLAN TO ENTER HARTFIELD PARK
TO STOP FIND OUT WHAT'S GOING ON.
ALL ARE SITTING ON TIM'S COUCH.
TIM
We can't allow this to happen guys
We need to know what's going on
Out in Hartfield Park
We can't let whatever that is out there take What's ours, we had some
good dam times in that park.
I don't know about you guys but I'm not going to stand around
Allowing this to happen.
SAM
What can we do ?
TIM
Together we can stop this..
STEVE
How could we stop what we don't know what were up against.
TIM
Well I guess were just going to have to find out.
And were going to do it tonight!!
Is everybody sure they want to do this
Because theirs no turning back.
SHAWN
Tim's right. I Mean It is worth a shot.
TIM
I know what all of you are thinking
How risky this is.. let me guess.
How the cops can catch us..
When we do this guys were taking a chance
On getting killed possibly arrested for trespassing.
But I assure you I have been up all last night Planning this out.
I'm going to say this one time and one time only.
Listen up closely.
TIM PULLS OUT A DRAWN MAP OF HARTFIELD PARK.
TIM (CONT'D)
Okay now, the front entrance is a no.. no..
There has to be cops posted there.
We can't count on the old highway either.
The blue shaded area is where the News reporter said they found The
bodies No telling if cops patrol that spot.
If I am correct the cops make their rounds every hour on the hour.
MIKE
So that's your big plan huh !!
TIM
No that's just how we are going to get into the park.
Were find who or whatever it is and kill it.
DEAN
Tim's right, for the first times in our live we can really do something
And all of our lives all through school we have never stood up for
nothing
Well now is our chance… Tim I'm with you guys we owe it to the town .
EXT. SHOT OF DETECTIVE'S CAR - NIGHT
WE SEE A MID SHOT OF THE DETECTIVES CAR WHILE THEY WAIT ON THERE
STAKEOUT.
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EXT. HARTFIELD PARK- - NIGHT
WE SEE THE CREATURE MOVING THROUGH THE PARK HUNGRY….
LOOKING FOR FOOD..
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INT. DETECTIVES CAR - NIGHT
THE DETECTIVES SIT IN THEIR CARS DRINKING COFFEE
THE GROWLS OF THE CREATURE REACHES THEM AND THEY BOTH DECIDE TO MOVE IN.
DETECTIVE FRANK
What the hell was that?
DETECTIVE RON
Shit you heard that?
THE TWO DETECTIVES PULL OUT THEIR GUNS.
THE TWO DETECTIVES TAKE FLASHLIGHTS TO LOOK AROUND ONLY TO SEE NOTHING.
IT'S GETS QUIET AND THEN THEY HEAR A WOMAN'S SCREAMS.
DETECTIVE FRANK
We may have our killer
Let's move in.
WOMAN'S VOICE [O.S]
auh--
THE DETECTIVES LET THE SIREN GIVE WAY AND DRIVE INTO THE PARK.
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EXT. HARTFIELD PARK- NIGHT
THE SCENE SHOWS THE DETECTIVES CAR SLOWLY DRIVING DOWN A PATH
IN THE PARK WITH FLASHING LIGHTS BRIGHTLY LIT.
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EXT. SAME-NIGHT
THE DETECTIVE CRUISE SLOWLY THROUGH THE DARK PATH IN THE PARK.
DETECTIVE RON USES HIS FLASHLIGHT OUT THE PASSENGER SIDE WINDOW AS
DETECTIVE FRANK DRIVES
DETECTIVE FRANK
You see anything.
DETECTIVE RON
There's nothing out here… wait. Stop the car.
The two detectives look around not knowing what they are about to get
into in concern. Suddenly we hear intense
Growling by the Creature.
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EXT. SAME-NIGHT
THE CAMERA IS IN THE FRONT OF THE CAR SHOWING IT STOP SHORT
WE SEE THE TWO DETECTIVES THROUGH THE WINDSHIELD.
THE TWO DETECTIVES SIT THEIR AS THEY HEAR THE GROWL, STARING AT EACH
OTHER, THE FLASHLIGHT GOES OUT WHEN DETECTIVE RON STICKS HIS ARM OUT THE
WINDOW THE CREATURE BITES OFF DETECTIVES RON'S HAND BLOOD LEAKS OUT OF
THE WOUND THE DETACHED HAND HITS THE GROUND STILL MOVING
DETECTIVE RON
Oh, Shit my hand
BLOOD LEAKS FROM THE HOLE ON DETECTIVE RON'S WOUND. DETECTIVE FRANK
REACHES OVER OPENING THE DOOR ON THE PASSENGER SIDE DETECTIVE FRANK STEPS
ON THE GAS AND SPEEDS OUT.
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EXT. SAME-NIGHT
WE SEE THE CAR SPEED OFF WAY UP THE ROAD.
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EXT. SAME-NIGHT
A BLOODY DETECTIVE RON IS LEFT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE PATH.
DETECTIVE RON
Don't leave me..Help me. Son of a bitch.
SCREAMING IN PAIN HOLDING THE WOUND
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EXT. SAME-NIGHT
THE CAMERA SHOWS THE DETECTIVE DECAPITATED ARM LYING ON THE GROUND.
CUT TO:
EXT. SAME- NIGHT
DETECTIVE RON BEGINS TO WALK SLOWLY AWAY
THE GROWLING BEGINS AGAIN SO WITH HIS GOOD ARM HE PULLS OUT ONE OF HIS
GUNS.
THE CREATURE IS LOOKING AT DETECTIVE RON AND BEGINS TO GIVE CHASE , HAS A
HURT,
SCARED DETECTIVE RON TRIES TO RUN HE SHOOTS AS WELL, FALLING GETTING BACK
UP.
THE CAMERA IS IN THE P.O.V. OF THE CREATURE
IT RUNS UP TO DETECTIVE RON THEN WE FADE TO A BLACK SCREEN.
EXT. PARK- NIGHT
DETECTIVE FRANK GETS OUT OF HIS CAR SLAMMING THE DOOR CLOSED
DETECTIVE FRANK PULLS OUT HIS WALKIE TALKIE..
DETECTIVE FRANK
Three to base.. I need back up.
I'm In Hartfield Park..
Come in…
My Partners down.
It's some kind of creature do you read me.
ALL WE HEAR IS STATIC .
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EXT. PATH - NIGHT
THE BLOOD THIRSTY CREATURE IS EATING DETECTIVES RON
AS THE BODY LAYS IN A POOL OF HIS OWN BLOOD.
