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Episode 1
03/02/02
[The Crescent Intro]
EXT. CHESTNUT CRESCENT MORNING SATURDAY
JIM STEVENSON (21) has his head in the hood of his car he is fixing
it. Pregnant CARLA FAETLY (20) walks up behind him with a cup of tea.
CARLA
Jim.
Jim takes his head out.
JIM
Thanks Carla love. (He takes the tea and has a sip).
He leans on the car.
JIM
How far are you now then?
CARLA
(Feels her stomach). Dr. Cane says it's going to be soon, any day
now.
CRAIG REIDER (29) walks up to them. (He is black).
CRAIG
All right, Jim?
JIM
Yeah fine, Craig, you?
Carla seems uncomfortable at the sight of Craig.
CARLA
Well, I'll go and get the dinner started.
She walks into no. 20.
CRAIG
Well, I'll see you around.
JIM
Yeah, bye mate.
INT. NO. 22
Loud music is playing. Craig comes through the front door.
CRAIG
Turn that bloody racket off!
The music turns off and JAY REIDER (15) runs down the stairs and
through the front door, he slams it shut.
CRAIG
Jay!
He walks into the living room and sits on the sofa. GWEN REIDER (35)
comes in.
CRAIG
Oh, you're back.
GWEN
Can't hide away forever.
CRAIG
Gwen, we got to sort this out. For Jay's sake.
GWEN
It'd be for Jay's sake for you to just leave.
CRAIG
(Stands up and points his finger at her). Now you listen to me! I've
been there for him since his dad moved away.
GWEN
Yeah, but you're not his DAD!
CRAIG
I'm holding this family together!
GWEN
NO YOU'RE NOT! YOU'RE TEARING IT APART!
CRAIG
I WANTED TO SORT THIS OUT!
GWEN
MAYBE I DON'T WANT IT SORTED!
CRAIG
WELL THEN YOU'RE THE ONE WHO SHOULD LEAVE!
GWEN
DON'T BE STUPID, EVER SINCE TOU TURNED UP THIS FAMILY WENT DOWNHILL!
EXT. THE 'WRECK' PARK
Jay rides into the park on his bike. He stops and sits on the bench.
DENISE DERLEC (15) walks over.
DENISE
Hi, Jay.
JAY
Hey, Denise.
She sits down beside him.
DENISE
I was wondering, you wanna come to mine and Delia's 15th?
JAY
Where is it?
DENISE
Our house. Mum and dad are eating out.
JAY
OK then.
DENISE
Great it's tonight at eight.
JAY
Tonight? That's a little short notice isn't it?
DENISE
Well if you want, you don't have to get the present, well not tonight
anyway.
JAY
No, that's OK I'll get one.
DENISE
OK, see you.
She stands and walks away.
INT. THE GOOSE PUB
SARA GERLEC (39) is sat at the bar. The barmaid, SUZY FRET (19),
walks over.
SUZY
What can I get you, Sara?
SARA
Just a half pint of lager and I'd better be off, Suzy, the twits'
15th.
SUZY
Oh yeah, the twins will be 15 now. They're getting older now aren't
they?
SARA
Yeah, I can tell, when they grow older, I grow greyer.
They laugh.
INT. NO. 18
DELIA GERLEC (15) is stood on a chair sticking a piece of paper up
that says 'HAPPY BIRTHDAY!'
DELIA
God, where is mum? DAD?
ANTHONY GERLEC (40) walks in.
ANTHONY
[Sighs] What is it now?
DELIA
Could you go down the pub and tell mum I'm still waiting!
ANTHONY
She'll be home soon.
DELIA
Soon? SOON, isn't good enough.
ANTHONY
Why can't you be more like your sister, Denise?
DELIA
ANTHONY GERLEC! I WON'T TOLERATE YOUR INSOLENCE!
ANTHONY
OK, OK, I'll go.
He turns just as Sara walks through the door.
ANTHONY
Look, she's here now!
SARA
Right, I'll get the food sorted.
DELIA
Thank you mum!
Denise comes in.
DELIA
'Bout time you showed up! We can't do everything ourselves!
DENISE
Why, what have you done?
DELIA
Look around!
DENISE
But nothing has been done!
DELIA
Just get to work!
INT. THE GOOSE PUB
Suzy is pulling a pint for JACK DAINES (23); Suzy puts it onto the
bar in front of him.
SUZY
There you go, Jack. That'll be a quid twenty-five thanks.
Jack puts the money into her hand.
JACK
Thanks love.
He takes the pint and goes and sits down with his friends, MICK
FERNES (23) and CHRIS JAIMS (22).
JACK
So what've you two got planned for tonight?
CHRIS
Nowt, you?
JACK
Got a date with Jennifer.
MICK
Jennifer Deduiles?
