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Monday, October 26, 2015

Eleven Eleven – Short Script Review (Available for Production) - posted by wonkavite

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Eleven Eleven

Shortly after being tricked into activating a curse she thought was to bring good luck, a young woman learns she has eleven hours and eleven days to reverse the spell before a demon comes for her soul.

After you’ve read a significant number of shorts – especially in the horror genre – certain patterns tend to emerge.  Usually, it’s a monster or creature we’ve all seen before.  Vampires, zombies, serial killers; the usual suspects.  Also, the stories tend to be pretty simple and brief…focusing on a quick twist at the end.

Eleven-Eleven avoids both of these clichés.  Yes, the “big bad” is a monster-demon type entity – but one that’s unique.  And, at 23 pages, this is one horror script that develops its world – weaving a complete story that’s more than just a literary jump scare.

Although there’s a cast of characters, Eleven-Eleven primarily follows Tina, a personal fitness trainer.  Tina’s world gets turned upside down when she witnesses her blind date’s strange habit – touching something red whenever the clock strikes 11:11.  He tells her it’s for good luck. Needless to say, Tina finds his belief off-putting and weird- but gives it a try, just as a joke.  At which point her world gets turned upside down…

Days later, Tina finds herself fighting for her life – and struggling to find the answers that will help her lift a deadly curse…

Want more?  Then you’re gonna have to open this one. Because I’m not going to give it away.

About the writer: Our very own James Williams (IMDB credits here.) With both shorts and features to his name, James is perhaps best known for the So Pretty vampire trilogy of shorts – the third installment now in production!

Pages: 23

Budget: A number of characters and scenes.  While not overly expensive, this one shouldn’t be done on the cheap.  As for the FX – latex would be nice, but not really necessary.  There’s nothing here that some well-placed shadows couldn’t handle…

READ THE SCRIPT HERE – AND DON’T FORGET TO COMMENT!!

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2 Comments so far

1.

Debra Johnson
October 26th, 2015 at 1:09 pm

Wow. I could NOT take my eyes off the pages. I could totally see this on film. Good luck and I hope it gets picked up soon.

2.

KP Mackie
October 27th, 2015 at 10:44 pm

Intriguing twist of a monster-story.
Also a terrific example of anticipation. It’s wonderful to read and look forward to discovering where a story is going.
Well done! 🙂

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