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EXT. WOODS - NIGHT
DETECTIVE FRANK BEGINS TO RUN THROUGH THE WOODS AS HE HEARS THE CREATURES
GROWLS.
A SCARED DETECTIVE RUNS AS HE FALLS, GETTING RIGHT BACK UP.
LOOKING AROUND IN FEAR .
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EXT. OUTSIDE GATE HARTFIELD PARK- NIGHT
THE SIX TEENS STAND OUTSIDE A GATE THAT SURROUNDS HARTFIELD PARK HOLDING
BAGS OF ARSENAL TO STOP THE EVIL ABOMINATION THE PARK AND TOWN FACES.
TIM HOLDS ON TO THE GATE LOOKING IN, AS THE OTHERS STAND BEHIND HIM.
TIM LOOKS IN THROUGH A PAIR OF NIGHT VISION GOGGLES.
TIM
It's quiet, and the coast is clear it's nothing in there….
MIKE TAKES THE NIGHT VISION GOGGLES FROM TIM TO SATISFY HIS CURIOSITY
THAT NOTHINGS IN THERE.
MIKE
Tim let me see? All I see is trees….
Come on, Lets go inside…
DEAN
I don't know about you guys but I am having second thoughts about this.
STEVE
I'm not, I want to go through with this..
TIM
We have to know this place is our only hangout.
Listen with or without you guys I'm still going inside there.
DEAN
Maybe we should plan this out better scope the park out for a couple of
days.
TIM
We don't have a couple of days can't you understand that Dean?
Open your eyes look around you people are being slaughtered in there.
SAMANTHA
Tim's right we have to at least see what's going on in there if we stick
together we'll be alright.
DEAN
I really don't know how I always let you talk me into doing this crazy
shit.
Alright I'm with you.
TIM
Good now come on were wasting time.
EXT. SAME- NIGHT
THE SIX CLIMB THE GATE ENTERING THE PARK UNAWARE OF THE DANGER THEY ARE
GETTING THEMSELVES INTO.
EXT. HARTFIELD PARK - NIGHT.
THE SIX ARE ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE GATE NOW INSIDE HART FIELD PARK.
AND BEGIN TO LOOK AROUND THEM.
TIM
[whispering] It's clear come on this way.
THE SIX BEGIN THROUGH WALK THROUGH THE PARK.
TIM (CONT'D)
Don't forget the plan
Sam you stay with me, Mike you stay with Dean And Shawn you pair up with
Steve.
For right now we stay together but remember when we separate
We do it in two's this way somebody is always watching The other Persons
back. When we do meet up we meet by the
Gate we came in over.
Be there by sunrise. Who Ever Isn't there by sunrise gets left.
Got it ?
DEAN
Got It..
MIKE
Got it..
SHAWN
Got it.
SAM
Got it..
DEAN
Which way ?
TIM LOOKS AT THE MAP.
TIM
This way come on.
EXT. HART FIELD PARK-NIGHT
TIM
I got a baseball bat
PULLING THE BAT OUT OF THE BAG
SHAWN
I can do more damage with this hammer..
STEVE PULLS OUT A GUN FROM HIS WASTE
DEAN
Where the hell did you get that?
STEVE
It's my old mans..
TIM
Are you fucking crazy man?
If someone hears the shots we are dead Meat.
Do you know how much attention the shots will bring to the cops?
SAM
We Don't know what we are up against so that gun Steve Has may come in
handy.
THE SIX CONTINUE TO WALK THROUGH THE PARK.
SMOKE COVERS THE PATH THEY ARE WALKING ON.`
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EXT. PARK-NIGHT
THE SIX BEGIN TO HEAR SOMETHING AS THEY MOVE THROUGH THE PARK.
THE SIX STOP WALKING LOOKING AROUND.
SOUND. GROWLING
STEVE
What the hell was that?
HOLDING THE GUN IN HIS HAND LOOKING AROUND
SAM
Sounds like a dog..
TIM
Listen..
WE CRANE UP ON TIM'S WORRIED FACE.
TIM (CONT'D)
It's getting louder
What ever it is, It's coming this way.
IN SURPRISE DETECTIVE FRANK JUMPS OUT OF NO WHERE AND STEVE ACCIDENTALLY
SHOOTS DETECTIVE FRANK IN HIS HEAD KILLING HIM. WE SEE THE BLOOD POUR OUT
OF THE BULLET WOUND AS DETECTIVE FRANK HITS THE FLOOR.
SHAWN
Holy shit you shot him.
Steve you shot him.
TIM IN A STATE OF SHOCK OF WHAT JUST HAPPEN.
GETS DOWN WITH THE DEAD DETECTIVES BODY.
TIM
Holy shit Steve you killed a cop.
Where going away for this along time.
There is no lawyer in the world that can get us out of this.
Dam Steve you killed a cop. Give me the gun?
STEVE
I got scared, he came out of nowhere.
Everything happened so quick..
I thought he was the killer
You have to understand I panicked it was an accident.
You guys we can't say nothing about this to anybody.
We all will go down together.
I can't believe I did This.
THE CAMERA SHOWS TIM BENT DOWN BY THE DEAD BODY , THEN HE STANDS BACK UP
AFTER GIVING STEVE AN EVIL LOOK.
TIM
All right it was an accident. So give me the gun.
STEVE
No damit, Tim I said it was an accident.
THE OTHERS LOOK NERVOUS AS TIM AND STEVE DEBATE OVER THE GUN.
STEVE (CONT'D)
I'm not giving you the gun Tim.
If you want it you have to take it.
STEVE POINTS THE GUN AT TIM PUTTING THE GUN TO TIM'S HEAD AS TIM RAISES
HIS HANDS IN AIR.
STEVE (CONT'D)
And I don't think you want to do that.
SAM
Steve. Please stop.
STEVE
You know I'm a little sick of tired of everything being about Tim, It's
his brilliant idea we are in this situation in the first place.
Stay out of my way Tim.
I don't want to have another accident.
TIM
Alright fine, You don't have to give me the gun I guess it's time to
split up, whatever that Growling we heard was it's coming for us. You
need me to get out of here alive I'm taking Sam and going my separate way
so to you Steve and the rest of you!! Good luck. Come on Sam.
STEVE SLOWLY LOWERS THE GUN FROM TIM'S FACE. TIM GRABS SAM'S HAND AND
WALKS AWAY WITH HER THE OTHER SPLIT UP AS WELL AND THE SCENE WILL.
DEAN
Steve why did you have to piss him off?