JACK
That's the one.
MICK
God you're a lucky man!
CHRIS
You're seriously going out with Jenny?
JACK
I am indeed. We met up at a club in Blackpool.
MICK
Wish I had a chance to go with someone as good looking as her.
JACK
Your time will come my friend.
Suzy is collecting glasses.
MICK
OI, Suzy!
She walks over.
SUZY
What Mick?
MICK
You heard about Jack going out with Jenny?
SUZY
Jenny Deduilles?
MICK
That's right.
SUZY
But isn't she going out with Callum Finley?
CHRIS
Hey that's right.
Jack starts laughing.
MICK
You liar!
JACK
Had you for a while! But seriously I am moving to the same street as
her and I got talking to her in the club in Blackpool. And from what
I heard her and Callum are on the rocks so she could be single any
day now so I'm going to ask her out.
CHRIS
Can I move with you?
They laugh.
INT. NO. 24
JENNY DEDUILLES (21) is sat on the sofa with the newspaper on her
lap; she has a phone to her ear.
JENNY
[Into phone] Hi, I'm Jenny Deduilles; I'm calling about the job offer
in the paper for a waitress.
She pauses whilst the person on the other end speaks.
JENNY
Well I've worked in a pub before.
Silence.
JENNY
Yeah that sounds great. When will you need me to start? [Pause]
Monday? Great, no I have nothing planned on Monday. What time do you
want me to be there? OK that's fine, right bye.
She puts the phone down and stands up.
JENNY
YES! I got a job! Finally!
INT. NO. 22
Gwen is in the kitchen at the cooker. She bends down and opens the
oven, lots of smoke comes out. She grabs a towel and wafts the smoke
away.
GWEN
Damn!
She turns the oven off and reaches in for the food. She pulls out a
burnt chicken on a tray and slams it down on the side.
INT. LIVING ROOM
Craig is watching TV on the sofa. Gwen walks in with a plate of the
burnt chicken. She puts it on Craig's lap. He looks at her in
disgust.
CRAIG
You expect me to eat that or draw a black and white picture with it?
GWEN
It's not that bad!
CRAIG
Not that bad? It's bloody charcoal!
She takes it off his lap.
GWEN
You try making tea then!
CRAIG
I'd make it better than that!
Gwen throws the plate down onto the floor; it smashes.
CRAIG
What are you
?!
GWEN
I'VE JUST ABOUT HAD ENOUGH OF YOU!
Craig stands up.
CRAIG
WELL I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU SO TAKE YOUR BAD COOKING AND SHOVE IT!
I'm leaving!
GWEN
Well don't come back!
Craig storms out of the room. Gwen collapses down onto the sofa
crying. Jay walks into the house.
JAY
What's going on?
GWEN
Nothing dear.
CRAIG
Nothing? NOTHING? I'm leaving and she says that's nothing!
JAY
What? Where are you going?
Craig storms upstairs.
CRAIG
I'm getting out of this house!
JAY
But you can't go!
INT. LANDING
Jay follows Craig up.
JAY
You can't! I can't not have a dad!
CRAIG
This morning you where all up for me leaving!
JAY
I didn't mean it!
CRAIG
Jay, I'm not your dad, I never will be.
JAY
You're as good as to me.
CRAIG
I'm sorry it's done now, your mother and me aren't right for each
other!
JAY
Well can I lend some money?
CRAIG
For what?
JAY
It's Denise and Delia's birthday tonight.
Craig sighs and reaches into his pocket, he pulls out a ten-pound
note and gives it him.
CRAIG
I haven't got any change, take that.
JAY
I'll pay you back when
when I next see you.
CRAIG
Don't worry about paying me back, I don't mind.
JAY
Nice one thanks Craig.
INT. NO. 20
Carla is stood at the cooker; she is also making tea. Jim walks in
and hugs her from behind.
JIM
Go and have a rest love, I'll do the tea.
She turns around and hugs him properly.
CARLA
Thanks love.
She kisses him. He rubs her belly.
JIM
Not long, soon we'll be a family!
Carla smiles but it is obvious she is hiding something.
CARLA
Yeah, it'll be great.
She pulls away and walks into the living room.
JIM
Are you OK? You don't seem very happy.
She doesn't answer him.
INT. NO. 18
Lots of decorations have been put up and Delia is going through a
case of CDs. Anthony walks in with a load of bottles of coke and
lemonade etc.
Denise walks in; she has got all dressed up for the party. She walks
to Delia.
DENISE
What have you chosen?
DELIA
Oh just a bit of something I'm into.
Denise picks some up and looks at them. She is shocked.
DENISE
There is no way you'll get our friends to listen to this crap all
night!
She grabs a couple of CDs out of the box.
DENISE
Now this is more like it!
