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Sunday, March 18, 2012

Seriously Wounded - posted by Don

Seriously Wounded The new b-movie web series has been filmed! This is based on the short script Seriously Wounded by Pia Cook (me) – A man on his way to surgery after having been shot in the head and leg panics when he founds out who shot him. 6 pages, pdf format (Short, Thriller, Horror)

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8 Comments so far

1.

aggy
March 24th, 2012 at 12:14 am

overall i liked it. could work on your camera angles a little bit. i thought some parts where funny. good job.

2.

banks
March 26th, 2012 at 1:47 am

in all honesty i thought you should have stayed with a man like in the script, i thought that it fit the story better but i still liked the film, I have no complaints for the female actress

3.

Valdore
April 12th, 2012 at 8:07 pm

I read the script which was well written. But I liked the film better due to the switching of the Dr.s charater to the beautiful nurse.. Sexy, fun and was well received here!

Nice job.

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Arthur
April 15th, 2012 at 7:21 pm

I wish I could be a pal and give you positive feedback, but the truth of the matter is that you are a ripoff artist and to top it off, you are not even good at that. The eye patch reminds me of a little movie called Kill Bill. The camera work is generic and lacks a rhythm or emotional connection. It’s as if you just placed the camera where you wanted to without thinking through any motivations as to why. The performances are seriously over the top. Watch Tarantino and Rodriguez’s Grindhouse and notice that most of the performances are truthful, real. What is not real, which creates the comedy and the awkward moments to make the grindhouse a grindhouse happens to be the relationship of real performances juxtaposed to the false reality of the screenplay. This is not directing, this is not writing, this is just playing around.

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Pia
April 20th, 2012 at 11:29 am

Arthur,

thanks for chiming in and share your thoughts. I was wondering what you meant by “this is not writing”? I wrote the script, posted it at Simply Scripts and they found the script and this was their vision of it. I personally think they did a good job, but I’m no expert on film. Just curious what was wrong with the script and if you read it.

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Vamos al Cine
April 25th, 2012 at 4:06 pm

looks interesting…

7.

Lewis
May 3rd, 2012 at 7:38 am

lol no complaints on the female actress lulz :)

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Nnaji Excellence
September 12th, 2012 at 6:31 pm

I like all this seriously, and I also need a screen play to produce in a movie. Please help.

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