Now what are we going to do, I should have followed my instincts and not
have come here.
But no I always do the total opposite.
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EXT. SAME-NIGHT
WE CRANE DOWN TO SEE DETECTIVE FRANK'S BODY LYING ON THE GROUND.
DETECTIVE FRANK'S HEAD HAS A HOLE IN IT FROM WHERE STEVE SHOT HIM.
THE BLOOD FROM THE HEAD WOUND COVERS THE DEAD DETECTIVE FACE.
WE HEAR GROWLING AS THE BODY IS SNATCHED AWAY.
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SAM AND TIM WALK SLOWLY DOWN THE DARK PATH OF HARTFIELD PARK, INSIDE
TIM'S HAND IS THE BAT.
SAM
Are you sure we should have separated?
TIM
I thought it was the smart thing to do.
Steve and that gun would have messed everything up.
Besides we can cover more ground this way.
Steve wouldn't have shot me he was bluffing.
TIM AND SAM CONTINUE TO WALK.
TIM (CONT'D)
The Map. Auh. Shit.
SAM
What is it?
TIM
I drop the Map, we have to go back.
SAM
We can't go back, that thing is back there
TIM
I need the map, where lost now
While we was gone this park really changed.
TIM AND SAM STOP WALKING.
TIM (CONT'D)
I'm going back, are you coming or what?
SAM
The cops might see us
Steve shot that cop back there the place is probably crawling.
TIM
Wait here for a few minutes.
If I not back keep walking.
SAM
Hurry don't take long this is starting to creep me out.
SAM GRABS TIM'S ARM AS HE BEGINS TO WALK AWAY INTO THE NIGHT.
SAM (CONT'D)
I love you !!!
TIM GIVES SAM A KISS AND BEGINS TO RUN TO BACK TRACK HIS OLD STEPS.
EXT. WOODS-NIGHT
THE NEWS REPORTER SNEAKS INTO THE PARK TO GET SOME FOOTAGE WITH A CAMERA
MAN OF THE CREATURE. THE TWO WALK DOWN A
DESERTED PATH FILMING.
NEWS REPORTER
We are bound to come across something.
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EXT. SAME- NIGHT
WE SEE TIM RUNNING BACK DOWN THE PATH.
EXT. PARK/WOODS-NIGHT
THE NEWS REPORTER STANDS BY A TREE LIGHTING UP A CIGARETTE
THE CREATURE'S ARMS COME DOWN AROUND THE REPORTER SNATCHING
THE REPORTER UP A TREE.
WE SEE A BLOODY MESS.
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EXT. SAME-NIGHT
THE CAMERA MANS RUNS FOR HIS LIFE AS THE CREATURE KILLS HIM.
WE SEE A BLOODY MESS.
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EXT. PARK-NIGHT
SAM STANDS WAITING FOR TIM, SAM STARTS TO CONTINUE TO WALK THROUGH THE
PARK,
AFTER HEARING THE SCREAMS OF THE REPORTER AND THE CAMERA MAN.
THE CREATURE BEGINS TO RAW AGAIN.
SAMANTHA STARTS TO RUN FOR HER LIFE.
EXT. PARK-NIGHT
DEAN AND SHAWN WALK THROUGH THE DARK FOGGY PARK. SHAWN HOLDS A
HAMMER WAITING FOR SOMEONE TO APPROACH.
DEAN
We don't know exactly what were hunting for.
That growling back there seems more like something hunting us.
I'm starting to have bad feelings about this.
Shawn let's get out of here let's forget about this man.
All we did was walk into a lion's den.
SHAWN
Your right, this is stupid.
But when did you decide this when Steve shot that cop?
DEAN
How could we be so stupid to separate.
This place is Evil, that wasn't like Steve whatever's out there
It's turning us against each other working on our fears…
And were its prey.
SHAWN SEES AN OPENING AND TELLS DEAN TO GO THAT DIRECTION.
SHAWN
Come on. Let's go through there.
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EXT. PARK-NIGHT
AS SAM RUNS SHE DISCOVERS THE NEWS REPORTERS DEAD BODY.
BLOODY HANGING FROM A TREE..
SAM BACKS UP AND LET'S OFF A SCREAM.
SAM BEGINS TO HOLD HER MOUTH AS SHE PUKES, FROM THE HORRIBLE SIGHT.
SAM
Auhhh !!! Oh my god !!!
SAM BEGINS TO RUN.
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EXT. PARK-NIGHT
THE CREATURE HUNTS SAM DOWN AS SHE RUNS, THE CAMERA IS POSITIONED A GREAT
DISTANCE AHEAD OF SAM RUNNING IN [S.M.] AND THE CREATURE IS DIRECTLY
BEHIND HER.
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EXT. SAME-NIGHT
AS SAMANTHA RUNS THE CREATURE GRABS HER LEG CAUSING HER TO FALL TO THE
GROUND BY A BIG ROCK, SAM STRUGGLES TO GRAB THE ROCK AS THE CREATURE
PULLS HER BACK TOWARDS IT WAY. SAM GRABS THE ROCK BASHING THE CREATURE IN
THE HEAD. THE CREATURE WOBBLES AND SCREAMS IN PAIN,
GREEN ALIEN BLOOD COVERS SAM'S CLOTHS THAT GIVES HER TIME TO RUN.
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EXT. THE OPENING-NIGHT
DEAN AND SHAWN ARE STANDING IN THE OPENING AFTER RUNNING TRYING TO CATCH
THEIR BREATH.
DEAN
I don't know if I can go on.
I'm tired Shawn. [Out of breath]
SHAWN
We have to Dean. We can't stop
That thing is out there remember
I think I remember this part of the Park.
This leads back by the old Highway.
I hope the other are all right.
DEAN
Shit, There's cops all over there.
THE TWO HEAR A BEATING HEART AND GROWLS
THE CREATURE APPEARS.
SHAWN AND DEAN LOOK ON IN FEAR.
DEAN (CONT'D)
Kill it with the hammer Shawn.
Kill it with the hammer..
BOTH SCARED, SHAWN SWINGS THE HAMMER HURTING THE CREATURE BUT THAT JUST
MADE IT MADDER, THE CREATURE POSSES SHAWN MAKING HIM BEAT HIS OWN SELF TO
DEATH WIT THE HAMMER. DEAN IS THEN CORNERED AND KILLED BY THE CREATURE.
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EXT. SAME-NIGHT
WE SEE THE TWO BLOODY BODIES OF SHAWN AND DEAN LYING DEAD.
