F2Final Draft, Inc. Final Draftm6FFFF000000060002000177AA000000000085000000002000110190499000480048-24F1DA3200F4-11D271D2A1D271D2A1563064006471941DA33E7FFFF0106017DD000010000011F000000040A4F408404F200B0B39FA1303CC003AFF200B0B39D0A4F10F9408401B0B200114F39667E03CC0051143200114F32D010F9172E40840114F200165739F62103CE006163320016572850172E21574084016572001DA339DA29038E0081D8B2001DA32000000200000A5500000000A4F, Criminal Intent written by Matthew Skibicki Matthew Skibicki MatthewSkibicki@gmail.com ACT I FADE IN: INT. Therapist room. DAY MARIUS ULDERICO uncomfortably lies on a therapist couch, he fiddles with a PILLOW to find a comfortable position. MARIUS ULDERICO I think... its because... I had a tough father. THERAPIST calmly smiles, MARIUS becomes distracted by the pillow. THERAPIST Yes, yes, bad childhoods often lead to that type of anti-social behavior. MARIUS becomes increasingly agitated with the pillow. The therapist looks elsewhere in thought. THERAPIST (CONTD) ...But Listen Marius MARIUS begins to palm the pillow to try and flatten it. THERAPIST I think you should invite this McGriffin character to your home, make a mends. Infact, you should bake him a cake. MARIUS begins to irrationally punch the pillow. THERAPIST (CONTD) You know ancient Hindu cultures used to offer cakes to their God for forgiveness of their sins. MARIUS tries the pillow again. THERAPIST Yes, this is what I want you to do this week MARIUS, contract Mc -- MARIUS ,angry and unsatisfied, throws the pillow and interrupts. MARIUS ULDERICO Do you have any other (beat) fucking pillows?! THERAPIST Marius! Calm down, you have to learn to control that anger! MARIUS ULDERICO Calm down?! Ill show you whatll calm me down! MARIUS pulls out the Rolls Royce of hand guns with a thick, glinting silencer mounted on the end. He aims it at the therapists head The THERAPIST drops to the ground cowering. THERAPIST Please Marius! Im only your therapist! Marius squirts the therapists with the water pistol as if its some type of stress release. MARIUS looks at the gun and then drops it. MARIUS ULDERICO you of all people should know Im done with that business. Therapist returns to his chair... THERAPIST Yes..yes.. MARIUS ULDERICO Look doc, McGriffin has cost me a lot, locked away my brother to rot. If there was anyone I could have my way with.. Therapist straightens himself up. TherAPIST Your behind that MARIUS, its time to integrate into a more stable way of life. You dont want to end up back in prison? Do you? FADE TO BLACK. FADE IN: Int. Police squad car. Night A lone squad car is parked in a empty car lot. OFFICER MCGRIFFIN (V.O.) It could have been a fucking nightmare, I wasnt sure if I had even woken up. LIEUTENANT FRANK Report in Mcgriffin! OFFICER MCGRIFFIN appears from the backseat of the car, disgruntled and sleepy, he leans over for the police radio. 0002000006B000000A4F6AA, OFFICER MCGRIFFIN Yeah? whats the matter boss? POLICE RADIO VOICE McGriffin - we uh, got a little assignment for you OFFICER MCGRIFFIN (V.O.) He said ULDERICO was out on parole. McGriffins appears alarmed. The lieutenant continues to talk while McGriffins voice overs superimpose. OFFICER MCGRIFFIN (V.O.) I should have known better, You cant keep scum like that behind bars, everyone just gets paid off. McGriffin in deep thought. OFFICER MCGRIFFIN (V.O.) I wasnt for sale like everyone else in the department, especially not with a guy like ULDERICO. The bodies just stacked up with him. Social workers, lawyers, juries and sometimes even their families, he killed people like me...people who refused his business. Evidence photographs of dead flash impose over McGriffins face. POLICE RADIO VOICE ...are you even listening to me McGriffin? McGriffin sidetracked, has not paid attention. OFFICER MCGRIFFIN Yeah, yeah...Ill do this my own way lieutenant. POLICE RADIO VOICE No wait...McGriff- McGriffin puts the radio down. He steps out of the car and lights a cigarette. OFFICER MCGRIFFIN I knew ULDERICO, his cost me a lot. Flash superimpose of daughter, wife. OFFICER MCGRIFFIN (V.O.) ...and I wasnt prepared for him to take more. McGriffin flicks the cigarette. OFFICER MCGRIFFIN What was I going to do? Lets just say justice doesnt always come by the book. FADE TO BLACK. ACT II FADE IN: INT. ULDERICOs HOME - Kitchen. Night The floor of a kitchen is seen from inside an oven, a cake is baking off center of the shot. INT. MCGRIFFINS APARTMENT. NIGHT MCGRIFFIN walks to - and opens a closet. He pulls out a shoe box from a number of other shoe boxes. 