She slots it into the CD player and presses play. Some dance music
comes on. She starts dancing.
DENISE
Excellent!
Delia presses stop.
DENISE
I'm just getting into things.
DELIA
The party hasn't started yet!
She storms out of the room.
DENISE
This is better than the crap you chose!
INT. CD/VIDEO SHOP
Jay comes in. He walks to the rack of CDs and picks one off the shelf
he scans it over
deciding whether to buy it or not. TIM PETERS (15) walks in. He sees
Jay and walks up to him.
TIM
All right Jay?
JAY
Oh, hi Tim.
TIM
I take it your going to the twits' birthday party?
JAY
Yeah, I'm just deciding what to buy.
TIM
Yeah it's hard to know what girls are into.
JAY
Do you think we should buy them CDs?
TIM
I think they've got enough CDs.
Jay puts the CD back on the rack.
JAY
I suppose you're right.
TIM
Let's go and look around town eh?
They walk out of the shop.
EXT. STREET
They walk up the street.
TIM
We could put our money together and buy them something each.
JAY
There's some Walkman's going for £9.99 each in the Co-op.
TIM
How much you got?
JAY
A tenner.
TIM
Great, let's go then.
They walk to the Co-op.
EXT. CHESTNUT CRESCENT
The boys walk onto the street with a plastic bag. A few younger kids
are playing football and the ball rolls to them, Jay kicks it back.
TIM
You want to come to my house to wrap the presents?
JAY
Yeah OK.
They walk to no. 16 and walk in.
INT. NO. 16
The boys walk into the hallway and Tim's mum; JULIE PETERS (32) walks
into the hallway.
JULIE
So what you got them then?
Tim shows them the Walkmans.
JULIE
Ooh! They'll be happy about them, how much did they cost?
TIM
Tenner each.
JAY
We put our money together.
JULIE
Hadn't you go and get ready, Jay?
JAY
I'm ready.
JULIE
You going like that?
JAY
I don't think I should go home for a while.
JULIE
Have your parents been arguing again?
JAY
Yeah.
JULIE
Well I'm sure they'll work something out.
JAY
Actually I think this time it's for good.
Him and Tim walk upstairs.
JULIE
(Shouting) You want your tea here then?
JAY
OK then.
INT. NO. 18'S BACKYARD
Sara is taking some washing off the line. Julie runs up to the fence.
JULIE
Sara! Come here quick!
Sara rushes over.
SARA
What is it?
JULIE
Guess what I just heard!
SARA
What?
JULIE
That Gwen and Craig are going for a split!
SARA
Never!
JULIE
No really
Denise walks out into the backyard.
JULIE
Jay is upstairs; he said that he thinks the split is for good, no
more making up.
SARA
Well, I saw it coming really!
JULIE
Yeah they weren't the best of couples were they?
DENISE
What is this? Gossip Central? I think they're going through a bad
enough time already without you two gaping on behind their backs.
SARA
Oh Denise, has you better not go inside and help your father with the
sandwiches?
Denise sighs and goes back in.
SARA
Well, Julie, you heard who's moving into number 14?
JULIE
No who?
SARA
Jack Daines!
JULIE
Really? CORR if I were twenty years younger!
SARA
I know!
Suddenly the upstairs window of No. 16 opens and Tim leans out.
TIM
Mum! Stop telling the world our personal life and get our tea
started!
JULIE
I'll have to go, Sara, see you.
SARA
Bye.
Julie and Sara both go back inside.
INT. NO. 18 EVENING
Sara and Anthony are stood at the door ready to go out. At the moment
only Tim and Jay are there.
DENISE
Bye mum! Bye dad, have a nice time.
DELIA
Yeah, see you.
ANTHONY
You'd lot better behave yourself OK?
DELIA
OK.
Anthony goes out to the car.
SARA
(Whispering) The booze is under the sink, if the coppers come round
get rid of it OK?
DENISE
Thanks mum.
SARA
Enjoy yourself.
She goes.
DELIA
Finally! Let's party!
INT. NO. 20
Carla is sat on the sofa; Jim has his arm around her.
CARLA
You can go down pub if you want.
JIM
I don't want to leave you, what if it starts to happen?
CARLA
It won't and if it does, I'll call the ambulance!
JIM
If you're sure.
CARLA
Absolutely!
He kisses her and stands up.
JIM
See you later then.
He walks out of the room, gets his coat on and leaves. Carla takes a
sip of tea from her mug. The music from next door becomes loud and
banging. She sighs.
CARLA
God, they're starting early!
She gasps and grabs her stomach. She begins to sweat.
CARLA
No!
The pain comes harder and she begins to spill her tea slightly. Soon
she screams and drops the mug smashing it on the floor.