WE SEE THE CREATURE WALK RIGHT BY THE TWO DEAD BODIES GROWLING.
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EXT. PARK- NIGHT
TIM IS WALKING LOOKING AROUND HOLDING THE BASEBALL BAT
TIM SEES THE DEAD NEWS REPORTERS BODY HANGING FROM THE TREE.
TIM YELLS IN FEAR.
WALKING FROM THE SCENE TIM FINDS A BLOODY PAIR OF SNEAKERS.
TIM
Somebody, who's out there?
Shit, I know Steve didn't shoot this one.
It's here, It's here. [Yelling Loudly]
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EXT. PARK-NIGHT
TIM IS WALKING AS SAM RUNS UP TO TIM. SAM'S CLOTHS COVERED IN BLOOD.
TIM DROPS THE BAT.
SAM
We have to get out of here!
Please Tim There's something out there
I mean in here ...
It killed that News Reporter
It's eating anyone who comes in this park.
It was some kind of alien..
TIM
I saw the body back there.
What the hell your bleeding.
SAM
No it's not my blood, it's the creatures.
So is this green stuff.
TIM
We can't leave without the others.
SAM
Please. There's no time
There's a deadly Creature after us, you have to believe me Tim.
Just look at my cloths. It almost got me I managed to escape it clutches.
I hit it with a big Rock .All that did was stunned it.
TIM
That's what killed that Reporter
Shit all right listen take this arrow I found it in a car off the back
highway I didn't find the map we have to find a pay phone and get help
out here.
TIM HANDS SAM THE ARROW.
TIM (CONT'D)
If we get out of here alive Sam
I want us to give it another try
Come on.
TIM PUTS HIS ARM AROUND SAM AND THEY WALK OUT OF FRAME..
EXT. THE OPENING-NIGHT
TIM AND SAM REACH THE OPENING WHERE SHAWN AND DEAN MET THEIR UNFORTUNATE
DEATHS. TIM AND SAM ENTERS THE OPENING FINDING THE DEAD BODIES OF THERE
TWO FRIENDS.
WE SEE THE HAMMER IN SHAWN'S HEAD AND DEAN IS BADLY MUTILATED.
SAM HAS A NERVOUS BREAKDOWN.
TIM
Sam there's the old opening
SAM
Oh God Tim look.
TIM AND SAM SEE THE BODIES.
TIM
It got Dean and Shawn.
No..fuck [angry]
SAMANTHA CRIES IN FEAR.
SAM
What are we going to do now?
It's out here and it's going to get us.
TIM
Just stay calm Sam
Mike and Steve could be dead too!
I found the old sewer system but it was nailed shut.
The entrance or the back Highway off the roads..
That's the only way out, but we can also take a chance.
To make it to the old playground.
SAM
we have to get out of here TIM
were gonna die !! Were gonna die !!
TIM SHAKES SAMANTHA BY HER ARMS TO CALM HER DOWN.
TIM
Calm down Dam it [Pause]
Now were going to make it out of this park alive
Sam you have to get it together.
Now were dealing with some real fucking shit here.
We both seen it's work what it's Capable of…
What ever that thing is it's not from this world.
It has incredible strength I found that out by looking at
Those bodies back there.
So please Sam I want us to get through this, be strong
On the way to the old playground there use to be a payphone
We can call for help there.
TIM GRABS SAM AND BEGINS TO RUN.
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EXT. PAY PHONE- NIGHT
SAM AND TIM ARRIVE AT THE PAY PHONE OUT OF BREATH STRUGGLING TO TALK.
TIM
Yes it's still here.
SAM PICKS UP THE PHONE DIALING FOR HELP!
SAM
Yes, this is a emergency call from Hartfield Park.
Shit. Hello, hello the line died out.
TIM
That's just great..
Fuck… we have to take our chances towards the playground.
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EXT. PAY PHONE-NIGHT
THE CAMERA SHOWS THE PAY PHONE OFF THE HOOK SWINGING
A " PLEASE HANG UP" RECORDING PLAYS OVER AND OVER.
WE SEE THE HAND OF THE CREATURE GRAB THE PHONE.
Ext. Park/Woods-Night
Mike and Steve maneuver through the woods.
MIKE
What exactly are we looking for?
STEVE
Listening to Tim I guess trouble
Why did I even allow him to talk me into coming out here?
MIKE
Steve We have to stop
I have to piss man.
STEVE
Damit you can't hold it you have to piss now?
Dam Mike this isn't exactly a good time.
MIKE
I really have to piss bad I can't hold it.
STEVE
Alright I'll wait shit..
But hurry up, go behind one of those trees or bushes.
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EXT. PARK/ WOODS- NIGHT
TIM AND SAMANTHA CONTINUE TO MAKE THEIR WAY TOWARDS THE OLD PLAYGROUND.
SAM
I have an idea Tim
That Dead News Crew back there, that camera
If We can get it working somebody might hear or see
Us we can call for help.
TIM
I didn't think of that it's worth a try …
SAM AND TIM GO BACK IN SEARCH OF THE NEWS CREW CAMERA.
EXT. WOODS- NIGHT
WE SEE MIKE WALKING TOWARDS AN OLD TREE, MIKE OPENS HIS PANTS ZIPPER TO
URINATE STEVE YELL'S FOR MIKE TO HURRY UP.
STEVE (O.S.)
Mike hurry up.
MIKE
Alright, just a fucking minute [urinating]
Dam can a man take a decent leak without being disturbed.
THE CREATURE ATTACKS MIKE RIPPING HIS PENIS OFF AND EATING MIKE ALIVE AS
HE IS RIP APART TO A BLOODY MESS, BLOOD FLOWS FROM MIKES ZIPPER, THE
CREATURE DRAGS MIKE INTO THE DARKNESS.
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EXT. WOODS- NIGHT
STEVE WALKS OVER WITH THE GUN IN HIS HAND TO LOOK FOR MIKE, THINKING
EVERYTHING IS OKAY. WHEN STEVE NOTICES MIKE'S BODY.
HE BEGINS TO SHOOT AT THE CREATURE IT RUNS INTO THE WOODS.
STEVE
Okay Mike, come on lets go
It doesn't take all night to piss
STEVE SEES MIKE DEAD.
STEVE (CONT'D)
Holy shit..
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EXT. WOODS/PARK-NIGHT
SAMANTHA AND TIM FIND THE NEWS CAMERA IN THE WOODS COVERED IN BLOOD.
TIM AND SAM USE IT TO MAKE A LIVE BROADCAST TO CALL FOR HELP.
