How to Talk to Women
When an old trunk is unearthed at his construction site, a lonely guy’s life takes a turn for the better.
Bradley Taylor is a lovely guy: kind heart, good job, real nice home. The problem is: it’s a home that’s empty. What Bradley’s missing is a lady love. Someone to share his life with. Sure, Bradley’s got a personality that makes him a keeper: but he gets tongue-tied each time a prospect comes along.
Still, Bradley’s being proactive – doing his best to improve his chances and skills. Including reading a self-help book – unimaginatively titled: How to Talk to Women.
A no-brainer, easy-fix.
Or is it too simplified? After all, the best laid plans of Mice and Men are often complicated by real Life.
Especially when Bradley finally meets the girl of his dreams: Agent Dana Parker. The setting: a construction site. The situation: the discovery of a dead body which may – or may not – be Jimmy Hoffa.
Almost immediately, Bradley sets out to impress Dana. But he’s busy being anyone but himself, and messing up… big time. Even funnier is the other side of the equation: that Dana’s perusing a self-help book herself: ‘ Be Irresistible to Men’. And she’s diligently following all the steps.
Even if that results in giving Bradley the world’s worst massage, in an awkward attempt to flirt:
Vinny approaches as Taylor tries to stand.
What da fuck happened to you?
Agent Parker gave me a neck rub.
Holy shit. She fucked you up.
You gotta help me. I don’t want
her to know she hurt me.
Ironic isn’t it? Kindred spirits and crossed wires. Two would-be lovers trying soooooo hard to connect that wrong signals and mixed messages whistle like missiles through the air.
In the end, neither knows where they stand. Or in Bradley’s case, how to stand.
Will these two losers in love end up winning hearts? Or at least score a first date?
Get this page turner under construction as soon as you can. Sure, the setting’s so unromantic it hurts. But if you wanna push boundaries on genres, then Marnie Mitchell-Lister’s your gal. With this short film, you’re building something meant to last. Think Two Weeks Notice – and hammer your way to festival success!
Pages : 6
Budget: The setting’s really up to you and how much of a construction site
you want. It’s easy to keep it real simple with the focus on the two main
About the reviewer: Elaine Clayton is a London-based screenwriter, who has written several well received shorts and is currently doing a Masters in Playwriting and Scriptwriting. Comfortable in a broad range of genres, Elaine has an innate sense of structure and arc development. Contact her at Elaine_clayton(AT) hotmail(.)co(.)uk
About the writer: An award winning writer AND photographer, Marnie Mitchell Lister’s website is available at brainfluffs.com. Marnie’s had 5 shorts produced (so far) and placed Semi-final with her features in Bluecat.
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