INT. NO. 18
Lots of teenagers are here now. They are dancing and shouting. There
is a bottle of vodka on the side and lots of plastic disposable cups
have been crushed. Denise makes her way through the crowd over to Jay
who is sat alone on a chair.
DENISE
(Shouting over the music) Jay! Do you want to go outside?
Jay nods and stands up, as they walk through the house to the
backdoor, they pass Delia, she smiles.
DELIA
You two behave yourselves!
She laughs.
INT. BACKYARD
Jay and Denise come out and sit on a bench.
DENISE
I hear Craig and your mum are splitting up.
Jay seems unhappy.
JAY
Yeah, they've been arguing for a while now.
DENISE
So how are you doing?
JAY
Fine. I'm sure I'll still stay in touch with Craig though; he's
always been a sort of father figure.
Denise smiles and rests her head on his shoulder. Jay looks down at
her face and Denise looks up at him. He puts his hand on her cheek
and brings her head up to face his. Denise kisses him forcefully.
INT. NO. 20
Carla is on the floor crawling frantically towards a phone on the
table. She grabs out for it and knocks it off the table, she puts the
receiver to her ear and listens for the tone but it doesn't come. She
looks under the table and sees the wire has been unplugged. She cries
out in pain and annoyance. She gives up and begins to crawl towards
the door.
INT. NO. 18
Delia and Tim are stood in the hallway.
TIM
So you're Delia right?
DELIA
That's right, Tim.
EXT. FRONTPATH OF NO. 20
The door opens and Carla crawls out onto the pavement, she pulls
herself up against the door and tries as fast as she can to get to
next door.
INT. NO. 18
Hard knocks come on the door.
DELIA
POLICE! Quick hide the booze!
People run around quickly, someone turns the music off.
Delia opens the door and Carla falls in.
CARLA
HELP ME!
DELIA
Carla! What's going on?
CARLA
What do you think Denise?
DELIA
Delia!
Carla screams loud.
INT. BACKYARD
Jay and Denise stop kissing when they hear the scream.
JAY
What's going on?
DENISE
I don't know!
They run indoors.
INT. LIVING ROOM
Someone has helped Carla into the lounge and lead her on the sofa.
Delia is ecstatic.
DELIA
Call the ambulance!
Someone takes out a mobile phone and dials a number.
DELIA
DENISE!
Denise runs in.
DELIA
Denise, get upstairs and get cushions and blankets!
Denise and Jay run upstairs.
DELIA
Get the chair cushions on the floor and lie Carla down properly!
Two teens do so. Carla slumps down and lies on the cushions.
CARLA
Call Jim!
DELIA
Where is he?
CARLA
The pub!
DELIA
(To the teen who rang the ambulance) Get to the hallway, there's a
phone diary on the table, look for the goose pub! QUICK!
Denise and Jay return with the blankets and pillows. Delia takes them
and gets Carla comfy.
DELIA
Get her pants off!
A boy goes down to do so.
CARLA
Get off me!
She takes them off herself.
INT. GOOSE PUB
The phone rings and Suzy answers it.
SUZY
Hello? Yeah. [Pause] WHAT? Yeah hold on. (She puts the phone to her
chest) JIM!
Jim hurries over.
JIM
What?
SUZY
Carla's gone into labour!
JIM
What? Where is she?
SUZY
She's at number 18, the ambulance is on their way!
Jim runs out of the pub into the street.
INT. NO. 18
Carla is screaming.
DELIA
PUSH!
TEEN
God I CAN SEE IT!
DENISE
Keep going Carla!
Carla screams hysterically.
DELIA
It's coming! It's coming! It's out! It's out!
Suddenly the hysterical smile on her face fades.
CARLA
What is it?
DELIA
Well it's a boy but it's, it's a
it's black
CARLA
NO! Please, it's just
just in the shade! Please tell me it's NOT!
We hear a baby crying. Carla's eyes dart to Jay.
JAY
Craig?
Carla slowly nods. Jay gets up and runs out of the house. Delia lays
a towel out and wraps the baby up. She hands him to Carla who hugs
him dearly. We hear Ambulance sirens outside and see flashing lights.
EXT. CHESTNUT CRES
Carla has been loaded into the anbulance with her baby. Jim runs up
the street and into the ambulance.
JIM
Carla!
MEDIC
Are you a relation?
JIM
I'm the father!
MEDIC
I don't think you are, mate.
JIM
What're you talking about?
He looks at Carla who tearfully shakes her head.
JIM
What?
He goes up to Carla's bedside and she shows him the black baby. Jim
gasps.
JIM
But I, you said
Craig?
Carla nods and bursts into tears.
Jim's face turns angry.
JIM
CRAIG? I'LL KILL HIM!
He runs out of the van.
CARLA
JIM! JIM!
Lots of teens watch as Jim runs inside.
THE END OF EPISODE 1
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