SAM
It's on go ahead, the Red light is on.
TIM
Help us were in Hartfield Park something is out here killing
People, Please its some kind of creature.
If anyone is watching or listening please help us.
Anybody Please!!
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EXT. WOODS-NIGHT
STEVE WALKS INTO THE DARK FOGGY PARK FIRING HIS GUN, WHEN STEVE SEES THE
CREATURE STEVE BEATS IT WITH THE GUN UNTIL IT FALLS TO THE GROUND.
THE CREATURE JUMPS UP KILLING STEVE TAKING HIS THROAT OUT.
BLOOD POURS OUT OF STEVE'S THROAT WHILE HE HOLDS THE BLOODY WOUND
COLLAPSING TO THE GROUND.
EXT. PARK-NIGHT
SAM AND TIM WALK THROUGH THE PARK WITH THEIR FLASHLIGHTS TO FIND THE BACK
HIGHWAY'S, ITS HARD TO SEE THE PATH WITH SMOKE COVERING IT.
TIM
You think somebody saw the broadcast?
SAM
I hope so Tim
Are you sure this is the right way?
TIM
We'll know in a minute.
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EXT. THE BACK HIGHWAY'S-NIGHT
SAM AND TIM WALK AS THEY FIND A ABANDONED SQUAD CAR
TIM AND SAM WALK UP TO THE CAR AND THEY FIND A BADLY MUTILATED BODY
A HAND STILL ATTACHED TO THE STEERING WHEEL AND BLOOD IS EVERYWHERE
THEY FIND A POLICE RADIO, WHICH GIVES THEM A SECOND CHANCE TO ASK FOR
HELP.
TIM
You see that bright Light coming from up there
SAM
It's a car come on it might have a radio.
TIM AND SAM APPROACHES THE DRIVER SIDE OF THE CAR.
SAM (CONT'D)
Oh no, Tim
TIM
Its okay Sam look there's a radio.
Can somebody hear me come in.
TIM GRABS THE RADIO.
TIM (CONT'D)
This is Tim reeves listen can anyone hear me..
Somebody please !! can you hear us!!
A VOICE RESPONDS ON THE OTHER END OF THE RADIO.
VOICE [O.S]
I can hear you.. What is going on out there
TIM
This is Tim Reeves I'm calling from Hartfield Park
Were trapped in here something is killing people and we can't get out.
This is an emergency. Help us..
VOICE [O.S]
Okay now just calm down..
Now slowly what is going on out there.
TIM
Look we don't have much time
There's something in this park killing people And it has to be contained
if it gets out into the town Where fucked.
VOICE [O.S]
How many people are out there with you ?
TIM
As for as I know two of us. Possibly others.
Send help, like the army or something,.
ALL TIM HEARS IS STATIC.
TIM (CONT'D)
Can you hear me.
The Radio died.
TIM AND SAM LOOK AROUND IN FEAR
SAM
Tim you hear that?
It's coming from over there.
TIM TURNS ON THE HEADLIGHTS OF THE CAR SEEING THE BLOOD THIRSTY CREATURE.
TIM FINDS A RIFLE IN THE CAR FIRING IT AT THE CREATURE, A HOLE IS BLOWN
IN THE CREATURE
AND GREEN BLOOD FLIES OUT THE CREATURES HEAD AS IT BACKS OFF..
TIM AND SAM LOOK AROUND IN SHOCK
TIM
What ever that thing is out here
Lurking it's not from this world.
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ACROSS SCREEN IN RED WRITING -" MEANWHILE BACK IN TOWN".
EXT. TOWN HALL - NIGHT
THE TOWNS PEOPLE GATHER TOGETHER TO MAKE A PLAN TO GET TIM AND SAM OUT OF
HARTFIELD PARK.
THE ROOM IS VERY NOISY AS BILL MOSENBURG STEPS THROUGH THE NOISY CROWD TO
RESTORE SOME TYPE OF ORDER. BILL MOSENBURG TRIES
TO QUIET THE NOISY CROWD.
BILL MOSENBURG
All … [yelling]
Quiet people….
A HUSH COMES ABOUT THE ROOM EVERYONE GIVES BILL MOSENBURG THERE
ATTENTION..
BILL MOSENBURG (CONT'D)
We received a stress call From Hartfield Park.
There are some people still alive over there,
They mumbled something about some monster….
It wiped out most of our law enforcement.
Everyone needs to stick together so we can stop this thing..
I don't know what the hell is going on out there but Town is in great
danger.
TOWNS PERSON
How do we know what were going up against?
BILL MOSENBURG
We don't know.
Let's just take these weapons and get the hell out of here!!
THE TOWNS PEOPLE GATHER UP THEIR WEAPONS READY TO GO TO HARTFIELD PARK.
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EXT. HARTFIELD PARK-NIGHT
TIM AND SAM CONTINUE TO WALK THROUGH THE WOODS LOOKING FOR THE
PLAYGROUND.
TIM
Where running out of ammo fast Sam.
I hope they hurry up and get out here.
If that thing gets out here the whole town's fucked.
SAM
What does it want? It's looking for something?
TIM
It want's food human food?
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EXT. ROAD-NIGHT
WE SEE CARS SPEEDING UP A ROAD PASSING THE HARTFIELD PARK ENTRANCE SIGN.
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EXT. PATH-NIGHT
THE CAR PULLS UP AS THE FIRING SQUAD OF TOWNSPEOPLE EXIT POPPING THE
TRUNK TAKING OUT WEAPONS PASSING THEM OUT IN A LINE.
BILL MOSENBURG
Those kids are out here, we have to find them before it gets them.
TOWNS PERSON
What are we looking for?
BILL MOSENBURG
look for Anything weird. Oh and don't hesitate to shoot.
THE TOWNS PEOPLE WALK THROUGH THE DARK FOGGY DESERTED WOODS OF THE PARK.
EXT. WOODS-NIGHT
THE ARMY OF TOWNS PEOPLE CONTINUE TO WALK THROUGH THE WOODS HEARING
GROWLING NOISES.
TOWNS PERSON
What the hell is that?
BILL MOSENBURG
It sounds like a Dog !!
THE TOWNS PEOPLE BEGIN TO FIRE THEIR WEAPONS AT A SET OF BUSHES.
BILL MOSENBURG (CONT'D)
Did we kill it..
TOWNS PERSON#1
I'll see ..
ONE OF OUT THE ANGRY MOB OF TOWNS PEOPLE WALKS OVER TO THE BUSHES THAT
THEY SHOT AT.