00020000063B000010F9635,CROSS-CUT BETWEEN MCGRIFFIN AND ULDERICO A wide eyed, ULDERICO appears, checking on the cake from outside the oven. MCGRIFFIN opens the box, and lifts up a gun on the palm of his hands as if it were holy. ULDERICO takes the cake out of the oven and holds it with great satisfaction. MCGRIFFIN, smoking and drinking, begins to shine the gun with a rag and some polish. ULDERICO begins to frost the cake, we see him writing in icing new beginning. MCGRIFFIN loads a magazine. ULDERICO leaves his cake on the bench. FADE TO BLACK. ACT III FADE IN: EXT. ULDERICOS HOME. NIGHT A shot of the house front, the window from the front room glows. CUT TO: Int. Front room (contd) ULDERICO sits on the couch reading a book. Music is playing in the sitting room. ULDERICO observes the time then leaves the room. CuT TO: EXT. ULDERICOs HOME (conTD) The front of MCGRIFFINS SQUAD CAR imposes into the shot. Squeaky breaks stop the car. MCGRIFFIN steps out and the camera moves up to track MCGRIFFIN. MCGRIFFIN calmly approaches the front door, pauses before knocking and decides to look through the window. CUT TO: POV shot: empty room, music playing. BACK TO: MCGRIFFIN looks at the door OFFICER MCGRIFFIN (V.O.) Ulderico was a smart man, I had a feeling he knew I was coming. CUT TO: MCGRIFFIN climbing over a fence. CUT TO: MCGRIFFIN dusts himself off as he walks around the side of the house, OFFICER MCGRIFFIN (V.O.) Im sure ULDERICO has used this one, surprise entrence. he stops at a window and cups his vision to look through. CUT TO: INT. Room. (contd) 000200000A2F0000172EA29,Slow zoom out of MCGRIFFIN peering into a room, the room is lifeless and dark. BACK TO: MCGRIFFIN satisfied his found an entry point, casually breaks the hinges and climbs through. McGriffin begins to move through the house, making slow, discreet footsteps. Household furniture is draped in white cloth, old paintings hang on the wall. A painting on the wall, possibly The Scream, as McGriffins shadow passes by it. McGriffin comes to the kitchen and finds a handgun on the bench. OFFICER MCgriFFIN (V.O.) A favorite of his. He picks up the gun and puts it in his jacket. MCGRIFFIN, gun drawn, cautiously approaches the front room where the lights are on and the music is playing. The music simultaneously reaches a climax as... MCGRIFFIN steps out and points his gun into the empty room. From deep panic to relief, he puts away his gun. A TOILET FLUSH is heard and MCGRIFFIN scrambles to turn off the lights and music. He calms himself down and sits in one of the armchairs. ULDERICO emerges, squinting into the darkness. MARIUS ULDERICO McGriffin? OFFICER MCGRIFFIN Ulderico. MARIUS ULDERICO Oh McGriffin, howd you get in?..oh Im grateful that youve come... ULDERICO sits down, closes his book. MCGRIFFIN stands up, begins to survey the room for possible mobsters. An awkward silence between the men ensues. OFFICER MCGRIFFIN Hed been expecting me...was it a setup? MARIUS breaks silence. MARIUS ULDERICO Look McGriffin, theres something I want to give you. McGriffin steps back on these words and begins to reach into his coat. MARIUS ULDERICO (CONTD) If youd just follow me into the kitc - McGriffin interrupts. OFFICER MCGRIFFIN No, theres something I want to give you first. McGriffin, in smooth style, pulls out the Rolls Royce of hand guns with a thick, glinting silencer mounted on the end and aims it at ULDERICOs head. MARIUS ULDERICO What are you doing? Tension in McGriffins face, his sweaty palm grips the gun, his finger positions itself on the trigger... McGriffin begins to squirt water on Uldericos face. ULDERICO is unamused as McGriffin nervously continues shooting little trickles of water onto his face. MCGRIFFIN, becomes anxious and starts to feel his jacket for his pistol in a state of desperation. ULDERICO hastily stands up, he pulls out a small hand revolver tucked into the back of his pants and shoots McGriffins through the head, blood splatters across the drapes. FADE TO BLACK. Noise of sirens and police radios are heard. FADE IN: INT. PRISON CELL. DAY ULDERICO sits awkwardly with his THERAPIST. FADE TO BLACK. 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