THE CREATURE RIPS OFF THE FLESH OF THE TOWN PERSON AS THE MOB BEGINS TO
FIRE OFF THEIR GUNS AGAIN.
TOWNS PERSON#2
I think we shot it…..
I don't think it's dead it sound like it ran off in the woods.
BILL MOSENBURG
Dam what does it take to kill that thing?
Come on let's find those kids.
THE ANGRY ARMY OF TOWNS PEOPLE CONTINUE IN SEARCH OF SAM AND TIM.
EXT. THE OLD PLAYGROUND-NIGHT
SAM AND TIM MAKE IT TO THE OLD PLAYGROUND THE SETTING OF THE PLAYGROUND
IS DARK AND SMOKY. THE LEAVES ON THE TREES AND THE SWINGS MOVE WITH THE
WIND.
TIM
We made it the entrance is a mile over towards that direction
Were almost out of here Sam.
THE CREATURE RELEASE'S A SERIES OF GROWLS
SAM
It's here Tim.
OUT OF NOWHERE THE CREATURE ATTACKS TIM HURTING HIS LEG BADLY SAM STABS
THE CREATURE WIT THE ARROW , THE CREATURE IS HURT GIVING SAM AND TIM TIME
TO TRY TO RUN, TIM LIMPS ALONG IN PAIN SHOOTING AT THE CREATURE UNTIL HE
RUNS OUT OF AMMO.
TIM
Sam I think you just pissed it off more..
SAM AND TIM ARE RUNNING TOWARDS THE OLD PLAYGROUND HOUSE.
EXT. PLAYGROUND-NIGHT
TIM AND SAM SEE DETECTIVES FRANK'S HEAD IN THE SWING WITH THE BULLET
WHOLE IN IT THE SWINGS MOVES BACK
AND FOURTH.
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EXT. PLAYGROUND/HOUSE- NIGHT
WE SEE THE PLAYGROUND HOUSE AS TIM AND SAM RUN INTO FRAME TOWARDS THE
HOUSE.
TIM AND SAM TRY TO GET INSIDE BUT IT'S LOCKED.
TIM
It's locked
TIM TRIES TO KICK THE DOOR IN.
SAM
Shoot the locks off
TIM
I can't I ran out of ammo.
TIM STARTS KICKING HARDER AND BEATING THE DOOR WITH THE GUN UNTIL HE GETS
IT OPEN. IN THE P.O.V OF THE CREATURE WE MOVE UP ON THE TWO IN TERROR AS
THEY TRY TO GET IN. TIM AND SAM LOOK ON IN EXTREME FEAR.
TIM AND SAM GET INSIDE THE PLAYGROUND HOUSE JUST INSIDE BEFORE THE
CREATURE CAN GET TO THEM.
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INT. PLAYGROUND HOUSE- NIGHT
TIM AND SAM ARE TRAPPED INSIDE THE PLAYGROUND HOUSE.
TIM
This is great, just great. Now were trapped in here
With no Radio, no more bullets.
SAM
There has to be a way out of here.
TIM
There is no way out of here we walked into a death trap.
How do we kill that dam thing, we tried shooting it
Stabbing it…
SAM
Why does it want us?
TIM
Where food Sam.
Every time that thing eats it gets stronger and stronger.
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EXT. OUTSIDE PLAYGROUND HOUSE/PARK-NIGHT
WE SEE THE CREATURE MOVING FAST AROUND THE PLAYGROUND HOUSE IN SEARCH OF
TIM AND SAM. THE CREATURE LET'S OFF HORRIBLE GROWLS.
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INT. PLAYGROUND HOUSE - NIGHT
WHERE BACK ON TIM AND SAM LOCKED INSIDE THE PLAYGROUND HOUSE.
THEY BEGIN TO SMELL SOMETHING AS THE LIGHTS GO OUT.
SAM TURNS ON HER FLASHLIGHT.
SAM
Do you smell that?
TIM
Smell what?
SAM
Like something's dead or rotting..
SAM POINTS HER FLASHLIGHT TOWARDS WHERE SHE FEELS THE SMELL IS COMING
FROM SEEING A BADLY ROTTING CORPSE. THE
TWO START TO CHOKE FROM THE HORRIBLE STENCH.
COUGHING.
TIM
I rather take my chances with that thing out there!!
TIM STUMBLES KNOCKING OVER SOME RECREATIONAL SUPPLIES FINDING A LEAF
RAKE.
TIM (CONT'D)
We can use this.
SAM
We need more than that?
Like prays maybe.
TIM
When I open the door make a run for it.
Ready 1"2"3.
WITH THE RAKE IN HIS HAND TIM SWINGS OPEN THE DOOR RUNNING OUT FIRST.
SAM FOLLOWING TIM'S LEAD RIGHT BEHIND HIM.
EXT. OUTSIDE PLAYGROUND HOUSE- NIGHT
TIM AND SAM STAND OUTSIDE THE PLAYGROUND HOUSE SEEING NO SIGHT OF THE
CREATURE.
SAM
Where did it go..
TIM
I don't know but it's out here somewhere.
Come on let's get the hell out of here.
SAM AND TIM WALK THROUGH THE PLAYGROUND TIM WITH THE RAKE IN HIS HAND
READY FOR THE UNEXPECTED. WE SUDDENLY SEE THE
CREATURE RUNS BEHIND TIM AND SAM AS THEY WALK TIM YELLS.
TIM (CONT'D)
Run Sam run.
AS SAM RUNS TIM TURNS AROUND FIGHTING OF THE CREATURE WITH THE RAKE
STABBING IT REPEATEDLY OVER AND OVER. THE WEAKENED CREATURE
IS HURT AND COLLAPSES TO THE GROUND.
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EXT. SAME - NIGHT
THE CAMERA IS IN THE P.O.V OF THE CREATURE LYING HURT ON THE GROUND TIM
WALKS OVER TO THE CREATURE WITH THE RAKE AND SLAMS THE RAKE DOWN ON IT'S
HEAD, THE CREATURES GREEN BLOOD FLIES IN THE AIR HITTING TIM IN HIS FACE
AS WE.
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EXT. PLAYGROUND /ROAD- NIGHT
WE SEE TIM AND SAM STANDING OVER THE CREATURE THINKING IT'S DEAD.
SAM
Is it dead?
TIM
Yea it's dead.
EXT. PLAYGROUND/ ROAD-NIGHT
A COPS CAR PULLS UP, WE SEE THE COP EXIT WALKING TOWARDS TIM AND SAM.
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EXT. SAME- NIGHT
WE ARE BACK ON TIM AND SAM STANDING BY THE DEAD CREATURE AS THE COP WALKS
OVER TO THEM, TIM STILL HOLDS THE BLOODY RAKE IN HIS HAND.
SQUAD CAR LIGHTS PLAY OUT THE BACKGROUND.
COP
What I Gods name are you kids doing out here?
This Park is under Investigation for several unsolved Murders.
TIM
Wait Sir. The murders Aren't unsolved anymore.
Now that right there is your killer.
That right there is responsible for all the murders.
A QUICK SHOT OF THE DEAD CREATURE.
COP
What in the World is that?
THE COP BENDS DOWN FOR A CLOSER LOOK AND THE CREATURE IN SURPRISED RIPS
THE DETECTIVE HEAD OFF OF HIS SHOULDER, THE HEAD ROLLS ON THE GROUND.
THE BLOOD SQUIRTS ALL OVER TIM AND SAM.
THE CREATURE STANDS HOLDING THE COPS HEAD IN IT'S HAND.
EXT. WOODS- NIGHT
THE FIRING SQUAD OF TOWNS PEOPLE MAKE THERE WAY THROUGH THE WOODS
CARRYING GUNS HEARING THE CREATURE.
TOWNS PERSON
That things out here, this way..
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EXT. PLAYGROUND- NIGHT
TIM TRIES TO FIGHT THE CREATURE OF WITH THE RAKE AS THE FIRING SQUAD OF
TOWNS PEOPLE COME UP THE PLAYGROUND HILL FIRING THEIR WEAPONS.
ALL OF A SUDDEN ALL OF THE ARMY OF TOWNS PEOPLE GET POSSESSED. ONE TOWNS
PERSON TURNS THE GUN ON HIMSELF SHOOTING HIMSELF IN THE CHEEK BLOOD ALL
OVER BAD NECK WOUND, OTHERS SHOOT EACH OTHER AND SOME RIPPED THERE SKIN
OF THERE BODIES.
TIM RUNS PICKING UP TWO OF THE GUNS FIRING AT THE CREATURE. SAM DIGS INTO
ONE OF THE TOWNS PERSONS BAGS PULLING OUT A NET,THROWING THE NET AROUND
THE CREATURE TIM FIRES AGAIN STUNNING THE CREATURE, TIM THEN PICKS UP THE
RAKE BREAKING IT IN HALF MAKING A SHARP STAKE STABBING THE CREATURE IN
IT'S HEAD. GREEN BLOOD
EXITS THE CREATURE AS IT FALLS TO THE FLOOR.
ACROSS SCREEN - " SUNRISE ".
EXT. HARTFIELD PARK - DAY
TIM AND SAM DRAG THE CREATURE THROUGH THE PARK TAKEN IT BACK TO THE
MUSEUM.
TIM
How much does this thing way?
SAMANTHA
Why are we even dragging this thing anyway?
What if it isn't dead.
Tim gets down hitting the creature to show Samantha it's dead.
TIM
It's dead Sam, That's why we should lock it up just in case it isn't.
Now help me we are almost there.
Samantha and Tim both Pull the dead Creature through the park.
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EXT. THE HARTFIELD MUSEUM- DAY
TIM WALKS UP TO THE MUSEUM STAIRS DRAGGING THE CREATURE.
TIM
Tim wait right here!!
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EXT. MUSEUM STAIRS - DAY
TIM AND SAM SIT ON THE STAIRS OUTSIDE THE MUSEUM.
TIM
I told you we'll make it out of this alive..
Hartfield Lane is much safer with that thing concealed behind closed
walls.
We made it to the morning. SAM I..
SAMANTHA
what , what is it ?
TIM reaches in to kiss SAMANTHA when there lips get close to touch they
hear a noise and is interrupted.
SAMANTHA (CONT'D)
Tim what was that you heard that?
TIM
Nothing. IT was just the wind probably.
SAMANTHA and TIM begin to kiss.
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EXT. PARK- DAY
TIM AND SAM WALK UP A PATH IN THE PARK.
SAM
Where are we going.
TIM
To that squad Car to use that radio..
EXT. PARK- DAY
Tim uses the Walkie Talkie that was inside the squad car.
TIM
The Calvary is on the way.
A little late but they're coming.
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EXT. CRIME SCENE- DAY
THE FBI HAS STEPPED IN SEEING THE BLOODY AFTERMATH OF THE CREATURE
KILLING SPREE. CORNERS AND
SPECIAL OFFICIALS PLAY THE SCENE AS BODIES ARE HAULED OFF INSIDE BODY
BAGS FROM THE CORONERS
F.B.I. AGENT LEE
You two must have had one hell of a scare
You have been through a lot.
So you say you put that thing in that museum.
TIM
I had to contain it, it seemed dead but..
MAYOR WINTERS
But what, what the hell happened out here?
What has become of my town?
You had no business out here you were trespassing I want these young
punks arrested.
SURPRISINGLY MRS LESINGER APPEARS AND REVEALS THE DREADED SECRETS MAYOR
WINTERS WAS HIDING ABOUT THE DISCOVERY OF THE CRATE INSIDE HARTFIELD LAKE
MANY YEARS AGO.
MRS LESINGER
You know what happened Mayor Winters
It was in that crate you and my husband pulled out that lake
That's when all the murders started.
You and my husband tried to cover it up by Putting that crate in the
museum.
I know all about it?
F.B.I. AGENT LEE
If what this ladies Saying is true
TIM
Then you knew all about this..
TIM IN ANGER SLUGS THE MAYOR KNOCKING HIM TO THE FLOOR.
F.B.I. AGENT LEE
All right son break it up.
MAYOR WINTERS
She's not lying we did find something by that lake
Listen I knew election time was coming up and…
TIM
A lot of People lost their lives because of you , my friends. Thanks lady
MRS LESINGER
No Problem I owed it to my husband..and the town.
I miss the old son of a bitch.
It can get mighty lonely in this town
F.B.I. AGENT LEE
Okay. Calls these kids Parents.
Good work.
Miss I would like a statement from you as well, Also whoever else can
help us out on this.
THE OTHER FBI AGENTS WALK OVER.
F.B.I. AGENT LEE (CONT'D)
You no what we have to do take that thing
Out of the MUSEUM Seal it back in the Crate that it came out of and let's
throw it back in that lake.
I forbid anybody from ever swimming, Drinking or going anywhere near that
lake until further investigation.
Fbi agent Simms get over hear and contact these kids parents so we can
release them also get written statements.
Everyone else let's comb the area and look around for more bodies it's
mass casualties in here.
Agent Sims walks over to Agent Lee.
F.B.I. Agent Sims
Yes sir I will get right on it.
F.B.I. AGENT LEE
You kids go wit Agent Sims he'll assist you from here.
You kids should be proud of your selves, You prevented more live lost you
guys are hero's.
Samantha And Tim look at FBI AGENT Lee then begins to walk off with AGENT
Sims.
F.B.I. AGENT LEE (CONT'D)
Oh, Real quick come back over here a minute.
Tim and Samantha walk back over to Agent LEE.
F.B.I. AGENT LEE (CONT'D)
Any of you can tell me what those buildings are across that lake?
Sam
There use to be an old power plant across the Lake but the workers
Kept getting sick Disappearing eventually they closed the place down
chemicals spilled into the water poising the towns water supply.
F.B.I Agent LEE
It's a good thing you stopped it from getting out of this park now we
know we have to keep it contained.
Go on, After you give Agent Simms your statements you kids can go home.
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INT.FBI CAR- NIGHT
Tim and Samantha sit in the car awaiting questioning discussing there
horrific night.
TIM
I still can't believe all of this is happening who would have ever
thought we will see dark days like this?
SAMANTHA
It's over now Tim We have to put this past us and go on with our lives.
Agent Simms walks over to the kids in the car Tim and Samantha steps out.
EXT. PARK- NIGHT
FBI AGENT SIMMS
Okay so in your own words what happened?
Tim looks at Sam then turns back to the agent.
TIM
Actually I was so traumatized from that I really can't explain I'll put
it to you like this.
We move up tight on Tim as he explains what he saw.
TIM (CONT'D)
It was unexplainable what I can tell you is it is not from this world and
it was hungry, very hungry.
FBI AGENT SIMMS
What was it some kind of dog..
SAMANTHA
It's been along day can we go home now.
TIM
What ever it was I took care of it real good, Go look in that Museum and
see for yourself.
SAMANTHA
Now are we finish now mr?
F.b.I. Agent Simms gives The Two a mean look.
FBI AGENT SIMMS
Well I guess that's it you kids are free to go.
Tim and Sam Walk out of frame as FBI Agent Simms looks at the statement
shaking his head.
Ext. HARTFIELDLANE Cemetery - DAY
From a far we see several mourners at the funerals of STEVE, DEAN, MIKE
and SHAWN.
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Ext. HARTFIELDLANE Cemetery - DAY
we pan through the mourners wearing all black with sunglasses as the
priest reads the deceased teens their last rites, all are grieving SAM
wipes her tears with a tissue as Tim comforts her.
Priest
We are hear to say our final farewells to four young people who have
been stricken with tragedy as we commence there body's to the ground ,
earth to earth ashes to ashes dust to dust may they rest in peace amen.
After dropping roses on the Graves all the mourners begin to walk way
from the gravesite as TIM hugs SAMANTHA
Tim
It's OK SAM , everything is going to be okay..
We see the slain teens Parents shake hands with the PRIEST as he walks
over to SAMANTHA and TIM holding his BIBLE.
PRIEST
Now I know its been hard for you too , what you have been going through
I'm in TOWN anytime you need me, Whenever you want to talk feel free to
stop by the Church.
SAMANTHA
Thanks father.
SAMANTHA gives him a hug and TIM shakes his hand.
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Ext. Cemetery- Day
TIM and SAM walk through the Cemetery.
Tim
so where do we go from here?
Samantha
I just can't believe this it's like one big nightmare, like a bad dream I
can't wake up from. You think that thing is gone
for good ?
Tim
I really hope so because if its not this town is fucked with a capital
F..
Ext. The Bridge/ Highway - Day
Tim and Sam walk across the bridge enjoying the view.
Tim
Sorry Sam the whole situation was my fault now we have four dead friends
What a way to come back home.
The gang would be proud of us.
Sam
Well there goes old times.
Sam turns around in reflection of the hellish night she had suffered.
Looking at the end of something she adored the most "Hartfield Park."
Across Screen Reads- " Later that Day".
EXT. Lake- Sunset
A Group of Towns People drags the crate into the lake pushing it into the
water.
We watch the Crate sink to the bottom of the lake.
While doing so one of the Towns persons cut's there hands on the Crate.
Towns Person #1
Oh Dam…
Towns Person#2
What happened..
Town Person#1
I cut my hand on that dam Crate.
We see the blood dripping from his cut hand into the water in [S.M.]
Towns Person#2
Your okay it's just a cut..
It's getting Dark let's get out of here.
As the Men walk away we zoom up on the lake seeing the Creatures hand
come out the LAKE AS IT GROWLS LOUDLY, THE TWO MEN TURN AROUND IN FEAR
ALL FITTING IN THE SAME FRAME SEEING NOTHING.
TOWN PERSON#1
What the Hell is that ?
TOWNS PERSON#2
What are you hearing things I didn't hear anything.
TOWNS PERSON#1
This place is fucking creepy
I'm getting the hell out of here.
TOWNS PERSON#2
No wait, We should have destroyed that crate, You know make sure that
thing is really dead.
Whatever that thing was inside there it killed over a dozen people.
TOWNS PERSON#1
Listen we was giving pacific orders to dump that thing in the lake and
that's what we did our job is done here let's get the hell out of here.
Where's the flashlight?
TOWNS PERSON#2
Dam I must have dropped it in the lake.
TOWNS PERSON#1
So how the hell are we suppose to see our way back through the woods.
We need that flashlight.
TOWNS PERSON#2
Alright I will go back and get it.
The Towns person walks back towards the lake to look for the flash light
when he gets to lake side he see's the flashlight lying in the water he
picks it up and looks at it.
TOWNS PERSON#1(O.S.)
Did you find it.
TOWNS PERSON#2
Yes but it's broken looks like something chewed it up or something plus
it has severe water damage.
As the towns person messes with the flashlight the creature jumps out of
the water pulling the townsperson under.
Ripping his arm from his body, The other towns person see's what went
down and makes a run for it.
EXT. WOODS- NIGHT
The other towns person makes a run for it through the woods in fear until
he trips, While on the ground he see's hatched eggs every where and the
Creatures green blood.
We move in tight on the towns person looking up from lying on the ground
screaming, Something hits the towns person in the face as we cut to black
quickly.
We have reached--
THE END.
BASED ON CHARACTERS CREATED BY
RAKEEM JH LAWRENCE
TITLES/CREDITS.
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